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Title: Erm...?
Reviewed By: Ashayuni15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...Okay. I am new to this site, so this is the first story I have ever read here. And this is my first review. This story is effing This story had my sides cracking up with laughter at times, and I love the intemsity and DRAMA of it all! I really do wish Inuyasha would just go-with-the-flow though...Lol, I need you to update ASAP, or I will pee with sheer anxeity. Email me when ya do!
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Title: Erm...?
Reviewed By: Ashayuni15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 11:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Um...Okay. I am new to this site, so this is the first story I have ever read here. And this is my first review. This story is effing This story had my sides cracking up with laughter at times, and I love the intemsity and DRAMA of it all! I really do wish Inuyasha would just go-with-the-flow though...Lol, I need you to update ASAP, or I will pee with sheer anxeity. Email me when ya do!
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Title: Well
Reviewed By: Xryte [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 00:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story makes me have hope in online written works. It's one of the few gems I can really go out and read over and over again, and still find it entertaining. It's amazing how great your writing is, even with what life has thrown at you. Keep up the good work. Until the next time you update.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: March 26, 2008 09:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I saw that you updated. I fall in love with this story all over again with each new chapter. I wish they can get past everything though. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 01:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Recommended this to friends to read!!!!!!!!! I admire your brain!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 21:44 PDT
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This chapter is so sad, Kagome needs a hug. I kind of want to smack Inuyasha right now, but I also can see where he's coming from witch makes it difficult to justify smacking him. I did notice a few errors but nothing that I couldn't figure out, seeing as such things don't really bug me I didn't mind any.
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much! Poor Kagome! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much! Poor Kagome! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 18:59 PDT
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Very glad to see you updated. I hope all is well for you and you're in good health. Loved the update. The emotional ups and downs were like a smack in the face, nicely done there. I'd imagine it quite hard for perpetual optimist that your Kagome is to have come to such a jolting wake up call. She's fiery, but it seems like Inuyasha is starting to wear her down a bit. I wonder if he'll figure it out. Only time will tell, I guess. Thanks again, and be well.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 10:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... can't help feel bad for kagome... seems that things are still confusing between kagome & inuyasha... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Qui [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 09:57 PDT
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yayyy another amazing chapterrrr poor kagome poor inuyasha i hate their situation sooo much :<
update soon! Qui~
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. But, Kagome definitely has her work cut out for her. Poor Inuyasha has just been so hurt! I can't wait to see what you've got planned for them next. This is one of the best stories I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 07:17 PDT
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Talk about an emotional roller-coaster. First she's happy to be there, excited in fact. Then as she plans on dominating him, he says the one thing that brings their whole relationship into question. Now she's dejected and uncertain if that is what she wants from him as well as his feelings toward her. For him, it's the opposite, seeing as she has gone out of her way to make him comfortable, even showing him kindness that he's not experienced before (at least as far as we know). He questions her actions toward him and yet has the audacity to remind her of the 'rules' that harness him to the shrine. Does he even know what he wants? Is he really that blind to her actions, emotions, etc toward him or is he just hoping that it's a passing fad and not wanting to let himself get drawn into something that isn't real? Does he know what she and her family have already done for him? I doubt it, seeing as he prefers to stay in a place that tortures him on a regular basis. I'm sure that if he did, he'd see that she wants him to be happy. Although, I'm also sure that if he knew just how in depth her involvement with the Hanyou cause was, he'd be angry at her for going into something so dangerous as well as at himself for showing her what his life is like. I'm really enjoying this story and hope that all goes well for you as you update. Thanks again for this interesting take on the Inu/kag love story.
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3[[not logged in]] On: March 25, 2008 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww what a sweet yet rather depressing chapter. Lol. I really did like it though..I need to read more on what happens next. Hope you update soon! I really admire your writing and your ideas are just brilliant!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 04:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo wow i forgot that Kagome had those cuts... HA.... oooo Kagome gettin all depressed on us!! AWWWW..... how i would do anything to snuggled against Inuyasha lol
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