| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Inuyasha's adventures and misadventures at Kagome's were really fun to read. It was sad when Inuyasha got so upset when their sex got a bit out of hand....it must be so hard for him to accept that, after all the abuse he has suffered from some of his so-called "clients", that he might have actually ENJOYED rough sex, especially if Kagome was injured. His psyche is a mess and rightfully so after all the pain some of those awful bitches put him through. And, on top of that, Kagome is getting to see him at his most vulnerable. No, Inuyasha is notr a happy camper right now. And I can't wait to read more. I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 13:26 PDT
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OH MY GOD! I´m totally in love with this story. I have a personal policie. I usully don´t read an unfinished story because some times they stay that way unfinished and I end up frustrated. But I give this story a shot and I was mesmerize!Wonderfull story, the way you are writting is a terrific. I don´t have words to describe my awe. Please, and I´m begging here. Don´t let it be unfinished. I can´t wait so see the next chapter. Their time are comingo to an end...I hope not...I keep imagining if they will married...or will Inuyasha being adopted...or will he be back to Kikyou and the freak costumers...hope not the last option. Keep doing this great work. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 01:01 PDT
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I was so happy to open my email to see a new chapter from you. This chapter was wicked cool, and I'm getting sad that you made the chapter pass three weeks. And now Inuyasha is human. With their allotted month almost over, whats going to happen then? Will Inuyasha ever get to be free? Will Kagome's family adopt him? Will Kagome get pregnant? Will they get married? Sheesh I have so many questions... Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 23:36 PDT
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really enjoying this fic!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the new chapter. I hope the next one comes soon.
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Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 17:04 PDT
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Another great job with the new chapter and I like how it'z going^___^ Can't wait for the next update^_~
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so kawaii.. as always... i love your story.. i hope you update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome[Not logged in] On: August 04, 2007 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! so he gonna be human next chapter. Take advantageofit KAGOME! But how cna she lethim waste there time together. Being mad at each other. Its a waste. And the sex must of went down a grade. if you lost the spunk.. wats left ....well I guess he was being tender so .. he gets back some of his point s . haha. ;p I liked it.
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: August 04, 2007 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would read 100+ pages! This story is great, you're a talented writer WITH proper grammar(God, that's so hard to find these days)! I enjoy the fresh take on creativity and imagination and your style of lemons are tasteful as well as arousing. Too many mistake graphically erotic as crudely written bad language, I really hate that. Poor grammar to me is like nails on the chalkboard, I can't get through the first paragraph. Can't wait to see what interesting developments are in store next chapter, update soon! ;)
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 12:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, cliff hanger! Good chapter! Update Soon!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY u updated!!! I loved this chapter lol plz update again soon eveything is great Im just in love wioth ur writing lol so plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 10:41 PDT
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Hey, I liked this chapter so don't worry. It's good that he's at the shrine with Kagome it will give him some sense of what a family can be and give him some normalcy. He better not clam up because Kagome got a little scratched up during there forest rendevous. Spontaneity is the key in keeping a relationship alive. Well now that he's human let's hope he'll open up a bit more. Until next chapter,Happy writing.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Chapter. I love your story. And btw I would have loved to read 30 pages!! I can't stop reading your story. I actually went back and read it again because it is so great. Very different from other stories. Keep up the terrific work! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 07:44 PDT
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aw i love it! i wonder how kagome will react to him being human. oh please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. please udpate soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 05:33 PDT
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Outstanding! I really love how you've allowing this story to go "double-pace": It goes both fast and slow at once. You're not rubbing in emotions and thoughts, you're allowing us readers to think for ourselves. Lemonwise this is a pearl! No, make that a diamond! : ) I think I know what the the mixed thoughts in Inuyasha's head are, but I'm still looking forward to next chapter where they'll probably be revealed. Also a star for Jii-chan's behaviour; after all, he's a traditionalist and ought to act like one. I'll be reading you!
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