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Title: Ch. 72
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 20:27 PDT
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Whee! Lots and lots of good stuff here! I love the long chapters even if it means a bit of a wait. I think you are the first person I've seen to make use of the bit of trivia about the court ladies naming their ensembles in a fanfic. Research is good!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With as much as a dragon must, er, produce, it's a good things the fortress is immense! Will we find out what happened at the feast after Kags & Inu left? Very curious as to the aftermath of Hakimaru's nasty behavior. NO pressure, of course - each chapter is like a gigantic potato chip, and it's hard to enjoy just one! Thanks for another great update!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 17:10 PDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 15:09 PDT
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Absolutely glorious, as usual. I love the way in which you can depict all the neuances of a real relationship, with the good times and the bad, the hot bits as well as the icky ones, without coming over as overly done or losing the 'story' feel to your tale. It's a very difficult thing to do, and you manage beautifully. The scene where she is driven almost to fear of him is marvelously constructed. I can honestly not wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 14:20 PDT
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Ooooh, I hate, hate, hate, Hakimaru. Ooooh, growl. The scene with Inuyasha going all beasty was...hot! Hehehe, Inuyasha howled. I loved it! And I like the fact that Kagome is not going to bathe. Good girl. But, Inuyasha is right. Hakimaru has found a weakness. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome figure out how to strengthen that weakness. Maybe having her scent-marked will help. There has to be a way. Otherwise, it could go bad, real bad. I wonder where Inuyasha went when he left. That was sad. Can't wait for the big battle! Oh, lest we forget your tedious work on description and events that give the chapter a sense of full body; I loved the comb and Inuyasha's memories of it. The wine flushed girls were cute. Figuring out a way to help Sesshoumaru eat his rice was great. Oh! Git gripping Fenik's 'shaft' a bit too hard was hilarious. Let's not forget Momiji and her better half. That was funny. I'm not sure how to take the women. They haven't really done all that much that is useful to Kagome's plight. And I can't wait for the henchmen to come out of the woodwork. Let me at 'em! There is so much more, but I can't list it all! Thanks for another wonderful chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:57 PDT
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I meant story, not artwork, sorry... I was using a form letter.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:43 PDT
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Your artwork has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2007awards/Best-InuKag-Roma nce-Fic-1st.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_April2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our sixth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:40 PDT
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it took me wayyy too long to review this chapter, real life kinda bumped in. it has a habit of doing just that :(. oh well. anyway, i had to say i keep reading this great story, and as it unfolds the mystery of its ending gets me more and more excited every time you post a new chapter. I'm starting to see new ways for you to end this beautiful story, new paths it could take.. and i'm absolutely positive you'll go some place else completely :). Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: shalinilahiri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:39 PDT
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Firstly, you get a 1000 on 10. This was a very well-crafted chapter,and I liked the introduction of Inuyasha's anger against Hakimaru. I especially loved the dining scene when both the stubborn brothers actually made good conversation! waiting for Nixie and Fenik to be back...
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please. Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap! The interaction between all involved is excellent. Never boring, it keeps me on the edge here, lol. And also love the longer chaps. I know they're hard to do, but always a plus. Cant wait till next installment, but update when ya can! ;)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 15:00 PDT
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Brilliant as always! I'm so glad to Fenik back in ACTION! Hehehe. And interactions between Rin and Sesshoumaru are so cute. ^_^ Well done.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:56 PDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 07:50 PDT
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Tease! Almost to the end and a decrete fade at that! I loved it though, especially how Miroku's being all devious and Sango sees right through him. Thanks. I'm really likeing the direction things are taking at the castle too as the groundwork starts to be laid towards the relationship we see between Inu and Sess in the future. Momiji is great. Inu should know that no matter how old you are or what a scary fighter you can be, you're still going to have to put up that sort of thing from someone who changed your diapers. Fenik is a brat challenging both his "fathers" that way! It was good to see him back.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 00:51 PDT
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aww, i love the pdas from Fenik and how cute Kumo is. Kagome really just attracts demonic creatures :) Besides i love the inuyasha jealousy scenes. he deserves it after all the kikyo stuff
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