"Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lori On: August 12, 2008 21:54 EDT Comment/Review: This is a really nice story.. but i would like to point out that if she had unprotected sex a few days before her period the chances of her being pregnant is really low. Most women are only fertile 14 days after the period has started, and it only lasts for 24 hours.
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Title: 1love1 Reviewed By: Hi On: July 24, 2008 01:08 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE AGIAN SOON!!!!!! (2 lazy 2 login)
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Title: 1love1 Reviewed By: Hi On: July 24, 2008 01:07 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE AGIAN SOON!!!!!! (2 lazy 2 login)
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Title: WOOHOOO Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 18:52 EDT Comment/Review: You wrote again!!! YAY! I can't blame you for not writing with Breaking Dawn and all!
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Reviewed By: ghoulgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 04:43 EDT Comment/Review: yah! you decided writing again :D i just loved it can't wait for the next chapter n i no i can't wait for Breaking Dawn either :D
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:25 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh yeah. I found out Breaking Dawn was coming out, today.. I nearly screamed at the bookstore..But I settled for jumping arouns and dancing.. in return.. I got MANY weird looks.,. lol.. but it was worth it! I cant waiittt!!!!
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:23 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a freaking AMAZING story so far...!!!! I cant wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 01:22 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a freaking AMAZING story so far...!!!!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: June 18, 2008 05:18 EDT Comment/Review: im so in love with twilight too! are you gonna go to the tour? i love your story!
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Reviewed By: cartel lover On: June 18, 2008 05:17 EDT Comment/Review: im so in love with twilight too! are you gonna go to the tour? i love your story!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: June 18, 2008 00:25 EDT Comment/Review: Well your talent at writing shows through again. You put enough bait on the hook to keep us sniffing around. Really is a good filler chapter with just enough tidbits to keep us waiting to see what's next. As for not having updated in a while no matter how long the wait it's always worth it to read one of your stories. Hope life settles down a bit for you to let you write more soon though. :)
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Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: June 17, 2008 14:54 EDT Comment/Review: Great update! I'm so glad this story got a new chapter and that their relationship is defined finally! Cute ending, too!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 10:07 EDT Comment/Review: This was good! Really funny! I liked it a lot! I wonder if Kouga is going to tell anybody? Like Kikyo? Will Kagome be at work tomorrow? Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: GranolaBar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 08:48 EDT Comment/Review: I'm really excited about Breaking Dawn as well! I had to request off work the day it comes out so I can read all day. Anyways, the chapter was great! I've been waiting for it for a while, and I'm glad you've finally updated. Can't wait to read more :D
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 20:34 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I love your fic it is so oringial one of the best that I've ever read! The new chapter is wonderful. Stephanie Meyers is the best American Young Adult novelist ever!
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