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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Kuri On: November 01, 2020 03:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story many years ago now, and still come back about
three to five times a year in hopes of an update, or even a
statement letting us know if it will be completed or abandoned.
This is by far one of the best written fanfictions I have ever had
the pleasure of reading. I hope your muse comes back to you one
day, flighty beasts that they are. I also hope this review finds
you in good health and good standing. That is first and foremost.
Godspeed, my highest blessings, and may your life be all that you
wish it to be.
| Reviewed By: Sam On: August 08, 2016 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is AMAZINGLY and I'm really sad that it was abandoned.
It is by far one of the best and most original fan fictions I have
ever read! Please bring it back!
| Title: Facets
Reviewed By: Thrones On: September 28, 2015 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am an avid fanfic reader. I love to see the characters I have
grown to cherish continue on, beyond their previous boundaries.
However, I am easily thrown off if the characters are poorly
written, and motivated by the authors desires and not their own. By
using this standard, your story is a masterpiece. You have kept the
characters realistic to who they are while creating a wonderful,
flowing story and universe that has drawn me in. As I read, I can
hear their voices clearly, something I don't get to say often
enough when reading fanfictions. Thank you. I am well aware of the
difficulties of writing. Stories have been my passion since I was a
child, and I have always strived to be able to write my own. I
understand how much work you have put into this, and am so grateful
for it. Be well.
| Title: Thankyou so much
Reviewed By: ChristineMartin On: October 21, 2014 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, WHAT a wild ride this has been! I thank you with all the love
of the gods that your brilliant mind has come up with this
beautiful work of art. The shear immensity that is in this story is
astounding! I am so enthralled with all the 'Facets' of this
work... I have loved EVERY single chapter, and every single moment
of character development, plot twist, and total universal chaos.. I
have learned much from you in regards to physics, and it bas
inspired me to increase my own knowledge of it. I have so much
respect for you a writer and an intellectual being! this book was
such an incredible breathe of fresh, heart stopping, mind bending
air...I don't think anything in what you have written needs any
augmenting, everything is so PERFECT. It gives me chills.. thank
you for satiating my thirst for good literature. I am so impressed
with how this vast complicated and unknown realm of physics, space
and newtonian and quantum physics has been seamlessly enveloped
into this Inuyasha fan fiction.. how you have connected this manga
and TV show with so many fundamental aspects of the universe we
live in. I have loved your incorporation of languages, wether it
be, Latin, Japanese and Chinese. The informative blurbs at the end
have been so interesting! I have learned a lot. I also appreciate
the nod towards realistic biology and behavioral phenomenon in
respect to different species in the story. Thankyou so much for
writing this so I, as well as many others can enjoy true
storytelling. I cannot wait to see a new chapter put up! After
having a panic attack at the fact that the story wasn't finished I
frantically looked for it elsewhere, I am glad i decided to look on
your page where i found my reassurance that you are continuing..
bless you kind soul! I hope this note has given you some
inspiration to write! please do! Thankyou so very much for this. I
am truly grateful. Sincerely, Christine Martin
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2014 22:09 PDT
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So glad to see you working on this. I'll read it over on AO3. I'm
posting over there these days as well. I'll look you up! :)
| Reviewed By: Darkstrorm On: August 23, 2012 08:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! I really hope you continue to write. | Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2012 23:10 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. I think that is the only word that I can truly convey how truly amazing your story. I can only hope that someday soon you will continue this story. When you do I'll be waiting with bated breath. Please update soon as your fans are sitting on pins and needles. | Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2011 08:34 PST
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I understand why you haven't updated in a long while. In your last LJ update, you had said that you were lobbying Congress for a health care program that you, and maybe others, had crafted. We severely need it. I'm one of those who 'slips through the cracks' and don't have health care for seizures and MS. So, I understand the need for it. Especially because the new plan will fine poor people for not having health insurance. I cannot for the life of me fathom what brought on that idiocy. It will contribute to people being unable to afford health care. You'd think the government was trying its best to kill all of us. I would seriously be better off in another country. If I could get to one, I would most definitely leave here. Lack of health care is one of the reasons I don't update my stories like I once had. Let me know if I can help you and I will. If I have to, I'll get in a wheelchair and go to a protest or hearing.........Anywho, I worked hard researching for months so that I could understand. What was so frustrating was my inability to read math formula's. I hate to pester because you are involved in a noble cause, but...maybe you could work on your story in teeny tiny bits? Even drabbles (as everyone is doing these days) would be better than nothing. We were left on such a cliffie. *prostrates self and begs* I'm sorry, really sorry, if I annoy you, but I had to ask, even if I don't understand a lot of the science. *sniffles* If you have time, please PM me to let me know if there is any hope. | Reviewed By: Koinuookami On: August 09, 2011 09:23 PDT
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i first found this story a long while back and when looking on this site again i was reminded of it, this is one of the few really well written inuyasha fanfics that i have read more then once and was glad to see that each time there was another chapter added so i could continue to find out what would happen next, excitedly awaiting more of this wonderful fanfic, your doing an awsome job and cant wait to finish reading it when it is completed ^-^ | Reviewed By: InuFreakFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 19:46 PDT
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I knew that when I found this story 3 years ago, it would be worth the wait. What I wasn't expecting was for it to take so long lol. Please don't forget that there are people waiting for you to finish. I understand that life can get difficult and might make it harder for you to finish but if you're willing to stick to it, then so can I. Please come back to us :) | Reviewed By: Renee45 On: February 25, 2011 05:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. So enthralling. I noticed you have been gone for year hope you and your life are great. You have a real talent and a rela work of art here. | Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Cc On: February 23, 2011 02:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning piece of work. But geez what a cliff hanger! | Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: January 17, 2011 03:18 PST
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Ok first of all I'm back!!! Sorry I left you for a while I got caught up in Bleach and Naruto fanfics. I'm obsessed with Kakashi/Sakura pairings. I'm sorry to hear you had surgery but I'm glad it helped and I hope you are still feeling better. Now, I don't understand where the hell you're trying to go with this. I thought the whole original point of this story was to SAVE the youkai from ceasing to exist but now it seems like you are trying to make them choose modern tokyo and give up all the magic. Plus I KNOW you went through a whole lot of bullshit and work to get Sesshoumaru and Kirara together but you're willing to brake them up and steal everything of Sess from Mao? (Or was it Mou?) I LOVE the past time period, the modern is boring with all the youkai gone. Hell I really wish I could meet some fucking hot Inu youkai or hanyou at the mall or something. I guess I just have to trust that you know what you're doing, I am skeptical about it right now though. Anyway; update again soon or I'll pull the cattle prod out of retirement. ^.^ | Title: Avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 15:24 PDT
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The choice seems clear to me. Sacrifice Kagome's mother and uncle for the sake of nine other beings, not including Inuyasha. Everyone's lives depend on picking the past. Kagome and Inuyasha's best friends, Kirara, Sesshomaru, their children, Kaede, and their sensei. And wouldn't Sota be spared because he's a time lord like Kagome and Kensei? They wouldn't be able to see each other, but Sota would exist in that time loop thing Kensei's family and the other time lords were frozen, no? ...Or was it just a piece of them that resided there? Hmm... Well, Tokyo's definitely out. CHOOSE THE FEUDAL ERA~!!!! --Boo. Can I not get through a review without making a mistake? *annoyed*--
| Title: Avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
Creepy: picking Inuyasha's father out of everyone to look like. Strange: Kagome's annoyance and anger at Inuyasha for something he wasn't raised to even acknowledge. Not to mention Inuyasha's own curbing of his usual behavior (however "instinctual") with someone who is supposed to hear it all the time. This chapter made me feel a little uncomfortable or wrong, if that's the right word. It felt like it shouldn't have happened. Not to say that you're being blasphemous. I mean if you weren't with the Inca, you weren't with the Christians. A god's a god, right? I guess I'm just used to people using their gods in a different manner - less like parents and/or guardians and more like things that should be extremely awed/feared (I mean like. not even look directly at without fear of death). Speaking of which... Isn't Kagome Shinto? They don't have one or even a few central god/goddess. So, this "being" wouldn't even appear to her. Can't have something appear and speak to you that you don't believe in, can you? Yeah, so this was awkward. It's a slippery slope. I/b> would prefer to just go back to the three islands have them figure it out on their own. Or have a more Buddhist influence, or better yet, have Amaterasu or Izanagi speak to them. --Sorry about the grammatical/letter withholding in my other review.-- Glad to hear you're recovering! Get well soon~ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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