| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuFreakFan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 19:46 PDT
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I knew that when I found this story 3 years ago, it would be worth the wait. What I wasn't expecting was for it to take so long lol. Please don't forget that there are people waiting for you to finish. I understand that life can get difficult and might make it harder for you to finish but if you're willing to stick to it, then so can I. Please come back to us :) |
Reviewed By: Renee45 On: February 25, 2011 05:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. So enthralling. I noticed you have been gone for year hope you and your life are great. You have a real talent and a rela work of art here. |
Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Cc On: February 23, 2011 02:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stunning piece of work. But geez what a cliff hanger! |
Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: January 17, 2011 03:18 PST
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Ok first of all I'm back!!! Sorry I left you for a while I got caught up in Bleach and Naruto fanfics. I'm obsessed with Kakashi/Sakura pairings. I'm sorry to hear you had surgery but I'm glad it helped and I hope you are still feeling better. Now, I don't understand where the hell you're trying to go with this. I thought the whole original point of this story was to SAVE the youkai from ceasing to exist but now it seems like you are trying to make them choose modern tokyo and give up all the magic. Plus I KNOW you went through a whole lot of bullshit and work to get Sesshoumaru and Kirara together but you're willing to brake them up and steal everything of Sess from Mao? (Or was it Mou?) I LOVE the past time period, the modern is boring with all the youkai gone. Hell I really wish I could meet some fucking hot Inu youkai or hanyou at the mall or something. I guess I just have to trust that you know what you're doing, I am skeptical about it right now though. Anyway; update again soon or I'll pull the cattle prod out of retirement. ^.^ |
Title: Avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 15:24 PDT
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The choice seems clear to me. Sacrifice Kagome's mother and uncle for the sake of nine other beings, not including Inuyasha. Everyone's lives depend on picking the past. Kagome and Inuyasha's best friends, Kirara, Sesshomaru, their children, Kaede, and their sensei. And wouldn't Sota be spared because he's a time lord like Kagome and Kensei? They wouldn't be able to see each other, but Sota would exist in that time loop thing Kensei's family and the other time lords were frozen, no? ...Or was it just a piece of them that resided there? Hmm... Well, Tokyo's definitely out. CHOOSE THE FEUDAL ERA~!!!! --Boo. Can I not get through a review without making a mistake? *annoyed*--
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Title: Avid reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
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Creepy: picking Inuyasha's father out of everyone to look like. Strange: Kagome's annoyance and anger at Inuyasha for something he wasn't raised to even acknowledge. Not to mention Inuyasha's own curbing of his usual behavior (however "instinctual") with someone who is supposed to hear it all the time. This chapter made me feel a little uncomfortable or wrong, if that's the right word. It felt like it shouldn't have happened. Not to say that you're being blasphemous. I mean if you weren't with the Inca, you weren't with the Christians. A god's a god, right? I guess I'm just used to people using their gods in a different manner - less like parents and/or guardians and more like things that should be extremely awed/feared (I mean like. not even look directly at without fear of death). Speaking of which... Isn't Kagome Shinto? They don't have one or even a few central god/goddess. So, this "being" wouldn't even appear to her. Can't have something appear and speak to you that you don't believe in, can you? Yeah, so this was awkward. It's a slippery slope. I/b> would prefer to just go back to the three islands have them figure it out on their own. Or have a more Buddhist influence, or better yet, have Amaterasu or Izanagi speak to them. --Sorry about the grammatical/letter withholding in my other review.-- Glad to hear you're recovering! Get well soon~ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: Avid Reader (when am I not?)
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 14:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. And it was updated (on ff.net anyway) on my birthday! Hazzah! Thank you! ^o^ *gives you a cookie* Well, of course I had to reread the last few chapters, but wow. This was... It felt important. Like this was what you'd based everything upon or had drawn everything to. Nice. Bonus points for including the beloved Incan gods and goddesses. And the dinosaurs. It's like seventh grade all over again! I do have a question though. You say that Inuyasha is supposed to be a manifestation of the inu Libra. But how can he be balanced if the hanyou has one star, the youkai has three and the human is made up on two? That seems demon favored to me. Is that why we have Kagome? It'd make sense. Hmm... Well. I am very interested in this little (and y little, I mean serious course) physics lesson you've got going here. Riveting. It's like, you think it's... and then it turns out... But I think I can understand what you've told us so far. And oh my god. I was right! That is a little Kirara-Sesshomaru konek-inu thing. ADORABLE! And completely unfathomable. I love it! ^o^ *gives you more cookies* So, thanks again for the b-day update and another a few days afterward. Love and all that. Hoping everything's good on your side of the computer. And we all just as psyched as you to get to this pivotal moment. I'm gonna go read the next chapter, review it and go take a few Advil. Ja~
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 09:23 PDT
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Wow...just when I think I have it figured out I get so confused again. That is a good thing though, it's the sign of a good read and an excellent author. I did not feel as if you were being blasphemous. God has a sense of humor or we would not have one ourselves. The cliffhanger was awesome...totally forgot about Kanna while trying to figure out what is going on! So many choices for our heroes to make and all of them seem as if they are not a choice at all. I know all will eventually be revealed, but I will have to go back and re-read the last chapter again and see if I can figure out what is happening. As always it was a wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 09:22 PDT
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Wow...just when I think I have it figured out I get so confused again. That is a good thing though, it's the sign of a good read and an excellent author. I did not feel as if you were being blasphemous. God has a sense of humor or we would not have one ourselves. The cliffhanger was awesome...totally forgot about Kanna while trying to figure out what is going on! So many choices for our heroes to make and all of them seem as if they are not a choice at all. I know all will eventually be revealed, but I will have to go back and re-read the last chapter again and see if I can figure out what is happening. As always it was a wonderful chapter!
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Title: Lost
Reviewed By: TheHybrid02 On: March 12, 2010 00:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't understand what happened, but it was a great story till 6 or 7 chapters ago when things became ridiculously confusing. actually I've been reading this for three days and now its like the magics gone...sigh...
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 17:35 PST
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Wow! I have missed so many chapters! This is all very confusing and I have a difficult time visualizing it, but I get the gist of it. So someone (s) has to make a choice. This sounds like a riddle and if someone figures it out correctly, everything should be alright. Can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 09:16 PST
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Wow! I get behind a bit and have to wait for the weekend to read the new chapter and I get rewarded with a two for one deal, excellent! I'm glad to hear you are feeling better. With these two chapters I found that if I tried to make sense of things as I went along I got more confused than if I just let go and read it. As details were added and explanations given things fell into place and what had been random began to for patterns. Just as it must be for the characters. I'm still not sure what the precise situation is and what the choices are and that makes for a cliffhanger for the next chapter when I'm sure things will be made more clear. I thought you handled The One pretty well but then I'm a big fan of Dogma too.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 21:08 PST
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I am sorry to hear that you have had such a rough time. I hope that all will turn out well for you. This chapter is wonderful. I studied history when I was in college and recognized Queztocoatl (I think I just abused that poor name) from way back...that was just too cool. Not to mention Nessie. I laughed out loud at that one :) I love the notes at the end of your chapters, I feel as if I have had a good read and learned something along the way. It's the best of all worlds! This chapter was well worth the wait. I wonder what the next one will bring. I ponder on all of the things you pack in there, but just when I think I have it figured out I get a pleasant surprise. I am truly enjoying this and will hate to see it end.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 00:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...and I'm a Libra, LOL. Great update! I can't wait to see how you balance everything out!
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Reviewed By: ER On: December 09, 2009 02:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, keep at it! ^^
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