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 Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 29, 2009 19:00 PST
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Oh no! Are they gone forever? I don't understand what's happening at all. I think you're giving me a heart attack! What will happen to Sesshoumaru and Kilala?! Gah! Oi, even though you're on my favorites list, mm.org doesn't send me notices when you've updated. Is there a way I can get notification? Maybe you could make a post in your journal when you update? I think I get those. ^_^ This was another hand-wringing chapter. I can't wait til it's all over. You're killing me! LOL Everything is so jumbled and everyone is getting trapped. There doesn't seem to be a solution. BTW, hot lemon with Kilala and Sess. Yum, yum. ^_^ Loved how they fought together.
 Reviewed By: ginhayashi85  On: November 21, 2009 21:46 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really hope you finish this. Im finally caught up and will go insane if you dont update soon.
 Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 21, 2009 06:20 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks again for updating! I'm sorry to hear that your life has been tough and I hope it gets better for you. I like your idea of the Heavenly Generals and other characters being turned into constellations in the sky. I so did not see that one coming. Hopefully Shippo can save the day, it is the fox kit's time to shine! I wonder what Inuyasha is doing right now? Well I shall have to wait until the next update to find out. Thanks again for not abandoning this story and I hope everything in your life gets better because you are a cool person and you deserve an awesome life. Sincerely, Zach P.S. Thanks for the email, I always think it is cool when authors go out of their way to email their fans. So I just wanted to say, you rock.
 Title: More than worth the wait
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 20, 2009 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Trust me, I'll be reading and reviewing as long as you're willing to write. You have one of the great epics of IY going here; it's well worth waiting for. Besides, I have concentrate so hard to follow the physics and the battlespace that it keep my mind off the recent loss of a friend: please do keep at it. M-chan P.S. You'd get an 11 on Enjoyment but the dial doesn't go that high.
 Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 20, 2009 03:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well this sucks ass. Inuyasha, Kirara and Sesshomaru are the only ones left. And what was that about Rin? She can't be a constellation (unless she'd be considered the princess that crosses Vega, but she has no prince. Not to mention that whole cycles thing)... Can she? Hmm... Well, I hope Shippo can get out of the void somehow and warn Inuyasha and Yorei. And I'm hoping that Sesshomaru and Kirara can get out of bed before anyone else is swallowed. O_o I do like the idea of making them constellations though. Very original. *gives you a cookie* I have to say that the physics and brane matter isn't as difficult as I thought it'd be. It's extremely difficult, yes. But when put into context, as you've done in this story, I think it's infinitely easier to understand. Hazzah! In any case, I hope all's well on your side of the computer. Don't worry. Six months isn't so long to wait for a chapter. Just please don't, you know, make us wait a year this time. *wavies* JA MATA~! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
 Reviewed By: Leo-mae  On: October 19, 2009 16:37 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hehe your welcome. Sometimes a cattle prod is needed. You know, I just realized I've been reading this story for 3 years!!! OMG where did that time go? I swear this is getting worse as I get older. A year used to take forever to pass when I was younger. Anyway; I really do love this story, don't totally understand the physics stuff but I get the jist of it. I'm trying to figure out how this will all end; it better be a happy ending. I've read three books recently that all had sad endings and I'm in need of a happy one for a change. Well update soon ok, I'll keep the prod charged LOL. ^.~
 Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2009 15:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
Welcome back!! Very, very cool new chapter.
 Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2009 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So I just wanted to say how much I love your story and that I look forward to the next chapter. And I love the Sesshomaru/Kiara pairing. At first glance it is the ultimate crack pairing but you not only make it work, you make it so natural I almost expect it to be in the canon manga. So thanks for writing this story and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach P.S. Are you excited about the new Inuyasha anime? Only four more days!
 Reviewed By: Leo-mae  On: September 09, 2009 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There lots of tens and another review. Could I possibly ask you to update now? I'm dieing here!!! I love this story and it seems to be in the middle of the climax, LOL and this was a lemon chapter ^.~. Anyway, please update soon!!!!
 Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 04:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sneaky wench.
 Title: yeah...
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 03:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
poor Kagome. she's exhausted... is it just me or was Kanna just trying to help them? I don't know, I hope it gets to the bottom of things fast, cause I can't wait to see what happens...
 Title: Oh, dear God.
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 03:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm standing at the edge of my chair, my eyes glued to the computer. I just hope this ends okay. I don't want Inuyasha to die, too...
 Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 02:57 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I get the feeling that the villagers worship them now cause they have The Taijitu on their foreheads. Your twist are always the most incredible things to read... amazing job :)
 Title: grateful
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 02:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you, .... (a couple of days later) ... thank you, thank you, thank you, and - last, but not least - thank you! I knew she'd revive! I just hope she's not...different, somehow.
 Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 02:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm partly relieved Sesshomaru didn't revive her with the Teneseiga. I don't want her connected to him... Let's see what happens next. You had my heart going haywire, and if something good doesn't happen soon...
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