| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: horrified
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 02:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on the verge of tears.
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Title: No!!!
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 02:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. Just.. whoa! This reeks of trouble. That Kanna scares me a lot... every time I see her my blood freezes. And not just because she looks like a heartless albino, but... I don't know. She's just so... emotionless. Now's not a different situation. Oh, and btw. Kouga is an idiot.
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 02:03 PDT
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Haha, I can just imagine Sesshomaru finding them. This is going to be so great. Oh, btw; great idea with the time rip... thing.
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so hot... You really did a great job in letting us know everything they felt while making love... you really are an extremely talented writer :)
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 17:29 PDT
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Wow. This caught me off guard. I wonder what more you have in store for us :)
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 17:22 PDT
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This is so hilarious :)) They got themselves new 'friends' Great chappie :)
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't believe he did that. I'm very curious to see which one of them wins.. if there's going to be a winner, that is. Amazing chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 16:41 PDT
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I'm really impressed that Inuyasha finally had the guts to tell Kikyou he loved Kagome. Now things get interesting.
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I decided to read it here, so I will continue reviewing now. This chapter is... so very overwhelming. And I wonder what'll happen with Kikyou. This is something I'm really looking forward to reading. I imagine you're going to leave it hanging for a while, inserting something about the Modern Era just to keep us waiting, aren't you? Anyway, amazingly intense chapter!
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Reviewed By: TriannaKumira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is such an awesome fanfic. The Kirara/Sesshomaru pairing was completely unthought-of until I started reading this. The science can sometimes get a little confusing, but you do a great job of making sure I can get the gist of it (which is more then I can say for my Honors Chem. teacher :( )But KOUGA? KOUGA?!?!? Why end such a wonderfully written and well-though-out chapter with KOUGA, of all things?!?!?! You had better come out with the next chapter soon, I wanna know what happens! Thanks for being an amazing writer, though. Does it make sense to say that? Ah, well, it makes sense in my mind. I'm going to post this before I begin to ramble, just keep up the good work!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Thank you! FINALLY, Sessho and Kirara are together. I cannot tell you how glad I am that that hedge has finally been cleared. These past few chapters (the 'Get Thee Behind Me, Sesshomaru' mini series) are written very well (yes even for you). You ventured into their emotions and cleared up more than a few confusing issues for, well, me at least. But of COURSE, you have to end a perfect, five page lemon with Koga. Come on. Don't get me wrong. It's not that I hate him, but what the hell is he doing at the house interrupting Kirara and Sesshomaru? WTF?! Seventy-four chapters and it ends like this? T^T Why must you torment us so? *le sigh* Well, hopefully, we can see why Koga-kun is coming towards them and then get back to the issue(s) at hand: more specifically, Sessho's SOB mother and the rest of the group. Again, great chapter. I hope everything's good with you and uh... I think that's about it. *wavies* JA MATA~ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Mouse#9 On: August 09, 2009 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang! Oh please, please, please continue the story! When I first started reading this story I was hooked right away. lol can't wait till the new chapter is up!!!
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Title: W.O.W
Reviewed By: kittenprophetess(not signed in) On: May 04, 2009 23:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I want to say is 'Holy-Smokes Batman... I read an amazing fanfiction!!!' Okay, maybe more than that. I just found this about three days ago... and once I got to the last chapter and found that the story was not completed... I almost had an apoplexy! Please, continue on with this. It is truly a brilliant story and I love how you threw in an unconventional pairing with Sess/Kirara. I would have never have thought of that until you're story. Anyway, thanks for blessing the fanfiction world with your work. It is truly a piece of art. May Your Life Be Blessed, Kittenprophetess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!! Is it just me or does EVERY (adult) in this story get laid??? lol. I've never read this before but now I must!!! so sad that I have finished the last chapter so far!!! and the holidays for me have just begun(and everybody else it seems is studying for exams poor things)!!!
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 06:28 PDT
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And there's revision #1.
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