| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 06:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshys is finally saying sorry to his father.. about time lol... but... I WANT TO TAKE KIRARA'S PLACE!!! NOT FAIR!!! T_T lol
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Title: A Perfect Mismatch
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this line: `I need a tree!' And Sessh's apology to his father was just perfect. Great job of keeping them dogs and cats, but still showing their common ground. Oh, and kudos for a surprisingly un-,'pun'-ishing title.
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 14:14 PDT
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One word: HOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!! LOL This is my favorite incarnation of Kirara ever! And I love the chapters between her and Sessy best. Is that bad? Lol Are they mates now? I really want her to have kittens of her own.... Or would they be pups...? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 06, 2009 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As long as someone beats the shit out of him again I don't really mind Kouga coming back. I just find him to be exceeding annoying and even denser than Inu can be. On another note this was an AWESOME chapter!!!! I'm so happy Kirara and Sess finally hooked up. Keep up the good work I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Egads, I love this story. I think that was one of the hottest lemons I have read in a long time. Thanks for all the work you have put into this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Manda687 On: March 18, 2009 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted you to kno that I really have enjoyed ur creation so far. It is well thought out and I have to say that you make it make sense...if you kno what I mean. All the questions you ask urself while reading or watching Inuyasha are answered in you work and also an exciting new adventure goes with it. Really it is amazing and I just wanted you to kno that you should keep it up...it is my all time favorite Inuyasha fanfic by far, so please keep going, cuz I want to kno what happens next. Thank you for four nights of insomnia...i enjoyed every minute of it...lol ttyl Manda
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 23:22 PDT
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just into chapter 21, and it still feels a little broken. not quite flowing in certain places, but im beginning to think that its just your particular writting style. anywho, i still enjoy the story so ill keep reading.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 21:48 PDT
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This chapter was by far my favorite. Poor Kirara, she's so confused. This chapter made me cry due to Kirara talking about losing her kittens. It hit close to home for me and made me cry for her. I realize that these are only fictional characters, but you have written them to such a degree that they seem so very real. One cannot help but to feel connected and invested in them. I hope that Sesshomaru and Kirara will be allowed to have pups (kittens?) offspring of some kind! I truly enjoy your writing and will stay with your story until the end (and then I will probably have to read it a few more times!)!!
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Reviewed By: ardy1 On: March 13, 2009 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very dense story and you have spent years writing it. In Dickens' time stories were released in monthly magazine format - something the mangas have revived. But your particular story draws so heavily on the sciences - which you actually describe/explain wonderfully, enough to keep the lay reader at some minimal level of comprehension - that there is the tendency to sometimes drag when it comes to pacing. For something that is periodically pubished - and in your case literally half a year or more can pass between chapters - this can be fatal to story flow. You are asking your readers to either manage to keep your storyline fresh in their own minds or go back and reread. Is this fair? Maybe for fanfic, it is. And god knows I can't claim to do any better. But there you have it - my sole complaint. You have lavished loving detail on virtually every aspect of this story. I do find myself growing a bit weary of the animal aspects of the youkai. Yes, it distinguishes their understanding of the world and relationships from humans, but doesn't it also make the probability of successful coexistance even more problematic, let alone the potential for successful comingling? I found myself caught by Sesshomouru's mother's contempt for Inuyasha's mother. Granted, it makes sense and goes to explain Sesshomouru's comtempt for his brother. But what does it say for the apparent aberation that was the Inu Tai youkai? Which all goes to explain why I think I have found your depiction of Sesshomouru perhaps the most compelling of all in this story. He has chosen to protect Rin, and by extension takes on Inuyasha's pack (worthy as extraordinary humans - not counting Shippou and Kirara, of course, but still an incomprehensible act) and has finally extended such recognition to accept Kirara as a mate. As she said herself at the end of the chapter - insane! Obviously, he is at least as iconoclastic as his father! Which, of course, he doesn't seem to give a damn about, since he is obviously a rule unto himself. This amuses me immensely. My only other comment is that you seem to have gotten so caught up in the mechanics and logistics of what is admittedly an incredibly involved tale as to have lost sight somewhat of the actual character interactions. Clearly this is a multipart orchestral piece rather than intimate chamber music. May I say that I miss the lyric interludes? Thank you so much for giving us two chapters in less than a week, especially after far too long a silence!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2009 08:16 PDT
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I love this story. I can't remember if I ever reviewed.... Anyway I LOVE the Sess/Kirara pairing. I've never read it before! I'm saving the story on my alert now!YAY!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 11, 2009 17:47 PDT
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I breed and show purbred rabbits, trust me, I KNOW they can be evil. Umm....can we just get to some nice Sess/Kirara sex already? I just want u 2 know that I really love this story and I have recommended it 2 several people. Well update soon ok.
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Title: It's Official. . .
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
. . .you write a better BattleKitten(TM) than Rumiko-sensei. I cannot tell you how much pleasure your work has brought me (at a time when I Really Need It) except to say that, being a sometime professional editor, I don't give out 10s for grammar. Thank you so much for throwing Sessh and Kirara into a bag from which they can't escape! M-chan
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 12:00 PDT
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So it seems Kirara finally gets it. Though it took Sess being more open than I have ever seen him to get her to understand. When you did this pairing at first I was seriously wondering how you'd make it work but so far it's become one of the more fascinating ones. Though there seems to be a surprising lack of meta-physics in this chapter. Heh. Keep it up, great work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 08:10 PDT
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What an exciting chapter. You leave so many mysteries and managed to add action and fun. Mizuki is awesome and, I like the hebi a well. I really like her. What the hell is Naraku up to and how is he managing to attack? Bastard! I hope someone takes out his ass soon. Why would he try to kill Sango first? Is the baby a threat? Kilala referring to Rin as 'My-Rin' was so sweet. I feel so bad for her losing her kittens. I loved the way that the Tora now believes that both Sess and Kilala have unsuspected powers. Sess sure was bold with his moves on Kilala. I wonder if it is the heat affecting him. Ooh, and Kilala is so sensitive. I wonder if she can get preggers in her current form. That'll be interesting to find out. Your use of the word 'aroma' was pleasant as is the word. Refreshing. I find it strange that Sess would be focusing on mating when he has a bunch of Taiyoukai waiting on him. One is missing? I wonder what's up with that. Interesting. That last sentence was great. "Are you insane?" LOL He's already admitted it. I'm interested in hearing Sess's theories on what is happening concerning the strange occurences. Oooh, so all of this weirdness is the fault of Kagome's dad. I want to deck the idiot. Someone needs to figure out how to straighten all of this out. I'm anxious to find out what Kanna is up to as well. You have so many strands in this plot. It is very exciting. Oh, I almost forgot. I loved how Sess clawed Tora and can't believe that Kilala doubted him. I'd be pissed, too. Nice lime. Sesshoumaru sure knows what he's doing. Such a perv. LOL Thanks for getting chapters up so quickly! I look forward to the next installment. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 04:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeppp.. i feel bad for saying this.. but i was a bit confused at the start XD
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