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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 19:57 PDT
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i must admit, im a bit confused at times... i get the general idea, and i appreciate your use of correct termonology, but i feel that youre forgetting something kinda important... we dont all know/understand/care about quantum physics... parts of it are extremely well written, others just dont seem to have the right flow... i just finished chapter 14, so i still have a long ways to go before im caught up, but i thought id leave a comment and tell you what i think so far...
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 17:14 PDT
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This chapter makes me happy. Wee! Drama, comedy, hot steaming lime goodness! Yay!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 16:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there sweetie!! You updated AGAIN!! :D Incredibly, I came to leave a review! O.o Well, lately I'm a bit "late" reading everything... :sigh: But, this time... I'm not. LOL Really, the Vade Retro... made me laugh out loud. You see, when we were kids and did sthg "kiddy" or annoyed our parents, they should look at us, with some kind of horrid face and said "Vade Retro Satanás" (don't need to translate, ne?LOL) So, brought back memories. To a latin, Latin is always there. So, loved both chapters and loved the way you play with the characters mixing the angst and the humour. The opposites and similarities, the misunderstandings and the oddities. Wonderfull the way you introduced and fused the mithology with the story. Wonderful! Excellent job sweetie! Thank you so much for the update!! :hugggs:
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 22:21 PDT
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When Sesshoumaru said "No. Leave.", what was he referring to? Is he not ready to go through the ceremony and is he waiting on Inuyasha? Or was it concerning something else? By the way, the whole issue with his mother and the Ryuu's sister was really funny. Loved that. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 21:54 PDT
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Wow, this is all so confusing. Sesshoumaru is using Kilala's power? I assume that has something to do with all of the reality fluctuations. I really dislike that tiger and am excited that Sesshoumaru kicked his ass. I'm not sure if the drowning of Kilala's kittens is something that actually happened in the past or if it is one of those fluctuations. If it is history, I feel so sorry for her. But, Sesshoumaru will make sure that never happens again. ^_^ I can't believe how uncivilized the generals seem to be. A fight right off the bat. Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Kewl! So, the Inu-no-Taisho is one of the twelve heavenly generals? Is that true in the manga as well? That would be really neat. Well, fun chapter! I hope things get back to normal soon. Snow
| Title: 72
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 09:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. There is so much going on in your fic right now it's hard to know where to begin. Especially since it's been a few chapters since I reviewed. Sorry! I've no excuse. Kagome's in mid-peril and time is freaking out all over the place. Your fic is truly one that I end up thinking about for days after reading a new chapter. It's not just enjoyable; it's a thinking person's story! Chapter 72 is no exception to this and the ending left me thinking about what could have happened. And also slightly panicked for Kirara. She didn't really have that creep tiger's kitten did she? I'm hoping it's just a time "what if..." that Sess triggered by pulling that weird strand when they were together in that dark space. (Wild, hopeful speculation on my part) And that black place they went to was fascinating too! Are they tied together now, Kirara and Sess? Is that why Sess can use fire now as an attack? I've got so many questions! And of course that's half the fun of reading your story. The anticipation of finding out. As always, your story is a total blast to read and I always appreciate the thoughtful research you do that adds to it. I always look forward to reading more and I hope real life is kind to you!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! NO KIRARA!!!! ANYONW BUT KIRARA!!!!
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 09:00 PST
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Glad to be of service. This is a really excellent chapter. You are doing so much more with the idea than I ever expected.
| Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 02, 2009 07:02 PST
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Hello!!!! Its been a while huh? I meant 2 review the last chapter but I forgot, I'm sorry. Anyway I honestly had given this story up for a while; but u kept popping up with updates so I finally decided 2 start reading it again. You are doing an amazing job at making this story wonderful yet so fucking confusing. I'm really glad that I'm not 10 IQ points dumber or I'd be completely lost. Anyway, I have to say that I really enjoy Sess and Kirara as a couple and I am completely rooting for them 2 hook up. I am also really hoping that Kag and Inu get to finish the fun that you so rudely deprived them of. Well update again soon ok ja!!!
| Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 08:32 PST
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are you going to continue the fic....please dont wait a year to update great fic
| Reviewed By: IYFG On: January 18, 2009 07:22 PST
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Congratulations Licentia poetica-your story 'Facets of the Living Jewel" has been nominated for "Best Alternate Reality/Universe at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 00:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo wow i finally read all the chapters :D though i coudlnt read the last 2 parts, coz of the spiders... (seriously creeped out by spiders..) but im really interested in your story :D cant wait for the next chapter :P
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 09:14 PST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 14:32 PST
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I have been re-reading again. My memory has been screwed over for awhile, so, I don't know if I noticed this before or not. Sesshoumaru violated Kirara's trust. That bit of information and the consequences were so sad. I'm left wondering if Sesshoumaru is an idiot. True, his plan worked and it was a good one. However, it cost him a lot, and he doesn't even understand what had happened. I love the way you have portrayed Sesshoumaru and the circumstances you have put him in. Also, your characterization of Kirara is wonderful! It really makes for sparks. They are at complete opposites. I think it is your characterizations that have made them my favorite couple in this fic. It is new and interesting----- Oh! Kagome's dad DID put three years behind his punch! So, this problem with the time traveling is partially his fault? Just great. I don't understand quite a bit of the last two chapters. It's not you're fault. I haven't been well. Ooooh, Kanna! I wonder what she is up to. That portion was so exciting! She kicked Saimyosho ass! Go, Kanna! Can't wait to see what happens next. She's flickering between, er, positive and negative, matter and anti-matter? ((Oh, someone on my journal left a link about Einstein's theory of relativity having been corroborated. It was very interesting. Think about it. The possibilities are endless.)) Geh, Naraku is gross. My skin crawled when you described him. I feel so bad for Kagome. She's having such a hard time. And...where is Souta? There is so much happening that I can't comment on it all, especially the stuff that I don't yet comprehend. I'll get it eventually. You've led me to do a lot of research that have actually proven my view of 'life, the universe, and everything'. ^_^ Thanks! I look forward to the next chapter and may actually have another review before then. My brain works in spurts. ^_^ ---- Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 00:41 PST
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Oh please, indulge in too much Christmas chocolate this year! I loved the Star Wars skit. *snicker* More! Can you tell I've been re-reading? ^_^ Snow
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