| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: November 29, 2008 23:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL LOL!!! Oo im on chapter 12, and i just had to say, when they learnt about how Kagome's father can hear things near the well, cracked me up XD more like I'm never gonna sit near that damn thing again!' that made me burst into laughter XD anyways im heading back reading :P
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 22:05 PST
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Brane, brane,go away...LOL. You know I love how you blend in string theory to all of this....creepycrawly! And most excellent. And as usual, MM never sends me notices of when you update, don't ask me why....
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!"The monk belongs to me too."
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 22:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!"The monk belongs to me too."
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 22:55 PST
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As always your chapters are well worth the wait! This one was intense and has left me hoping for Kagome's rescue before she is violated in any way. I do not like spiders and now have any even more healthy fear of them! Can Kagome see Aiko? Will the baby be able to help at all. She seems to have a level of intelligence that would suggest that she will play a vital role in all of this. I shall eagerly await the next thrilling chapter of your most wonderful (and my personal favorite) story!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 03:38 PST
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I'm sorry to hear you've been sick. This chapter was amazing. Really great dialog, really gross Naraku, more arcane science, and really great descriptive passages.
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Title: OMG & Ew!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you gave the warning about creepy, because you weren't kidding! Though I have to admit most of the time I couldn't breathe and then realized I was holding my breath - and then I had to laugh. I think my two favorite lines were (Oh shut up! He sounds like Miroku, though…he'll probably spout some weird shit that I can't understand.) and then later you had to hit us with "Oh, screw you. She doesn't belong to anyone but herself, and she'll kick Miroku's ass and ours if you say any different." Truer words were never spoken! I both enjoyed it immensely and was creeped out. I do with Kagome could have just fried his ass. They better get out of this mess soon! Excellent job and looking forward to more - though I might ought to read the next one when it's daylight!
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just finish reading all 70 chapters you have here so far. I liked it alot. There have been a few spots where I felt lost and that is becouse you have so much going on in this. I look foward to you next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DarkCuriosity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 00:28 PDT
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Wow! What a great fic! I was looking through the nominations for this quarter on IYFG and saw your fic. I have really enjoyed it so far and I'm excited to see more. You definitely got me pulling for a Kirara/Sesshomaru ship. I love how you have expanded her character. She is so perfect for Sesshomaru. This is really one of the best Inuyasha fics I've read. I definitely be seconding and voting for your story! -Dark Curiosity
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 20:44 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 00:20 PDT
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Holy shit! You've put them in a world of trouble. I have no clue what you are doing. Perhaps Souta had something to do with it, but this is a terrible time for Sesshoumaru and Kilala to lose their powers. At least they weren't in mid-air. My mind is spinning. I don't think I have the brains to even try to figure this one out, much less comment. I wonder what (I can never remember how to spell his name) Tensei did that had Kanna so upset. Maybe he did all that to protect them from Kanna. Mud is an earth element. It was the ground that was shaking. This is much too weird for me to understand. And Kohaku's body disappearing? Aw, crap. Time is doing crazy stuff again. *head desk* Gah! Now I have a headache! You are such a challenge! *groans, grumbles, whines like a pussy* This one is the worst. Ten reads and tons of research probably won't help me on this one. And I know you are just enjoying the hell out of it. :P Huff! *stomps off to examine the deep recesses of a twisted mind* I'm going to read it again. I probably missed something. I'm not very thorough on first reads because I'm too excited. You just have so much action that I get high. ^_^ Snow
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Title: Such a sweet kitty (not)
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's always a good day when there's a new chapter of Facets, and especially so when the Battle Kitten and the Big Dog are getting themselves royally tangled in the unexpected. Thank you so much for giving me something so very enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 16:44 PDT
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Have I mentioned yet how cute it is that Kirara calls her people, My-Rin, My-Sango, etc? It's so completely cat. The line that made me laugh out loud though was the Dragon General making the crack about cats. I like this much better than the other possible scenario you mentioned. The cliffhanger is very exciting so I hope you are inspired to continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 00:21 PDT
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I'm hoping to have found the setting that is causing my copy/paste of reviews to turn up with odd symbols in it. I hope this works---I read this again and it is so complicated. I'm sorry for not reading your notes. I tend to skip authors' notes when I'm excited about a chapter. OMG! Did Inuyasha, using Tetsusaiga, and helped by the scroll, retrieve Souta! That would be so cool! That was one wild trip for Kagome. Poor girl. Her thoughts were funny though. Thanks for all the detailed description. I feel so bad for Inuyasha. This has to be one of the hardest things he's been through. And then to have Kagome's dad punch him...that was the last thing he needed. All of the time distortions had to be awful for everyone. Gah! I hope they can get Innin back! That's terrible! There are so many things in this chapter that I can't keep up with all of them. Sorry my last review sucked so bad. I had done some research on time theories and did more after this chapter. It's fascinating. My ex was a mathematician who worked on one of the older space missions. Gemini? I called him and asked him about physics in general. We had an interesting discussion. Thanks! Maybe I'll finish that Nova series. Just to let you know, I'm writing a combination sci-fi/preternatural series and the new research has led me to new resources on theory. Great chapter. I'm still not getting the notifications, but I try to check on a regular basis. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 17:48 PDT
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Whew! Da'imn. What a trip. It was only your description of the fluxes and Kagome's trip that kept my mind intact. Dimensions are fascinating, especially if you get to play with them. You're lucky to have a better vision of it. I think I might be jealous. You must know the math or have done a lot of homework for this story. It was so exciting to see Kagome's father 'advancing' on Inuyasha just to punch him. I wonder if he has any idea what actually happens in the world outside of the well. It has been awhile since I've read back through the story. Oh, I've been on a roller coaster and could almost imagine what Kagome was going through. Of course, she was being pulled much faster, but at least I have an idea. The moon stone really confuses me. Should it have any power over time? I don't get it. Southern fried brains tonight. Poor Souta! He's fighting so hard. Oh no, will the well even work now that everything has been blown to smithereens? Gah! Everything is so displaced! I still have adrenalin rushing through my body. Definitely needs another read. It has been so long and such a long story that I'm probably going to have to spend several days re-reading it. When I first found it, I couldn't stop reading until I was caught up, which took...days? I saw your nomination in the reviews. Congrats! Great chappie. I'm going to go back and try to understand a bit better while you work on the next chapter. Hahaha. Have a good evening. You deserve a relaxing night off. ^_^ Snow
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