| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 10:37 PST
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As always another excellent chapter. I really love the interplay between Sesshomaru and Kirara. I don't suppose we will find out any time soon who the "scentless freak" is working for? I'm thinking it has to be a Naraku thing. Or could it possibly be someone else. Oh well I guess I will have to wait until the next chapter!! :)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 11:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter just as I expected it to be. You are very good to keep track of all the little subplots you have running around and not lose the story. I loved that Sesshomaru is showing some humor in dealing with Kirara, but as my name suggests I think that Kirara should win the battle between the two. I thought it was so funny that Inuyasha understood what was happening between those two and had such trouble to keep from laughing while others around were clueless to the interchange. It makes you wonder how clueless Inuyasha really was sometimes. It should be interesting how Kagome handles Inuyasha's inability to go through the well and also what happened in her time and the possible loss of Souta in the time distortion, especially since he is also Kohaku. I am looking forward to the next update when it appears.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now don't that just beat to shit and back, Inu cant get through! Still loved the interactions between Sess and Kirara tho, that was cute. Till next install, update when ya can! :)
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Reviewed By: Asyla the Ctarl Ctarl On: February 16, 2008 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your story. It's wonderful. PLEASE WRITE MORE. I personal like Sesshomaru and Kirara's relationship. It's very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 19:29 PST
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With poetic license, spinning web and weaving thread,/ like Nona, you draw the story's fiber fine/ As Decima, each character's tale of life is read/ Will Morta, catlike, rub her claws against the line/ sealing their fate?//And people think I write complex stories.....good work! great chapter!
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Reviewed By: chienne de reine On: February 02, 2008 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Really I am so blown away by your story. Who knew that it was possible to include quarks in a story based around a doy-eared boy an a teenaged girl? I have to admit I read up all of the chapters in two sittings. I never studied latin, but I find myself trying to disect the chapter title before I begin reading it. (Based on the little that can be derived from the English words with latin roots)You have made developed an interesting dynamic between the charaters. I truely have enjoyed it so far. Just a little "What if...?". But if Miroku used the Wind Tunnel on Kanna would both the voids be negated? I mean two nothings can not exist in the same place. Anyways, I can't wait until next chapter.
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Title: A thouroughly enjoyable read...
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not often find myself reviewing for stories I read, due to my very busy schedule and figuring out what to really say etc... however, I would just like to say that I began this story at around 7pm yesterday and I have yet to sleep because I could not stop reading. lol. Seriously. My pupils are like needle points.:) Well done, though I must admit a bit of a shock with the Kirara and Sesshomarou pairing, as I happen to be an adamant fan of Rin, Sess pairings. (Rin being older of course!)In any case after I sucked it up, I didn't find the pairing to be nearly as odd as originally thought (Just so you know, I don't really read fanfics with any other Sess pairings, I'm biased, I know :) :)so extra Kudos to you!) In any case I eagerly await your next chapter or any Insight you might want to give on your writing technique, inspiration, etc as I have a degree in English Writing myself and have been contemplating writin a fan fic... Yours, Zetta
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 05:58 PST
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Wow...things are just beginning to be sorted out it seems, and it's already a lot to keep straight in my head! I wonder where all Souta has been and where he'll end up going before everything is resolved--and I thought Kagome had it rough! Her revelations about life and death were beautifully written, by the way. Thanks for another excellent chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 04:20 PST
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This was worth the wait. The character interactions continue to be a high point. Kirara has everything well in paw, doesn't she? Mao/Buyo is wonderful, I hope however the timelines sort themselves out she gets to continue to exist.
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Reviewed By: Sark On: December 17, 2007 03:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was completed when i started it...im all sad now cause i have to wait for you to update :'(. oh well awesome fic btw keep it up
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 05:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have delivered yet another beautifully written chapter. I understand why Kohaku was not revived, but I had hoped for a happier end for Runt. It is part of life and as such I understand it. Your amazing writing has pulled me in even further!! It has been such a long time since I have enjoyed a story such as this. I truly enjoy your story and I also enjoy the notations at the end. I was glad that you explained what a blazar was. I did not major in any of the science fields in college...but now I wish that I had :) I wish you continued success and will await the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 19:08 PST
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A new chapter! Yay, Cawfeather! The balance imaging was very good. I liked it all, but now I need to go back and get all in context...Nexus to nexus/flux to flux,/ from nexus you were born,/ to flux you shall return,/ until all points converge/ into the great singularity/and all dharmas dance into the one. Svaha!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 13:25 PST
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You tell my old knees that seiza is a superior way of sitting! LOL. You can get little benches made if you're doing long sitting like this, like when you are doing shikentaza...anyway, saying hi to you and Cawfeather as you wend your way through editing...and I enjoy each and every rereading....
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 03:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kove this story please keep going.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 19:49 PST
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I was talking about chapter 4. I think I forgot to mention that...LOL. Considering what else you updated....
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