| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an absolutly magnificent story so far... I love it.. Everything that is goin on is pulling me further and further into this story... I cant wait to see what happens with kirara and sess... o0o0 and i wonder where jaken is.. gosh please update soon.. so many questions! laters!
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Reviewed By: K_J On: January 17, 2007 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It took me a while to read it though, but i like long stories too. ; ) I saw some fan art that was suppose to go along with this fic and I started reading. I have to say this is very well done! I have never read a fanfic like this one before and thats what makes it even better. 10 out of 10! Your fic totally deserves it! I can't wait till the next chapter is up!So please update ASAP!!! also I wanted to ask if you would drop me a line when you update your fic again? It would be very much appreciated! born_to_live_91@hotmail.com Later, Kambri-Jade
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 08:06 PST
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hey i am so glad you updated! anyway i am thinking that Houseki person is sorta like the living jewel or something tell me if i am wrong. well update ASAP... seeya!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! Most excellent...and was rather exciting as well. Kohaku is himself it seems now, and what a way to find out about the baby. But were they trying to create the living jewel on purpose? Am gonna have to go back and reread that one again. :P Again, great chap...Update when ya can... ;)
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:58 PST
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Oops - review got cut off - I meant wind tunnel, rather than wind scar...
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! I love the fifth soul that has to be balanced out - nice to see you work Shippo into the living jewel. It was great to see Sango's and Miroku's reactions to her pregnancy, but I do have one little nitpick - wouldn't Miroku sense the wind tunnel, rather than the . (Sorry, the story is so good that this bugged me a little...)
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:56 PST
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Wow, I'm hoping my first guess as to she is is wrong. Very good use of an element that had been introduced into the story as something not related to the main plot suddenly becoming important.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 00:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was quite a cliffhanger you left us with. Will they be the living jewel by the next chapter or is something else going that might spell trouble? Oooh, I can't wait to see how this turns out. Hope everyone makes it through OK. Great chapter! As always, I look forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 05:37 PST
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God I love it!!!!! Update soon.
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Autumn the Reviewer On: January 06, 2007 23:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im too lazy to sign in cuz i just wanted to read the newest update, but this story is getting better and better the longer it gets. I dont know how many more chapters there will be, but i hope you write many many more. I love the kai wolves, especially. So, keep up the good work and i look forward to your next chapter. :) Autumn
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 13:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what happened to everyone?!?! I hope there alright. Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 03:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapters...very good. Sorry I missed reviewing the last chap, tho I did get to read, I didn't get to review. I see things are really heating up now. Everyone's getting some, then all hell breaks loose. Damn. And now they're all stuck in the Time Thread. Love your Demon Inu btw... :P Great chap...Update when ya can.. :D
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Title: Ch. 60
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 03:32 PST
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Lots and lots of Miroku - YAY! STILL being in a cliffhanger - *whimper* Cold nose - HEE!!
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Title: Holy Crap!
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 00:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, all hell is breaking loose it seems. I get the feeling this story is starting to build towards a conclusion. And I have to say, no matter how badly I want to see how it ends, I'm going to be really sad when it's over. Loved these last two chapters. Can't wait to see how Shippou reacts when he finds Kagome and Inu still, umm, "connected." And it was nice to see where Sess and Kirara ran off to. There's so much going on in this story right now! I hope you get a chance to update soon cause I'm on the edge of my seat here.
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!! This chapter and the one before it! The suspense in this story is killing me. How many chapters are you going for? I don't want it to end!!!
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