| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akebo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 14:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That is really all I have to say. You have done something that many writers, including myself, cannot do: You have expanded another storlying in a way that it does not feel as AUish as it would be otherwise, but still retain each characters character. I loved every hour [Of the better of three days] reading this. I can't wait for your next chapter to come out!
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Title: Facets of the Living Jewel
Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 18:56 PST
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I SERIOUSLY hope you plan on finishing this fic! Your writing pulled be into the story and i may cry if you've given up on it! ;)
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: November 28, 2006 07:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Ok that was amazing!!! Although I really hope that the next chapter is going to contain some more of Inu teaching Kag things because she really is stupid sometimes in the way she does things. I mean I do have to admit that since I've taken Biology and Zoology and am obsessed with those nature shows I do know a bit more than the average person when it comes to animal behavior but some of the stuff Kagome does is just blatant ignorance. *sigh* oh well. Anyway it was an amazing chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope Souta's ok though it wouldn't be that bad if Ji-chan died, only because he's old and has lived life, but Souta is so young. Well update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Twiching!!
Reviewed By: lindy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 12:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The'ENJOYMENT FACTOR" Sould have higher a setting. I totally loved this fic! Due to time constrainst it's taken me a few day to read all 58 chapters, but it's simmilar to trying to catch a favorite show. "I'm Reading Here!!" I'm glad Sango and Miroku finally got their feelings straighten out. Now if only Kagome would ask about the birth control. I wonder why Sango hasn't noticed her "time" hasn't started...I guess she's had a lot on her mind...hehe. Twiching till the next chapter ~_~
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, so intense that they interrupted the time continuum. What will happen in Kagomes time with her parents and brother, and what will happen becuz of the shards in the Goshinboku? Interesting....Great chapter and update when ya can! :D
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Title: If this were a movie i would rate it "5 golden stars"
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish that someone would make this exquisite piece of written art into a movie! I must tell you that you have kept me on the edge of my seat for the whole 58 chapters, that you have up soo far...And i must confess that i read the first 6 chapters and i got hooked, i read the whole 58 chapters in 2 days and a half...and thats alot of reading. iPoe i have bookmarked your story! And i had my favorite parts in the fic, like when you made Aois' last pup resemble InuYasha, (being a runt and white and all that); or when Sesshou got mesmerized by humanoid-kirara; I loved the Neko-language, prrrt Hsssst
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Reviewed By: pIpsquEAk On: November 22, 2006 08:36 PST
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I don't know if you noticed that someone had wrote a complaint about reviews, it got me thinking that perhaps you also disliked people not reviewing. I truly enjoy your story but I can't seem to find the right words as I am not a very outspoken person so have never reviewed before. Your plot, creativity and characters are great and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 20:14 PST
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I lovedc it update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:50 PST
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oh, my, god. have i told you that i love you way with words? the beginning was so intense, a regular shopping experience catipulted to a life and death stuggle where mama higurashi doesn't know if she lost her brother and her son to the nexus. the mental images of the moon rising so close in the sky, like it was fighting for space the the earth... and then demon inuyasha and kagome. he is so dominant but so childlike in a way. they both stuggle to understand each other fully. it seems as though the bonds they share may be an different variation on the bond midoriko and kagome's father want the group to have to form the living jewel. will midoriko be made aware of this bond? and the way you used almose innocent sensory movements to increase the passion between the two...wow. i loved the cliff hanger. did the choas in the modern world happen because of the shards in the Goshinboku (which i'm guessing would be anchored no matter what since it is a tree of ages) or did the shards stop the chaos. i cant' wait till the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:04 PST
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Wow, hot lemon content AND nail bitting cliff hangers in one chapter. The wait between chapters is getting harder and harder.
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Title: Teach the Girl Latin!
Reviewed By: butteryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 10:44 PST
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"Inuyasha, I'm human. I don't understand your language!" - well, obiviously, she needs to learn Inu-ish (or the closest thing she can take in her school, which would be latin)... very well done. I like how his smile is not human. Gave excellent imagery... and nice hot lemon to boot!
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Title: Alsome
Reviewed By: Vegetas4Life06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 14:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i beg of you update. this is a alsome story, ilove the plot and how you wrote it. if you do not update i will go into depresion.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 23:25 PST
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Oh I'm so happy that Miroku and Sango have their relationship back on track. I was getting a little worried about Sango there for a minute. Excellent chapter. I'm still dying to know what Kagome and InuYasha are up to for the full moon. And what about Sess and Kirara? Kirara may have been taking over the story a bit but I'd still love to know where she ran off to. As always I can't wait for more. Hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: neobaby08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 16:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG i love this story i must say u are one of the most magnificent writers i have seen or noticed or w/e ne ways i rlly wanna kno wat happens so update soon i rlly enjoy reading ur story thnx for writing it
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb chapter as always! But! Was really looking forward to finding out about Inu and Kag! XD (But this chapter is still GREAT!) Thank you for taking the time to write. I don't think I could ever run out of ways to complement your work! :D :D
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