| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: Awesome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, and equally great lemon...now, I wonder what Demon Inu and Kagome are up too...hmmm... :P
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 14:39 PDT
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I really liked the wedding; eloping just seems more in character for Sango and Miroku. At least different.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: October 27, 2006 00:05 PDT
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Ouch, lol! Miroku abducted-eded Sango-chan, lol!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 15:39 PDT
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loved it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 08:53 PDT
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That was a great chapter!! Miroku and Sango married now!! So sweet. I love this story so much. It is so worth the wait for each chapter that comes out!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 06:32 PDT
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now i fully believe that miroku represents wisdom. he thought things out and approached sango in a way that was still very much him, but not sexually explict. and she finally managed to voice what she was so afraid of. i have to wonder though why she was so concerned about inuyasha knowing that she and miroku had sex, when he and kagome are mated in demon eyes but not married in human. inuyasha would never judge her like that. and i loved how miroku came to the conclusion that it is the hanyou that is the most courageous because he fears letting either side of himself have total control. it would be like losing a part of what makes him, him. as much as i was hoping to see demon inuyasha again, i really enjoyed the sango/miroku bonding. things need to be out in the open for them to ever hope to achieve the power of the living jewel and perhaps now that miroku's mind is more settled he will have more success with kagome and the mind link. i do have one question though. did kagome and inuyasha actually complete a mind link and midoriko doesn't realize it or is it more of a product of their mating and their powers acceptance of each other. beautiful chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 05:14 PDT
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Loved it! I can't get over how wonderful a write you are... Can't wait fr the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 26, 2006 03:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!!! you suck!!! I was waiting for what happens between Kag and Inu and then I see have a lovely new chapter up but it's all Sango and Miroku!!! Don't get me wrong I like the pairing and they should be together for forever but I was really looking forward to the inu and Kag stuff. Inuyasha sounded down right delicious and you are making me wait even longer. *growl* you better update soon. Anyway it was a good chapter but I only gave it a six on the enjoyment factor because it was a big let down that Kag and Inu were nowhere in here.
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Title: Ch. 57
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 03:14 PDT
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Wonderful! I'm loving the possession jokes. I can't wait to see their reaction when they find out just what is possessing her. But will the baby be affected by the Living Jewel
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:58 PDT
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So. A part of the being that was formerly the 'great priestess' Midoriko has succumbed to the hatred within the body of Kikyou. And Kikyou has allowed Midoriko to control her body... but only to kill Inuyasha and the Shikon no Tama. I don't think Midoriko has as much control as she thinks.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:27 PDT
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If it took power for her to go back to Inuyasha after he pushed her in, how did she get through when he pushed her in? Was she using her energy, or was she simply not aware of her energy being used. Also, if Naraku were to erase time itself, would the Time Lord die? Because, if he is essence of time, and time is dead, than... he must also be dead. Another question, and I know I'm taking this really far: If the time rip, so to speak, was cause by Naraku and because he obtained the jewel, was it also perhaps caused by Kikyou's betrayal and the corruption of Midoriko. One last thing: Is Midoriko on equal status with the Time Lord, or is she greater? Or is he? Because Kagome, being the Time Lord's child and the daughter of Innini, whatever she is, could very well be as strong as - or stronger than - Midoriko, depending on their individual levels of power.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:20 PDT
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So... double meanings...?
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:14 PDT
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Wait one minute... Kagome's mother is some kind of demi-goddess who had Kagome - and maybe Souta - with some sort of God? Is the Time Lord a god, or is it just some really powerful being that is a title passed down through generations or something. I don't understand! *waiL*
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 08:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^GOMEN!!!!! GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN. REALLY. I didnt get a chance to read n review cuz of school n all, but I jus wanted to thank you for updating; n why'd you take so long!^__^ Jus joking, i took long to read too. Enyway, I do luv this fic lots, n i've been real bored, cuz it's only homeworks i've been doing n having to study for all these tests the teachers are giving us. I swear that they hate us all! *sigh* It's so stressful, really! I sometimes end up sleeping in class then having to get the nots from my friends.lol So i'm here, n i'll try review more, k?^__^ Oh yea, i started my first fic, only 3 chappies tho. Pwease read it n tell me how you like it, n if you enjoy it. Go easy on my now, my first fic^.^ ~ I'm so sleepy!!! n school's 2morrow. *sobs* lol, Happy writing. =D
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: melf On: September 28, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!! what the hell are you tryen to do to me? what a cliffy! you so better upadte again soon!!! and what was that shit with sango and inu? i'm not to happy about that little part. anyway overall it was good.
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