| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 23:13 PDT
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Congrats on all the awards! And thank you for the update. What a chapter! Poor Miroku and Sango. Hope they work everything out soon. Miroku should really listen to his Sensei's advice; it'd do them both good. And I love the way you do fulldemonInuYasha. Can't wait to see where he takes Kagome. And was Kirara going home with Sess? Heh, that's so cute. I hope you can continue to find time in your real life to keep on amazing all your zealous fans with more of your story.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:55 PDT
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RWAR!! Omg, this is SUCH an awesome fic!!! I just read 56 chappies in about 5 hoursssss soooo good!!!! I love this, and I love what you've done with Inuyasha, you deserved all those prizes and awards!! I can't wait until you update this amazing fic!
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn On: September 27, 2006 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh....such a satisfying read. Another original, exceptionally well written chapter! I just have to know where Inu is about to take Kagome. Don't make me wait to long! wooh hoo!! :D
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 26, 2006 18:58 PDT
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i love you. update soon please? i would like, dance with joy(??? .. yes, i would.. in my own special way..uh. yea, anyways) if you were to update this before a month passes ...so dont procrastinate. i hate waiting. i had to wait for like... almost two months (kinda)for one chapter. but this is an amazing story, i will wait forever... or like until you havent logged on for like a year. i might give up after then. love you!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 04:37 PDT
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With so much set up and so little pay off this time next chapter promises to be GOOD! I loved Miroku checking to see if Sango was possessed. Heh. I'm sure many fathers to be before him have wondered the same thing even when they knew the cause.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 19:03 PDT
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ohh, lovely chapter. Demon Inuyasha is so very hot. Sango getting aroused was a little strange though. I wasn't sure where that was coming from. Please update soon with more Demon Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 25, 2006 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! you had me wait over a month for this and you cut it off there??!!! There better be a lemon in the next chapter, this is just too promising to not have one. anyway I can understand your lack of free time, I just started working at a vet hospital and I have very few days where I'm not working...it kinda sucks. Anyway the story is getting very good and I can understand Kagome's reaction to Inu's change, he sounds absolutely delicious. ^.^ I gave you an 8 on the spelling and grammar cuz you had a few words strung together into some nonexistant words. Other than that and not putting the lemon in this chapter it was very good update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:34 PDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 14:52 PDT
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I'm hoping for triple lemons next chapter but knowing you evil authors it'll probably be all Sangsty and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Luna18 On: September 25, 2006 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Kagome's soo lucky..she has one hell of a sexy Inu-Hanyou at her side that never fails to surpise us! I can't wait to see what will happen now..a sane full Inu Demon? May the sparks fly! Oh, and is somthing going on between Kirara and Sesshy by any chance? That would be original if you ask me, but if you ask me again, I'd honestly see that tiny fact a litte..strange. That pairing sounds even more werider than the usual Sess/Kag pairings (Both Kags:Kagome belongs to Inuyasha only and Kagura..well..I don't like seeing her with Sess for some reason, he deserves much better^x^) It's your story, it's up to you to decide! Thank you for being such a good author!!XD
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Reviewed By: Namine On: September 25, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese..pleese..PLEESE tell me that my brain is funtioning wrong..pleese tell me that you didn't just hint a possible Sess/Kirara pairing near the end of this chapter.. .. .. eek, sounds far more worse than the Sess/Kago pairings..*shiver* Mabye it's just me. No. HOPEFULLY...*gulp*
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Title: sempai18
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another chappie. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 not signed in On: September 25, 2006 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie...hope to see the next one soon, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 25, 2006 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! Nooooooo! Why'd you stop there?! I really have fallen in love with this story. I like how full demon Inu is coming out more and more. Your writing style is amazing to. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 25, 2006 09:09 PDT
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ohhh the ears! demon inu just couldn't let him keep the ears. and sango...she and miroku are going to be in a boatload of trouble once the cause of her mood swings comes to light. and imagine, miroku jealous of inuyasha! and did sesshomaru walk off with kirara under his fluff? won't they notice she's missing? looking forward to next time. i love it when inuyasha exudes masculinity.
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