| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: May 10, 2006 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you get the next chapter out soon. That was a nasty cliff hanger. I've been waiting a long time to start reading that conversation. Please consider this encouragement.
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Title: Cool Update...
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 10, 2006 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an interesting update. Sorry about the bad news. Anyway, I wanted say that was worth the wait. Reminds me of the past week I've been having. I hope to see more soon. Tryst.
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Title: Chapter 43?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker snort* Inuyasha thinks that Sesshoumaru is a figment of his imagination. And Sesshoumaru thinks that Inuyasha is an idiot. Well, that's nothing new. LOL I really like that you have Sesshoumaru actually having some feelings for Inuyasha, but I think that the prick has some splainin' to do. He seemed to still be considering kicking Inuyasha out. I don't know how to read him. Now Inuyasha really does seem to have a real disorder. If he doesn't, you might need to explain that to us. I'm getting interrupted and will be back if I didn't finish my train of thought here. Anyway, great chapter. Significant move forward. I really liked that Inuyasha was able to explain things to his mate. It was nice, the way you set that up. Snow
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angry lil sesshy! he needs to take a few mood swing pills... infact, I think they both need some haha! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: May 10, 2006 15:19 PDT
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Inuyasha is stupid! Damn I love this fic *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: Nahau On: May 06, 2006 00:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! I enjoy reading it and can't wait till the next chapter comes. Although I do have one question about the seer's name. Sturaki...? I like the name but it seems like it would be Sutaraki. I don't mean to be rude, but there's no way to write that Japanese name in hiragana, katakana, or kanji. I just thought you might want to know that. I sure you get a lot of annoying reviews about Japanese grammar, so I'll leave you alone about it. But keep up the great writing and update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: April 28, 2006 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Nice Job. I don't know about the rest of the reader/and or reviewers but I DEFINENTLY did NOT see that comming. ANyways, I just wanted to review as to let you know yes, people are reading your stories, please keep them going!
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Title: Chap. 43
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 05:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relief! Sturaki and Inuyasha's pack made it to the castle safely. Most diplomatic of her to avoid saying the "I" word while gaining entrance. Had to snicker at the 'mime' cage that Inuyasha is in. He could leave as soon as he believes that it's not real. Which brings up another thought; if Sessohmaru is in his head, who or what part of his 'id' is over at his 'house' running it? The human Inuyasha doesn't believe that Sess really needs or cares for him;he is pretty adament about Sess not being 'worthy'. If that part of Inu (and maybe his hanyou self 'cause the human self would be too scared to go alone!) go over to Sess's head, what would they find that would convince the human Inu to rejoin and Sess is in deed worthy? Maybe a little Sess (howling white dog) that needs comfort and trapped in a cage. Oh, yeah….you just went and left us hanging with that cliffie!! ;-) lol Looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 22:37 PDT
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OH MY GOD! you update now I say lol please
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Reviewed By: Taiji On: April 23, 2006 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have one word for you. TEASE! The evil cliffies are cruel and evil punishiment. And the teaseing is just as bad. I feel so used. XD I want more I can't get enough of this story and getting Shessy in Yasha's head is the bomb! I look forward to seeing how he deals with the shit that's been going on in Yasha's head. Maybe poor little Yasha can finaly get a break! Hope that you update soon! Ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 42 or 43?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 19:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooh, Ooooh. You bitch! You just had to leave such a wonderful chapter right there! And it was awesome! Everything about it was great. Wow, and Sesshoumaru gets to see for himself exactly what was happening to Inuyasha. And, OMG, the human does not have his mark! What is Sesshoumaru and Lady Sturaki going to do!? Please do not keep us hanging in the next chapter. *whines* Awesome, awesome chapter! Sorry it took so long. I had to finish some research. You go girl!---Snow
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Title: cool update, yaaay.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 23, 2006 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe. Well now. Evil point to leave us hanging at. Is Sesshomaru gonna be able to free him, or not? And what about his human and demon sides? Will there be more of a physical confrontation between them and Inuyasha? Or even Sesshomaru? Somehow... I do not see this being resolved quickly. Thats cool. Please, I beg of you, update soon? Tryst.
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: April 23, 2006 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! so cute! i liked the youki yasha! adorable! will sess get hanyou yasha out?? i hope so!! great chapter!
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Title: Inuyasha's POV
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I was just thinking that Inuyasha's three perspectives sound like the id, the ego and the superego. Very interesting.
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: Awesome! On: April 21, 2006 17:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I missed a review. Oh, and incidentally, I think that I titled chapter 41's review as 40. I loved your characterization of and dialog for Totosai. You made it so witty and true to the character; forgetful and very blunt. The history that was gleaned was quite a bit to process. We also get to see more depth with Myouga's character. His concern was very endearing. Oh no! Please tell me that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's mating is not just an effect of the swords blood bond! Even if it weren't true and Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru thought it was, what havoc would that tidbit of information wreak? What a suspenseful ending. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Is the group going to make an appearance and totally screw things up? Will Sturaki arrive and save the day or will the mates recover and choose to go their separate ways? Of course, I know that you won't answer all of those questions in one chapter. But it's nice to wonder. Great chappie, Snow
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