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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@ you must finish! This story is amazing! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee finish!!!!!!1 XD
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 20:55 PDT
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didnt you have a scene with the new moon before? anyway. love the fact that you're continuing despite the demands of RL. Inu is so uncertain, doesnt help that Sess, being Sess, is not as emotive as Inu. Still, Inu needs a clue sometimes. ah....awaiting your next installment...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I can't wait please update soonI want to see what happens now that it is the night of the full moon.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: May 24, 2008 20:26 PDT
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Inuyasha seems quite slow on the pickup doesn't he? Perhaps if he's going to be so dim Sesshomaru can just keep some beef jerky in his pocket and lure Inuyasha around with it.
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Reviewed By: sbr On: May 24, 2008 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what? You really suck! That is a horrible way to end a chapter! It's cruel! What did your loyal fans ever do to you? HUH!? ToT sooooo mean!
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Title: Chapter 55
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 16:38 PDT
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I can't believe that I didn't review chapter 55! Especially when it was such an awesome chapter! I so loved Sesshoumaru's wicked thoughts about killing Kagome. That was too much fun! And...you know me. The action was great! There was also Inuyasha's wonderful facial expression when Sesshoumaru told him that he could just ask him to release Kagome. Really, this was probably the most fun chapter out of the whole fic. It wasn't filled with angst and was quite humorous. I do hope we see more fun in the future. And, you know what? I think Inuyasha should get to use those beads. Sesshoumaru shouldn't have complete control of them. Inuyasha deserves justice! Not that Kagome is evil. I hope you decide to give her a little slack. She's not the greatest heroine, but she is just a kid doing the best she can. Her immaturity just gets in the way. I really don't think she means any real harm. Anywho, a wonderfully done break from the angst. I really enjoyed it. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 15:08 PDT
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Oooh, even though I understand it, those two can be so annoying! However, Inuyasha was supposed to give Sesshoumaru a chance. He's not being fair, even though he has been treated like shit his entire life. He's breaking his promise. Sesshoumaru had helped him and had gone against all of his instincts in order to refrain from killing Kagome! And Sesshoumaru isn't going to stand on his head and change how he communicates! If only the two could learn how to communicate. Grrr. As for Sesshoumaru, he has no clue how his words affect Inuyasha. He could at least try to lighten up a bit, to show a bit more kindness, no matter how distasteful. He's not remembering his conversation with Inuyasha and his two other sides. Those two need some serious alone time. That, or both of them need a swift kick in the pants. Oh, I just love the way you described Sesshoumaru when he was talking about his plan to use the beads. Downright evil. I can't help it. That was thrilling. How does Inuyasha even think he can get away from Sesshoumaru? He's human! I can see some of the pack believing that they need to rescue him. After all, he hadn't acted out of character in his behavior toward them. They might see him as a victim. In fact, he is a bit of a victim. That leaves Sturaki and the guards who have been ordered to keep Kagome. Wow, this is going to be tough. I'm surprised that Inuyasha's other sides haven't gone into a fit again. I doubt that the demon has any power right now. That might help him out in that fashion, but not in escaping. Yay! We have a bit of action. Inu is going to try to run away. Can't wait to see what happens! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 09:44 PDT
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Awesome!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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Title: Chapt. 55
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 10:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Sesshoumaru! Yeah, he finally takes Kagome out! Very happy to see the kotodama finally gone; Sess has gotten through to her with a strangling neck-hold. Take it off or die. Hmmm, how will he use the kotodama on Kagome? I just hope she has to wear it as long as Inuyasha had to. Although Sesshomaru may opt for her to wear it for forever...lol...I can see him having it set up with revolving key words said by any one with more sense than she has and having it tighten or loosen in relation with how she responds to 'being kept in line'. Or maybe like Pinocchio, she will have some body part visibly change somehow...lol...maybe some clown makeup complete with rainbow hair. I'm looking forward to what he comes up with. And I'm hoping that he can keep Inuyasha from finding out so he doesn't try to get her out of some just punishment for her attacks on him. I really enjoyed this chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 01:06 PDT
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i just discovered you story, and i'm so glad that i did. i don't think my family is as glad as i am, though. let's just say that it was more than just a lost weekend. i love your characterizations. i do think that inuyasha gave in to the idea a little quickly. but it wasn't so quick as to bring the whole story into question. i love your depiction of sesshoumaru, and his complete lack of understanding of his brother's emotional attachments. but, he's trying to be good for inuyasha. it's just so cute. the flow and intensity of the story are it's strong points. it's hard to leave, once it's started. you have a talent for storytelling that i envy. i reserve the right to make a guess as to the nature of the swarm, at this point. it's just more fun to read your words about it. but the fact that it's now going after couples, and not individuals, of high ranking youkai, suggestes that it is slowly making it's way to the brothers. another bump in their road to happily ever after.... thank you so very much for this wonderful story, that you are so masterfully telling. i will try to be patient while waiting for future updates.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 17:57 PDT
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i was going to ask you about the "creature" - i didnt know what to call it. obviously the title is about the conflict with the creature the interim is just a reminder - looking forward to the real chapter
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Reviewed By: FG On: April 27, 2008 10:49 PDT
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My dislike of Kagome seems to be nothing in comparison to everyone elses hatred. Ahaha! Well, Sesshomaru could use those beads to his own advantage...but I thought the beads could only be used by Kagome because she was the priestess....or something like that? Ehh...I havent seen Inuyasha in such a long time. -FG
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Reviewed By: DollyLauren On: April 27, 2008 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely review on this site as it takes forever but you deseve praise because you have written such an AMAZING piece of ficyion.I am totally in love with this story!!!!!! The characters are very belivable because you think about how the characters minds work ; not just decide you want a certain outcome and skip how you got there. The plotline is also creative. You have a true talent for writing !! Can't wait to see the next chapter - PLEASE update as soon as possible and i have become addisted to this story.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 18:19 PDT
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Oh man, I hope the kitsune lord is okay. He probably had something to do with the army that attacked that thing. I like him. Please don't kill him off. It's good that the other youkai are banding together. That must take a lot to accomplish, especially during mating season. I'm very intrigued by what this thing wants from our boys and whether or not the humans can be of any help. I don't think you've mentioned it preying on humans. Sturaki seems to think it's evil. But, if it has no mind, how is it evil? Unless it came from hell. You have me so curious. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so worried about the kitsune lord. He's someone that Shippou should probably meet. ^_^ Snow
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