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| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: AmbroseWulf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you write more on this story soon. I really liked it and found it a fresh take on the Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha pairing. It left me wanting to know what the swarm that is coming west is and to find out what Sesshoumaru's private talk with Inuyasha's human self will be like. More, please? Pleasse?
| Title: NO DONT STOP
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 06:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your not just going to leave it here before the pups are found out about and born are you? Plus they would still need demonic energy to form and grow right, how are they going to get that when InuYasha is human, and how would that effect them?? Please PLEASE PLEASE!! Right more and update soon
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 01:38 PDT
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Ah, I thought Inuyasha was afraid that Sesshoumaru would attack him because he's human, but it's more because the human had tried to prevent the mating. Inuyasha seems to have a real identity problem. I hope he gets that worked out. For once, I really liked Sesshoumaru's take charge attitude. Can't wait to see how he proves to Inuyasha that he wants him, even as a human. Heheh. Perverted thoughts are running through my mind. I'm glad he got to Inuyasha before Inuyasha made it back to his friends. That would have been a mess. Still can't wait to see how you handle the pregnancy during his human time. Oooh, Sesshoumaru doesn't know yet that he's pregnant. I wonder how he will react when he finds out. That will be interesting. I'm sure he'll be thrilled and I wonder if he will worry over Inuyasha to the point of driving Inuyasha insane. LOL I wish Sango and Miroku were a bit more understanding, but I guess Sango would take Kagome's side. That really sucks for Inuyasha. It would be terrible if he lost his friends. Well, can't wait til the next chapter! We still have a monster, Inuyasha's new powers, and Kagome's punishment to look forward to! Not to mention Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's little 'talk'. Heheh. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 17:53 PST
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Having Sesshoumaru made for Inuyasha was a great twist. I'm surprised that Sturaki would bother discussing it with the humans. Poor Shippou. He can't really explain the beta mate position to adults. I can see where Kagome might have a problem with incest, until it is explained. However, I don't understand her attitude toward two males being together, unless I'm just different. Maybe that difference is why I don't hang out with crowds of people. Perhaps I am unaware of just how much difficulty gay people have with being accepted because I am choosy about who to befriend. I'm glad that Miroku seems to be accepting. Anyway, can't wait to see what Inuyasha is about to do! I hope Shippou can keep him from doing anything rash. It would be so funny if Inu turned into a girl in order to handle the pregnancy. I hope his humanity doesn't destroy his pregnancy. That would be terrible! His body is going to have to decide what to do about that. I wonder if it could give up human nights altogether? That sure is a dilemma. Oh! I had an idea. My kids loved to imitate adult behavior. You can now get kids toy computers and keyboards. They'll need to learn how to type anyway. I'm sure you could find something. That might give you some time to write. Kids love imitating mommy. ^_^ It's an idea. See you next chapter! Snow
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 05:23 PST
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the joy of another chapter! i'm so glad that you found the time to post this. i think you did a wonderful job with the explanation of time. it's not an easy concept to express. the lack of understanding on sesshoumaru's part continues in an entirely believable way. he just can't accept those pesky emotions, can he? i can't wait to see what destiny you have set for inuyasha to fulfill. and i would guess that the swarm is there to insure the child he carries does not save the world from darkness. i hope you find the time to update again soon, but however long it takes, i will wait.
| Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 10:17 PST
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lol thanx for the update!!
| Reviewed By: DuosAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 22:05 PST
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I'm so glad you updated! I was afraid you had abondoned this fic (real life can do that) and all my other favorite Sess/Inu fics have also stopped updating. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: DarkAnubisPuppy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 16:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!! My mother used to say the same of me when I was a kid. Everytime she would start to do something for herself, I would come running LOL.... Awesome chapter ^.^ Update soon! DarkAnubisPuppy
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 07:32 PST
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I don't know if I ever mentioned it, but this made me chuckle: 'As Inuyasha drifted off to sleep in his tree, his mind was filled with odd images of himself as a girl and Sesshoumaru telling him how nice he looked in a kimono. It was not one of his more restful nights.' As I was reading back through, I realized just how much humor you have injected into this fic and I don't believe I've ever commented on it. You've made me grin, smile, and chuckle. I just thought you'd like to know that. Hope all is well with you! ^_^ Snow
| Title: Life...ugh!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 21, 2008 17:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd forgoten if I had reviewed for the last updated chapter and wen't to look. I got about to page 2 and decided that the more reviews there were, the better ^^' Happy Halloween, Thanksgiving, and Merry Christmas! Heres hoping you update before all those pass by ^^'
| Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: October 19, 2008 09:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of this story! I hope you plan on continuing. As Izzanami pointed out in her post, this story is great and is so much better than so many other Sess/Inu fanfics out there. PLEASE, PLEASE don't leave us without knowing the end!!
| Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 10:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I read your entire story all at once over a long number of hours back in the end of May, but I was getting ready for a wedding in the family (sewing dresses, getting kids ready, buying presents, making food, all that crap), and writing my own fics, so in my very busy-ness I didn't end up reviewing... I'm sorry I know that's pitiful. As a writer myself I usually always review everything I read. I honestly brushed it off because due to your dates for your latest revision I thought a new chapter would be up sometime soon, and I planned to review then. I normally would never do this because I myself am an avid Yaoi writer, I spend many hours a day writing my own original work, and Inu/Sess fan fics, and I know when your muse is there you can write, and write, and write, and when it's not you can't, but I was wondering... are you going to update and continue with this fic? It's really very good, there aren't a lot of nice long Inu/Sess fics that are good and get this far or finished, I hope you are planning on continuing, and you kind of left us hanging there, so I figured you were. It just seens that there are so many abandoned stories, and that's going to happen with amateur writers. Although some of us write for a living in some way or another, most fanfiction writers don't, it's just a hobby, and therefore they lose interest and a lot of very good stories die, I hope this isn't one of them. I do have one small request/suggestion; could you let all of us who are waiting for the next chapter know if you plan on continuing? I check for this story to be updated, along with others at least once a week, and I know others that check for updates to this story as well. If you're busy or just can't write at the moment, but plan to continue please let us all know, and if you're done with this please let us know too. It would be sad, but better than hoping for something that isn't coming. I noticed when looking at the other stories you have written that you have been active here in this site as of late, so I wonnder what is going on with this amazing Inu/sesshy fic. Maybe if you don't want to finish you would make it a round robin so to speak and find a good writer to finish it for you after giving them your ideas if you have any for the future of this story, or maybe someone could rewrite the idea if you don't want to continue, taking your plot and making it their own. It is very original, I haven't read another wherw what happened to IuYasha did the way it did. I myself would ofer to continue, but I would much rather read this story. When you write it yourself you don't get that oppurtunity to read it the way others would. Anyhow, I know I'm rambling, but please let us know. I have list of stories like this that I'm waiting for updates on if you don't want to contine us tell us all. It's a great story and I do hope you continue it.
| Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: August 23, 2008 09:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! I like seeing the interaction between Inuyasha and Shippo. I hope that you will be able to update soon.
| Reviewed By: Tiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope u continue really soon, cuz i love this story.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 20:30 PDT
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Ooooh, I almost forgot! I can't wait to see how you deal with Inuyasha being pregnant while he's human! Gasp! Can't wait! ^_^ Snow
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