| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimaAngel01 On: November 30, 2007 01:01 PST
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Please write more.
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 20:48 PDT
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I really love this story! I started to read it and couldn't stop! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 15:09 PDT
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Gah! I was just re-reading. It's horrible that Sesshoumaru executed those who held his father's views of hanyou and human. *shudders* How is he going to explain this! Won't there be some pretty pissed relatives of those that he executed? Wow. This could be a real problem! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall_ On: April 19, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, chapter six. You asked what was thought about the fight scene. Though it was a bit short for this action whore, your description was excellent, particularly concerning Inuyasha's last swing. You did a great job on that. Eh...yeah...I'm reading it AGAIN! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snerk* You said that Sesshoumaru was plotting and scheming. Is this a hint of things to come? Yeah, I am curious to see what he has planned for Kagome. Mind you, I don't hate her, but Sesshoumaru does need to assert himself. You have created a perfect opportunity for him to immediately take care of her perceptions. Maybe she will lose her voice long enough for him to have his say without her putting her foot in her mouth. ^_^ Aw, he found Inuyasha's voice soothing too. *warm fuzzies* And he smiled! Yes! A happy Sess is a sweet Sess. Yummy…I wonder how the differences in their parenting are going to affect their relationship. Inuyasha doesn't expect perfect obedience, but Sesshoumaru does…Hah! Sesshoumaru finds out that Inuyasha is more intelligent than he originally thought, or at least that Inuyasha had more common sense than he first believed. Good for you! And! OMG! Sesshoumaru had a little insight into how to approach Inuyasha with training to be a lord. How awesome! Now maybe there will be more understanding between them…Sesshoumaru just had to go and be a jerk. He could have explained things to Inuyasha, but instead, he just had to pussyfoot around and get Inuyasha all worked up. You are so mean. Poor Inuyasha needs a break…Hm, the strength of Inuyasha's scent claim on Shippou gave Sesshoumaru more to think about? It makes me wonder what that was. Would it be how strong Inuyasha actually is, or how much he really cares for those under his protection? Hm….Aawww, Inuyasha's adoration. That was so sweet. Still, that was mean of Sesshoumaru….If you get to the interaction with the rest of Inuyasha's pack in the next chapter, I hate to see what is going to transpire. Thanks for the update! It was really fascinating. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 15:24 PDT
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LOVED THE CHAPTER. i'm glad that inuyasha and sesshomouruare getting along better. can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your pregnancy goes alright. boy? or girl?
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Title: Chapt. 52
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is just wonderfully arrogant! And, in spite of it, he's developing a deeper appreciation for his mate and patience too. He actually explained all of his reasoning's to Inuyasha without being such a jerk. And he's going to give Kagome "THE TALK"...that should be interesting!! Will he be able to hold his temper or will he get the urge to try strangling her with his 'fluffy'? She can be pig-headed and stubborn; it's a good thing Sturaki is there. Damage control seems to be one of her talents and she does it so well. How will Kagome react to Shippo's new status? That will shoot a hole in another one of her fantasies for sure. Congrats to you on your new arrival! I hope everything goes well for you and your little one. Have a safe and happy holiday yourself too!!
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: April 06, 2007 18:48 PDT
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It has been a while, I got this one confused with another story so at first it was really confusing, but I am all caught up with now. A happy family has been created. yeah
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Reviewed By: CandyCane On: April 06, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so glad you've updated. Liked the pov and flow of this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I wonder what will happen when they get back to Inuyasha's "pack"?!? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Hope everything goes alright in the rest of your pregnancy!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: April 06, 2007 07:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear that you are getting hit from all sides. I'm glad to see that you are writing again. I rather enjoyed the description of the scent claiming. It was very detailed and interesting. I wonder how much deeper Kagome will dig herself into trouble. I hope you can write soon since this is a very enjoyable story.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I like how you see the events through both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's eye's. Your about to have a baby? Aww well congratutions. Hehe and hey if or when Inuyasha becomes pregnant at least we know you'll know your stuff. Good read, this is one of my favorite Inuyasha fics. Its also one of the stories that helped inspire my own Inuyasha fan-fiction. Looking foward to the next chapter. I wonder how Inuyasha's group is going to take all this. Even more I wonder how Inuyasha will cope with being Beta, because he just doesnt even strike me as the "roll over" kind of guy.
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Title: Hi. I was just wondering if you were going to update in the next little while?
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 05:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I was wondering if you were going to update at all any time soon? It's been almost 3 months since the last one. I know because I checked the 'update' thing on fanfiction. It said you haden't updated in a little over 2 months. Truthfully it feels like it's been longer. I guess it's really just cause i wanted to read more. I really wanna know how exactly Inu is going to explain to the others that he mated his older brother and 2nd worst enemy. In my mind it's always hilarious! Something like Miroku being freaked but accepting it because he's InuYasha's friend. Sango accepts it a little better bacause of her backround as a Demon Slayer and Kagome is pissed beyond words and leaves because in all actuallity she is really just a child. A well endowed child but a child none the less. Sorry but there are times she annoys the hell out of me. Mostly when it concerns InuYasha mating Sesshoumaru. There are few fics out there that actually show her as being mature enough to handle it. And unfortunatly for her so far you've portrayed her as an idiot. A hormonal idiot truthfully. But I digress. Is there any chance your going to update soon? If so I would loved to be notified. This is one of my favorite fics. and I can always bribe you with cookies for your kids and the 4th InuYasha movie! It's on YouTube. Just search for it. I think you'll like. Only problem with it is too much InuKag and NO SessInu. Anyway thanks for your time and listening to my rambling. Have a pleasent day/night! Arie.
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Title: 51 chapters
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been following this at aff - and your story is really great. i was hoping you'd have time to update but i guess you're still busy. i hope real life finds you okay though. but i hope you get to finish this. there are a bunch of us awaiting this fic. i can name 5 in lj alone. the 5 of us are really looking forward to your next update. this is really a beautiful story, wonderful povs.
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