| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:29 PST
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5 i appreciate your hard efforts in writting this chapter. it was well worth it. as sesshy and his mate.....but inu was kind of young. ah well he didn't really do anything. Or did he? they didn't have shirts on...
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:17 PST
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4 awww i like this one. at least now i know some of what happened on the infamous night. a drunk sesshoumaru, its good inu wasn't older...i wonder if sesshoumaru would resist.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:07 PST
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3 aww how cute. he was taking care of him. i wonder how someone so smart could be so dense.... but i love him anyways
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:00 PST
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CHAPTER 2 i guesse it is true, she does spoil shippou. Aw no one would mate a hanyou....ehehee. how do they happen across each other i wonder...
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 11:59 PST
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chapter 1 see i am reading from the beginning. i like the scene at Sturaki's house. YEAH! I am just excited about reading this story
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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chapter 45 ooo i love the three inuyashas. and the statment if i can't cry in my head where can i? serious right. i feel bad for sesshoumaru. well he knows why main reason behind the mateing.....damn i should go to sleep.......i've been reading this all night...but it is just so good!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 02:10 PST
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32 i love your evil laugh........yeah! i also love the one thing on inuyasha's mind.
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Title: *misty eyes*
Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 00:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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chapter 20 I am crying...and i didn't even start from the first chapter. i really have to read this whole thing. Even if you can't update frequently...as long as you manage to update that is all that maters.i already love this story and it's so long....lots of good story!!!
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Reviewed By: Isis191 On: December 13, 2007 11:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very new to FanFiction and this in one of the first stories that I read, and I'm gald that I did. Your story is wonderful as is your writing style. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 16:20 PST
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Great chappie! Poor Sesshoumaru. I feel so bad for him. He really has had to lower himself. It's a miracle that he hasn't killed all of Inuyasha's group. Kagome and Sango are really being bitches. I'm glad that Shippou is not being a staunch Kagome supporter. That is a relief. Poor Inuyasha just can't catch a break. I'm kind of nervous about what will happen when, and if, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha find out that their relationship may have been engineered. I would think that their father hadn't initiated the process, but had only hoped to support fate. So many bad things could happen! Miroku is smart. I just wished he had kept his mouth shut. Inuyasha is happy.....I love how Sesshoumaru is being so protective of Inuyasha. I don't believe that he can blame all of their newly developing relationship on instinct. Even if it is, I love how you are portraying it. Can't wait for the next chapter!.....I can't remember how long you had said it would be before you were going to be settled in to your new place, but I hope it is going well. Say 'hi' to the kiddies for me! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
indeed. you are sustaining the interest and the fun in this fic. glad to see you updating even if your real life schedule keeps you very busy. thank you. this fic has kept me reading. i'll go check aff, too and see if you've updated there too.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: December 09, 2007 18:30 PST
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Kagome was really quite the B in this chapter. I like how Sesshomaru is holding himself back, it's really quite the effort for him not to kill her.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 17:52 PST
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Whoa Sesshy is pissed and I don't blame him.. Kagome should listen once in a while.. Well I'm Glad the you updated!!! Good luck with the baby/babies!!!
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Title: Chapt. 53
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 11:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...And of course, Sesshoumaru doesn't think that he's an 'annoying personality' too. Albeit, a rather dangerous one. Guess The Lord of the West has never heard of that human saying, 'birds of a feather flock together'.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 10:02 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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