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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:35 EST
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Once again your knack for leaving off at that certain spot has won out and I want to hate you for it but I just can't find it in me especially after reading that amazing chapter. Once again i absolutely love how much work you put into your stories. I found myself absolutley enthralled with the whole aura examination and I love it even more how there is still a leeway in it (or at least Hiei claims) that could completely turn everything around and into Kagome's favor. Of course Kagura is something of a bitch and all but I did find it funny how she just can't stop looking at Kagome but if she has the glow its hard not to look at someone like that. After the way you left last chapter off with Kagome attacking Hiei I was all like O.o wtf? She's posessed! Of course I should have known you'd have something behind it XD I loved this chapter though. Hiei had a heart to heart with the kid, Shizuru is coming around... kinda and Hiei is a jealous, possessive little turd. I think this would be so much easier if the guy hadn't been emotionally stunted as a child but then its his emotional constipation that I've always found interesting about him and how behind his indifferrence he has his inner turmoil that he doesn't know how to express properly. Arg! I'm rambling now. Anyway I loved your chapter, I love you and I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:23 EST
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Okay, yes, you did say bad you, but I'm saying it anyways. Bad bad you. Update faster next time damnit!!!! Now then, on to the chappie-yes, I understand that someitmes plot twists are cruel and necessary devices, being a novice fanfic authoress myself, but was that cliffie and the making of Kagura's son Sesshomaru's son necessary? Really? That was so unfair . . . But overall, a good chappie that I absolutely adored and that I hope you follow up with as soon as possible!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 17:46 EST
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OMG, that was awesome! That went above and beyond expectations, the call of duty, everything! I was alternately giggling and practically crying throughout the whole thing! Hiei cracks me up. He comes to all of these startling revelations that just seem to shock the hell out of him but crack me up. And poor Kagome! You did an excellent job of retelling her side of the story. Absolutely loved it, and I still don't have a clue who the killer is. AND KAGURA! Holy Toledo, they are related! I cannot believe it! Sheshy couldn't have been unfaithful... Egads, that thought is too terrible to speak! I can't wait for an explanation for that one - it had better be good! ^_~ And, you topped the chapter off by a sweet, adorable proposal from Hiei, which was nicely accented by Kuwabara and Yukina. :D Ahh, love. AND THE PINKY STRING OF LOVE! That was just perfect! It cracks me up that Kuwabara saw the string between Hiei and Kagome, and then went through such a hard time trying to let Hiei know. What a sweetie! Excellent job on everyone, as always. Kurama just needs a swift kick in the ass, though. :D Keep up the good work, already can't wait for another update! And just four more chapters? So little time left! I will gleefully await the next chapter! ~BoxingKing
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Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: February 18, 2008 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! You have no idea how badly I was fiening for this story!! I loved this chapter soooo much, chock full of explanations that only left more questions. I do love how everyone starts to jump to conclusions without actually paying attention, and that Hiei's thoughts were the same as mine was quite funny. I mean Genkai said they were related, but just not how they were related... That statement right there leaves the book wide open, hehe. I can't really explain everything that I loved about this chapter, but my favorite is the very end where Hiei decided he wanted to be bonded to Kagome some way or another and asked her to marry him. I nearly fell out of my seat when I read that! I'm glad you were finally able to post this chapter and hopefully the next one won't take so long. I hope you and your family enjoyed the holidays. So I will going back to my corner now and will be free-basing this chapter whenever the "need" arises, and will be eagerly and impatiently awaiting the next installment. Oh and I also wanted to say how excited I was to see Kagome bring up the "jagan" issue. I've been dying and dying waiting for her to say go ahead and tell me what happened!! I know we'll have to wait but I think I can handle it!!! Well kudos to you again for another awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!!! ~ebi-chan
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Title: the deliberately missing "s"
Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 02:23 EST
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It's ME: madmiko. ^_^ Just wanted to reply to Rainstorm6189's question in her review so other people don't think I had a pervasive typo in the chapter. The "s" was deliberately left off when I was writing the possessive form of "fox." That is the correct way to do it. You don't add the "s" after the apostrophe when it follows an "x." It's just one of the quirks of the English language. ^_^ Thanks for paying close enough attention to mention it, though! I need you guys to keep me sharp. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: February 18, 2008 01:30 EST
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Wow quite a while to wait for an update but oh was it worth it..umm a lot of the 's in your story or atleast where i think it was meant to be a 's is only a ' like (he might admire the fox' taste) there were several like that and i think they were all after the word fox so maybe it isn't a typo but something you did for a reason..either way had to point that out and it was such a long chapter that i honestly had to take a few breaks from reading it...so can't remember all that i did read today in crystal clarity..however great update which answered questions but just made new ones and still leaves a few old ones unaswered
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Reviewed By: Sesshys_Girl06 On: February 17, 2008 22:57 EST
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... it's finally out! *dies*it's sesshoumaru's...marry me....twins... dose Jin come back.... omg... lots to think about. never mind the humongously long chapter...no wonder it takes you forever for a damn chapter to come out! there always so damn long.... at least it kept me busy for about 45 minutes. wow, i don't think i could write a chapter that long... i think it's safe to say that madmiko, that is the longest chapter i have ever read. i've only read one shots longer than yours, and that's it!!!! my god, i think you just set a world record.
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really don't know where to start on this review. It was absolutely amazing for one. I've been caught on a couple different things in this chapter that make me think about the entire thing. I mean, there were those two wannabe-mikos that followed Tsubaki around ne? And then there is also the chance that maybe Midoriko could've been the one to purify their souls? I don't really recall if anything was said about what happened with the souls in the Shikon but maybe Midoriko's was tainted from being with the demons for so long that she saw Kagome as being tainted for mating with youkai? Hmm. Then there is the whole Kagura/Ginjiro/Kagome/Eishumaru/Sesshoumaru thing. Sesshoumaru was just too honorable a demon to cheat on a mate in any way. Whatever the real story behind the Inu no Taisho and Izayoi and Sesshoumaru's real mother is, I am sure it wasn't good and I don't think Sesshoumaru would ever place his own mate in a situation like that. Then there is the thing Genkai said. She only said that Eishumaru and Ginjiro were related, not that they were brothers. It is possible that Sesshoumaru may have had another brother elsewhere that got Kagura knocked up. There's no way it would've been Inuyasha because he was too devoted to Kagome and dead when Kagura would have conceived. I find it hard to believe that Inu no Taisho and Sesshoumaru's mother had just Sesshoumaru. Or maybe Kagura was able to sink her claws into Sesshoumaru while he was incapacitated somewhat by the poison. I still don't think he's Ginjiro's father though. It just doesn't seem feasible, especially since Genkai only said they were related. Besides that, Kagura was nervous when they were waiting for the news, which means she had to have been deceitful about something. I wonder though...why haven't Shippou or Kurama been able to pick up on Ginjiro's scent? Or even Daitano, Sassouta or Eishumaru? I mean, if he were Eishumaru's brother, wouldn't he smell like him form Sesshoumaru's blood? I mean obviously there would be discrepancies because the mother's are different, but they're inus. They should be able to scent out pack.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: February 17, 2008 20:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!! i love this story!!! thankyou for updating, i was worried that you weren't going to continue but its fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is Shippo the one who kill Kagomes mates? is he like insanely jelous of them because he wants Kagome? and its nasty that sess cheated on her.... Ja Ne Jenna xoxox
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Title: Heheh
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Juhu Finally you updated ^^ GRRR I´m always wrong with my Thoughts about this Story LOL MHHH Maby Naraku is not Dead and hes the Puppetmaster in this Case. I hope the Next update is a little Faster. I nearlly had a Heath Attak because you didn´t update ^^ But Great Chapter I loved how you described all 3 Deads. Please update fast can´t wait to read the next Chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: alchemie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 12:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeee! I love it... though who I think is behind everything now that I've read this chapter makes me sad... Hopefully I'm wrong, but I would make perfect sense. :) I can't wait too see what you have for us next!!
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Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 03:48 EST
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the whole plot aginst kagome just stinks of nara keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 02:43 EST
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Um... wow... I really liked this new part of the story! I was dead set on a god taking over Kagome's body that this new chapter threw me TOTALY out of the water! Why would Kagome attack him? Oh well... I can kind of see why she did it! But Hiei was so sweet and caring about how he listened to her! AH!!!! I loved that part! And when he said that he would always be there for her! AH! I loved it! I really wish that she would at least tell her son's that she's almost mated to Hiei and having his kids. That way they can beat up Kurama every time he comes close to her! AH! I HATED him in this chapter! He just needs to... to... TO EAT SPIDERS! So there!!! I still don't think Kagura's son is Sesshomaru's son. And if he is she's the one that killed him. When she killed him she could have taken sperm or something off of him... hm... that's the only thing I can think of... Or Naraku did something with his blood... oh well... she can just go suck a lemon! Bitch... and so can her son! God! He's like a ROBOT!! From now on that's his name! ROBOT!!! I think I'll be happy when all the fighting is over... but then again you wouldn't have a story if there wasn't any fighting... or if you did it'd be really boring! lol! So thank god you do! AHG! The thing I want the most when I read this story will always be for Hiei and Kagome to TELL people about their relationship! AHGhg! I hate them having to hide it! And KURAMA! GOD! okokok.... I'm done... he's in the corner eatting spiders... AHGGSHA! ok. I wonder what Kagome will say to Hiei in the next chapter! I'm sure she'll say yes if that one picture on DA has anything to do with it. lol. I just spent two hours looking through all your favorites! It was really fun! I wish I could draw like that! And write like you! You're SUCH a good writter! AHG! I wish I wish I wish! *sigh* You've read one of my stories... you say it's good... but I just don't have that... UMPH! that your stories do. Hm... I guess I'll just have to work on it... practice makes perfect... Oh well. OH! I started reading this story this morning and I had to go work work right in the middle of it. All I could think about at work was getting back home so I could find out what Hiei would do. AHG! I wasn't let down! He was sooo cute! *pinches cheeks* lol. I really should be doing my home work... But writing to you is much more fun! ;p Anywho, I DO hope you update soon, but update at your own pace. I know the hardest thing for me to do is write when people hound me about it. But the extra review here or there helps a lot! ;p So here is my own helpful review, I hope your doing well at home and your kids are behaving themselves. (even though I know they're not! Kids will be kids after all. I'm the oldest so I know ALL about it. ;p) Anyway, I'll leave you to write your next big masterpiece. I hope it will be just as lovely as this last chapter was. I know I will be eagerly awaiting for e-mail saying a new chapter is out. But, but worry I won't hold my breath. (I don't think I'd get past the first two minutes alive) okok sorry! I'll really let you go now! Have fun writing! And chasing kids around!
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! *does the happy dance* So happy for the new chapter! Oh! but that better not be Sesshoumaru's son... maybe there is an unknown inu cousin hidden somewhere?? And I hope I don't have to cry when the mystery of the poison food comes out...
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: February 17, 2008 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!...a new chapter! lol Please update as soon as you can. Thanks.
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