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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 01:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!! (Little happy dance for getting an update on an absolute fav story ever!!!) Once again an amazing chappie, although I was beginning to wonder if and when it would happen >.< ... I'm SOOOOOOOOO happy that it did! Yes you answered a few of my questions but you also managed to yet again throw out a few more for me to think about... Including just who the female soul that was so desperate to talk to Koenma was (that kinda stuck with me so I'm wondering if there is a particular significance to that, hmmm?) ^.^ Anywho... You have once again done an amazing job and I can't wait to see where you lead our couple next... The fluffiness is such a nice break for all the drama this group has to deal with, then there's the tension (yipe! duck and cover cause stuffs bout to hit the fan!)! You create an amazing and surprisingly well balanced mix between the emotions and reactions that I very much look forward to (not that I doubt your abilities in the least after all this time reading your fascinating works...). Please keep up the great work and I look forward to reading your next installment, but it's late here so I've gotta go crash if I wanna get any sleep before the baby wakes up, so goodnight and laters! Michi ^.~
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 21:48 EST
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This chapter was worth waiting for and so long! I´ve read Hentai Bets two times until the new chapter of BWM and I still love it (you´ve really packed my favourite characters in that one and it´s just so damn funny). I love the secret interaction between Hiei and Kagome and I still don´t believe that Sesshoumaru slept with Kagura, maybe she stole his sperma *snicker*. Oooh, Kurama just asks for an ass whipping doesn´t he? Gods, he can be so annoying! I´m looking forward for Hiei´s kids; *dreams of a chibi Hiei* You know, you are really talented and I hope you won´t stop writing and sharing your wonderful stories with us anytime soon. When you have time would you consider a storie/one-shot/anything with Kagome and Sesshoumaru? The interaction between them in BWM is so beautiful I can´t help but want more. So technically, it´s your own fault for getting your readers addicted to your stories. You don´t want us to suffer, do you? ;)
| Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 18:15 EST
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*sighs Happily*. Once again I'm blown away and quite happy to sit here fighting tears and laughter and the squeals raring to make themsleves known. Now I have to write some fanfiction to get all my fangirly-ness out!!! Much love and miss yous! And thank you for posting such a super long chapter that was a GREAT read! I can feel the love~! Every point I read and got all happy, then looked at the scroll bar to realize I had so much more good stuff to read! It was wonderful!
| Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 14:52 EST
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Yup, almost 6 months old and working on sitting up. Now if I can just get her to roll over instead of screaming at me...ah well, she'll roll over more often eventually. Great chapter, I was soooo excited that you updated! I hope your next update doesn't take almost four months next time ;) He asked her to marry him?! That is going to have some interesting reactions all around!
| Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 13:06 EST
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I absolutely adore this chapter! The length of it more than makes up for the long wait. Besides, if people have to wait for something they want for a long time, it makes them appreciate it a might bit more. For my paper, we have to write a report about an intruiging mystery story we have come across recently and give a description on every character, a summary, opinion and short background on the author and etc. I wanted to know if I could do it on Black Widow Miko, because I told my teacher about it and she said it was a fine idea to do it on a story I go to watch expand and grow and etc. I turns out she's a big fanfiction fan herself! Though she mostly reads Harry Potter fanfition, she promised to check out your story. She would have made a better art or philosophy teacher or something. It might be a little embarrassing when she realizes the little "interactions" Hiei and Kagome have are a little descriptive for my "young mind".(She only says that cause she's twice my age.) Anyway, I wanted to know if I could do that. Now, to the actual review! This is really beginning to come out! I think Hiei could talk to Koenma about searching out for youkai specializing in mind-control and poisons. While I'm sure there'd be a lot of them, they would have to be pretty powerful which would narrow it down a bit! I wonder why Master Zang didn't say anything about training others? Actually, if none of the Ookami or Shippo or Kagome or etc hadn't done it, perhaps it was Master Zang himself? He wouldsurely have the ability to somehow paralize Sesshoumaru, and he's quite powerful. He might have the ability of controlling others. Though he kind of lacks a motive... It's so sweet of Hiei to ask Kagome to marry him! And I can just envision what Yukina would look like- as Hiei's sister, surely they would demand nothing but the best for her! I'm really beginning to despise Kurama. Seriously, I can't stand to read any fanfictions with him paired with Kagome anymore. I swore to myself to never judge other people's pairing preferences, but I really can't picture her with the evil kitsune. Most people portray him as entirely good, but your portrayal seems to bring back his Youko aspects, considering he had to be bad at some point if you really take the time to analyze his past. Poor Kuwabara must have had a heartattack when he saw the string! I know I would have if I didn't know what was going on. Kagome's love-life is a rather tangled web of intricate, delicate treaties, ne? A lot hangs over her head on merely her choice of who to mate or take into her bed. I can't believe that Ginjiro is Sesshoumaru's son. Is it not possible that Kagura could have seen someone to tweaking his aura? If Kagome can dull hers down to the point where she could pass as a normal human, surely Ginjiro could alter his own to appear differently as well, so to say? And while Genkai is powerful, she is far from infathable. Perhaps Ginjiro is related to Sesshoumaru, but that doesn't mean he is his son, right? Sesshoumaru wouldn't do that to Kagome! Kagura is delluded! And I'm getting a bit to personally involved with the story, neh? I'm nearly out of characters to write with, do I'm just going to wrap this up. Take your time with the next chapter and make it extra juicy, OK? -Till next time, Youkai Goddess
| Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi(nsi) On: February 16, 2008 12:58 EST
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OMG YAY!!! wedding bells! YAY! i can see Kagome trying to find an excuse out of it though =/. she tends to do that. Kagome's confession was sorta what i was thinking it would be...that she truely didnt remember, and completely blamed herself...i'm so glad she finally knows Hiei loves her...and i dont think she should doubt Sesshy. Genkai said that Daitano and Eishu's auras were alike and they're dads were half-brothers...so i bet Kagura went out and got a cousin or something...>.< i just can't see Sesshy cheating... oh and who was the wolf George was talking about...i wonder if she had some answers...? maybe?
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 11:25 EST
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Oh, and I just wanted to saw update at your own pace, never mind how many people are screaming 'UPDATE!' at you! I noticed some of those reviews below, and know how iritating it is! I hope your family life is going well, and take as long as you need with the next update!
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 11:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness! It always blows me away how you can make your chapters so long! Then again, you have much to write about! I'm always happy to see a new chapter up for this fic- it's the only one i'll drop everything to read immediately!! So, we eventually get the crux of the matter! At first I was beginning to think Kagome was possessed, but now I'm more of Hiei's thinking- the posioned food is an interesting theory- though it still doesn't clear up how Inuyasha got pinned to the tree, or how Sesshomaru was stabbed, with Kagome scratched and unconcious from a knock to the head! The murderer must be someone with access to the households, know Kagome and her mates well, and be extremely strong in order to have overpowerered the youkai...hmm! It'll be extremely interesting to see what Hiei's jagan finds in Kagome's mind, if he gets the chance!!It was nice to see Kagome wearing pink, and holding her own against Kagura! I've always been very interested in auras, and your colourful and descriptive analaysis of Kagome's aura was a delight to read! Kwua's shock at seeing the red pinky string between Hiei and Kags was a lovely touch! I can just imagine his horror at the little demon being capable of 'loving!'!!! I have to say, I've totally fallen in love with older Shippou! It must be the kitsune thing!! ^.^ Can I have him, if he's all loveless at the end of the fic? Tehee!Oft, the friction is beginning to build between Kurama and Hiei concerning Kagome! I can't believe Kurama would actually bed Kagura, unless he wanted info- but then again, she is quite good looking- though she doesn't compare to our favourite miko!! Hiei's constant wishing to lock Kagome up in a closet is so damn cute! And the miko offering Kuwa and Yukina the uchikake was very sweet- I ca just imagine Hiei respecing her for that. Hiei turning both Yemon and Kurama's presents into dust was hilarious!! Though Kurama's braclet is still on the scene, and I wonder if that'll come into play at all... Ginjiro's true father still hangs in the balance! I don't think Sesshomaru is the father- or at least, not intentionally...after all, Genkai said they were related, but never confirmed Sesshomaru was Ginjiro's actual father. Maybe I'm wrong! I liked the fact Hiei was the one to go after Eishu- perhaps he's becoming protective of Kagome's sons without realising it! But it was a lovely bonding moment. And the ending- perfect! Hiei's not only wanting to give Kagome everything she never had, but willing to put his own ideals aside! It'll be interesting to see Kagome's answer! Well, another rivoting and engaging chapter, leaving me much to thin about! Congrats on your awards for this fic and First meeting of the MYAMP! They are well deserved!! Until next time, and good luck! ^.^
| Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 11:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved how supportively domineering dear hiei is over the full circumstances of Inu Sess and Kouga's deaths from kags PoV. Shizuru flustered is so perfect. She's always so unflappable. The tension in teh air is vibrating no matter how it seems like somting is ansered it is always gaining new questions. by this point my brain is shutting down on figuring it out, and just waiting! glad you're back and hope you had a great holiday with your family. Worth the wait
| Title: OMG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 04:21 EST
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r u going to continue this story??????!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 00:34 EST
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I know you're probably sick of hearing from me, :P, but I just HAD to beg you to send out the next chapter before I have to burry myself in the report I have to do for school. Plus, I read the next installment of Kisses: Mistltoe or No, and I nearly cheered when I heard that you might be updating soon! Convince your son to give you twenty minutes or something! Tell him about all of your adoring fans! lol. (I'm not getting creepy, am I? Can if I am, just stop me. Please. I'm told I have issues with personal space. /joking/) Till Later, Youkai Goddess
| Reviewed By: gg On: February 10, 2008 14:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHATS TAKING SO LONG!!! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: gg On: February 10, 2008 14:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHATS TAKING SO LONG!!! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Title: Please
Reviewed By: Miyoangel13 On: February 08, 2008 10:55 EST
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I'm going crazy. Please update before I lose my mind.
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 15:12 EST
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kelly, i love your writing and i'm sure it is just as extraordinary as all of your other work but lately i have been finding myself unable to read character deaths and from what i understand of this story, character death is what drives the plot somewhat. i have been very hesitant to read this even when i have the rare opportunity i have been reluctant. i give you my promise that as those trepidations ease up i will give this story a chance, just not right now. . . just know that i love you and your wonderful and twisted imagination, i consider you as one of the greats. ~ kisses and hugs, ginny
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