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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 18:00 EDT
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It's nice to see that Miroku is still maturing. I can't wait to find out what he plans to do with his newfound knowledge concerning Sango. And I definitely hope Sango can eventually realize that it's okay to have her own life and not worry about Kohaku ALL the time. Good job on the Inuyasha/Kagome interaction, too. Above all, though, I really like the way you manage to stay true to the characters of the manga and anime, even writing an alternate universe story.
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Reviewed By: Rihannon On: October 23, 2007 18:02 EDT
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I'd been enjoying your stories a lot. I think you are very creative and I like your writing style very much.
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Reviewed By: ravenreux, nii On: October 21, 2007 23:25 EDT
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There were a lot of different situations going on in this chapter, on either end of the drama spectrum, but you nailed them all. Sango and Kirara's relationship is very similar to the one in the manga/anime, with Sango being able to understand what the little cat is saying. I think that's an important thing a lot of writers miss. Miroku's growing maturity was well noted too. He's obviously starting to get control over his playboy ways. And at first it was strange for Kagome to be Inu's first, but when I sat back and really thought about it...it felt right. If Inuyasha is to stay within the boundaries of his canon-persona, he's much more reserved and unwilling to trust anyone but that special one. You were right! Ah, that's why I love this fic. It's wonderful! Thanks so much for sharin'! Reux
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a gripping story with its varied elements. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:47 EDT
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Another amazing chapter! I really do feel bad for Sango. I am glad she has been able to have a few "normal" days. And I love the special bond Kagome and Inuyasha have. You can really tell how very much they love one another. I wonder what Miroku is going to do with this new information?!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 08:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha and Kagome are so sweet.....and the sex between them is defintiely hot. I was a bit surprised that Inuyasha had been a virgin, too. But, I guess I shouldn't have been. If Kikyou was so disgusted by him being hanyou (the IDIOT), she definitely wouldn't have been able to force herself to sleep with him. Plus, he is simply too shy to go trolling for dates....and too honorable to sleep with someone in disguise. So, even though Kagome didn't expect THAT particular gift (Inuyasha's VIRGINITY), I'm sure it was all the sweeter for her because of it. They are ADORABLE....and I love reading about them. As for Miroku......he is DEFINITELY changing, slowly but surely. He actually tuned down sex when it was literally right in his face. And he is slowly setting boundaries. It's becoming clear that he doesn't like what he's become, that no one takes him seriously because he tuned himself into a human sex toy. He's always been more than that.....but his behavior didn't refelect it and the responsibility for his bad reputation is his own. And, since he made his own bed....it's up to him to change the sheets (I didn't want to say "lie in it"....because that's what got him into trouble in the first place, LOL). GREAT story....and I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea! InuYasha and Kagome were each others first! That's so sweet. Miroku definetly doesn't want to go see Inu now!! Hope he doesn't kill Miroku! LOL! Glad to see that Miroku has finnaly found out Sango's history...I hope he doesn't push her about it tho. It's going to be nice to see their relationship develop.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very awesome. I got goosebumps as well. I'm glad Miroku finally figured out what was going on with Sango. What will he do with that info is the question. I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 00:05 EDT
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GAh! Miroku you dont have to show him this now! He's BUSY!!! Hmm.. I would not mind ... ahh. never mind. >-> ANy who, once again another incredible chapter added to the story. And some background on the Kohaku disaster. And I just love how adorable Kirara is. She is just perfect. =D
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 23:59 EDT
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Wow. Lovely, hot chapter. You always have the best love scenes, tender and sweet, yet wild and primal, too. Glad Miroku found out about Sango, will be interesting to see how he handles his interactions with her now, and how she responds.
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Title: Loved it!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!! Loved I & K's moment -always loved them!!- and how their relationship is building up. Interesting situation you put Miroku through... and finally he found out what happened on Sango's life. Tough life, poor Sango. Wonderful chapter!!!! Thanks for sharing it with us!!! :)
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Title: HOT!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (NSI) On: October 17, 2007 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GUH! What a steamy chapter! And so cute too. I loved their interactions. Inuyasha was too sweet and Kagome was revving to go. Great job, chica! And Congratulations on all your nominations. You deserve them. You work so hard in this fandom. Take care.
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 16:28 EDT
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Another great chapter. I love your portrayal of Inuyasha and Kagome in this story. Inuyasha's solution to getting horny when he shouldn't had me giggling, but what I really liked was their interaction later on, together. It was nice to see them both finally get what they wanted, and to see them not being quite so shy with each other. I'm looking forward to finding out what Sango and Kirara are up to.
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: October 11, 2007 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect - so sweet! I don't usually like AU but your characterizations are dead on, yet the setting brings out new dimensions in each of them. As always, a treat to read your well written and conceptualized stories - I can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd say Kagome gave herself a great birthday! LOL 'Happy Birthday to Me!' is right! I think I need water...ice water...maybe a cold shower! That chapter was HOT! Nice lemon! 'Course what do you expect after FIVE years of waiting and wanting! It's so nice to see them together relatively easily. They were so sweet. The outing with the girls was great. I loved the waiters singing happy birthday at the restaurant! Reminds me of the Olive Garden. My wife always says she'll kill me if I tell the staff it's her birthday just to avoid that! hehehe So what comes next? The morning after talk...friends finding out...mama? :) Looking forward!
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