| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: hachitajhii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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(font color="purple" font size="5")this story had back bone, i like the way you explaned the sayin(i hoped i spelled it right?)bonding and other rituals even the frezzer (ihoped i spelled it right?)thing. i can what 'till the next chapter. keep up the great work.(font) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, at least we now know what was going on. A little, anyway. I look forward to seeing them work this out. :) Good job, as usual. :) |
Reviewed By: Carrie On: June 19, 2002 23:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read what happens next. Good character development. |
Reviewed By: Mary On: June 19, 2002 22:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well, you've got me hooked. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 10:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh glowing eyes.. this sounds fun! I'm really loving it so you keep that fast updating going and I'll just wait here by my email program for the update messages :D |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 19, 2002 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arrrrgh! You did it again! Well, like you said, you do update daily so I can't get too upset, but still.... I wanna know why his eyes are glowing! I guess it's part of this Moon thing (cool name you chose for it, but I can't spell it), but I wanna see more! :) |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 19, 2002 08:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love the frequent updates!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 18, 2002 09:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! U LEFT US AT A CLIF HANGER!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 18, 2002 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got some mistakes in there again, but the story is still wonderful! I wanna know what he was saying, I do hope you tell us next time. :) |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just read chap 6 - good work! I'm glad you decided to build a relationship between B/V before moving on to the romance. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 02:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
arg.. why do I always start reading these just when the last chapter up has such a clif hanger of an ending.. damn.. well needless to say I can't WAIT to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 17, 2002 10:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THE FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 16, 2002 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a few mistakes in here, like "bellow" instead of "below", but the writing and characters are still solid. It doesn't hurt that you seem to update two chapters at a time. Whee! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 15, 2002 20:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! SO WELL WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!! |
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