| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 23, 2002 04:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the eyes glowing part is a real turn on. How did you think up this stuff? I loved their talk and I have to wonder what'll happen when they finally "converge". Great chap and I can't wait for the next post. |
Reviewed By: Goat On: June 21, 2002 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may very well be the most original B/V I have ever read. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: June 21, 2002 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!! I LOVED IT!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!! YOU DIDN'T FINISH!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! E-MAIL ME WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS POSTED PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STORY I BET YOU A MILLLION DALLORS THAT THIS STORY WILL BE IN MY HEAD FOR THE NEXT COUPLE OF WEEKS!! ahhhhhhhhhhh! ( small_lady30@hotmail.com ) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami, they're bonded! Oops. Great and different way to bring this about. Eyes glowing? I commend you. Great job. So now their bodies have to "converge" (hehehe)? Can't wait. Oh btw, I saw your drawings. Boy you are talented. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you are developing their characters. Vegeta's concern and Bulma's fear seem so real. They're connected now and Veggie is none too pleased about it. Great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm, looks like Bulma finally started noticing Veggie. She touched the orb, so I wonder what that will do to her. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Bulma would feel guilty about the way she treated Yamcha. I mean the guy cheated on her for Kami's sake. Anywho, good info on the importance of saiyan bonds. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't you just love them. What a dysfunctional couple they make. So Bulma isn't that terrible to look at, eh? Looks like someone has taken notice ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this idea of the Khon'daia na. For once Veggie isn't going into a full blown heat. It'll be interesting to how you work this into the B/V get together. Very good chap! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, Veggie can be such an @$$hole at times. He destroyed 5 bots just cause he was bored and needed to piss off Bulma for some entertainment. Oh btw, good chapter ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I'll say it again, love your writing style. The B/V scenes are great. You gotta love the way Bulma taunts Veggie ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I finally decided to r/r. The deciding factor was that reviews skyrocketed so I figured it must be entertaining. I enjoyed the prologue and your writing style and I get the feeling that this won't be your average B/V fic. So I guess it's on to chapter #1. |
Reviewed By: Storm On: June 20, 2002 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm loving the story. Just finished chapter 8 and I'm hooked! You reilize that I'm now going to have to visit everyday until this fic is finished eh? In any case you have great descriptions, charactor development, plot line and I really like your overall style or writing. Cant wait for the next chapters!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 15:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
hehe not my best but not my worst either.. hope you like it -> http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=44881 |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 11:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well I'm left thursting for more.. was that the effect you were trying for? ;)
hmm glowing eyes.. I think I may just try to draw that for you.. sounds fun, can't promise anything, but being such a great updater, you deserve the attempt at least :D *goes off to find her sketch pencils* |
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