| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Veggiesgirl389 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 18:54 EDT
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P.S Plz carry on cuz ur in my favourites!!!! |
Reviewed By: Veggiesgirl389 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was soo good!!!! I haven't actually read a story which is actually kept Vegeta and Bulma in character so well and actally had the bond thing going. Well done. Gotta give u 10/10 cuz it was good.Talk 2 me at Cute_angel_389_@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 17:32 EDT
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that's it ?!?! can't believe it....*sniff* |
Reviewed By: Shelley On: September 29, 2002 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and creation of feeling and suspense. Love the bonding idea and originality in the Ki's so keep writing ASAP.
I Love it PLEASE finish it soon !!!! |
Reviewed By: Shelley On: September 29, 2002 11:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and creation of feeling and suspense. Love the bonding idea and originality in the Ki's so keep writing ASAP.
I Love it PLEASE finish it soon !!!! |
Reviewed By: aiko On: September 25, 2002 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue as soon as possible. very creative and intriguing. i luv vegeta and this is so romantic.:) |
Reviewed By: zach On: September 23, 2002 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is very creative and good |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 22:03 EDT
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thanx to those of you who told me about the problem with the listing of the fic. and thanx for the reviews. i didn't realize the problem. i'm glad you like the chapter! sry it came out so late i've been incredibly busy. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 20:36 EDT
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okay, a review for an update. |
Reviewed By: bmar On: September 21, 2002 20:01 EDT
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Your story is definately fun to read, please keep the chapters coming, I took way too long to get this one |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 21, 2002 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what an update. The marking part of the physical bond was awesome, especially the part where Bulma realized that the symbol was pulsing with her own heartbeat. I almost started to tear up. It also looks like Veggie has a softer side. I absolutely loved this chapter, although I almost missed it. If I hadn't seen the update on FFN I would never have known that a new chap was up. You see back in late July alot of fics seemed to have gotten lost. MMO kinda crashed and I couldn't locate any of my fave fics. So what you have to do is relist your fic again in the dbz section so they'll show up on the new fics page. Your update in august and this latest one didn't show up on that page. Well needless to say I can't wait for more chaps, and btw, the artwork is awesome. For whatever reason I can't seem to access the review box in the fanart section. Till next time TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 16, 2002 20:20 EDT
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The rituals have started and they're very original! I really enjoyed this chapter and the idea that Vegeta himself is a little uncertain about everything too since he hasn't been through it yet either. I like the idea that they're truly experiencing something unique together. Great story! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
och! Like you people with over a hundred need more reviews....lol
This just keeps getting better...: )
I really love the gentler, Geta...and I am fascinated by the Saiyan Rituals...
:::drools:::
More More More!
Jada |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:31 EDT
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Very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 07, 2002 03:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some serious mental bonding. Your description of this part of the ritual made me feel like I was actually watching it happen. Great job!! |
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