| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, I do...You have all kinds of tensions raging in this thing...I can not wait to read the next chapter...maybe get a little relief...
excellent work.
Jada |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 22:04 EDT
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This was great! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 02, 2002 09:56 EDT
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Oh no! You're leaving it there?? What a cliffhanger :) Please hurry with the next chapter, your story is very enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 13:08 EDT
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Noooooooooo! Not another cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! You just love watching me suffer don't you? (sigh) pleeeeeze hurry with the next chappie |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo! Not another cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! You just love watching me suffer don't you? (sigh) pleeeeeze hurry with the next chappie |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"So without further delay or hesitation, he began."
So ... begin already, Veggie-boy!! lol I just LOVE this story, Veggie's thoughts(they are SO him:), and everything about it!! heh. I was one of those that kept wondering WHY he had the tail(though I don't mind him having one;) ... and then I saw the words AU. I understand. What rituals will they have to perform!? PLEASE, write more because then I'll write more reviews!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 23:01 EDT
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i love this fic! plzplzPLZ post more ASAP
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Layla On: July 28, 2002 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!ASAP!!!!!i WANT MORE!!!!!!!!CONGRATULATIONS & KEEP^ THE GOOD WORK. |
Reviewed By: nanaseven On: July 27, 2002 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, just mentally up the enjoyment factor. wow, this is so good! i should have read the updated part earlier, lol! ANOTHER GREAT B/V FIC! BWAHAHA! see you sunday! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: July 27, 2002 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, poor Bulma, apparently she forgot all good things come to those who wait (:
Update soon, I like it, I love it, I want more of it!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 26, 2002 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh! the suspense is killing me! i love your story~~ can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... and to think, I thought 16 chapters looked intimidating when I started reading this... but it's not finished!?!?! you NEED to finish this fic because I think I know what Bulma's dream means and I want to know if it's true! Keep up the great work! I hope you know what the rituals are going to be, but if you don't ... I wouldn't mind helpin you brainstorm so the fic will be closer to being finished! ;) Write more, please, because this is one of the best B/V get together fics I've ever read. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 23, 2002 11:29 EDT
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The last couple of chapters have been very sweet without overdoing Vegeta's feelings and making him OOC. Very well done!! This fic is fantastic, can't wait for more. :) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 01:23 EDT
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Let the rituals commence already! Comeon, I'm dying here. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 22, 2002 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just finished reading the whole story, or what you have posted so far, and I love it. This is a refreshing change from the ususal Bulma and Vegeta tales (tails) : )
I know you just posted today, but a girl can dream for another can't she?
Waiting impatiently...
JadaKirin |
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