| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 22, 2002 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a terrific take on Vegeta's character...I can't wait to read more...
Jada |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 22, 2002 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma's not the only one. I'd like to know why he's pushing her away too. Looks like things are starting to heat up, so naturally I can't wait for the next chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 04:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
*lights a small candle and starts to whisper out a chant* "please continue, please update, please satisfy my insatiable hunger for more of your story" |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 00:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
thanx for the review brenda. i think i'm still logged on though at your house. do you think that next time you get on this site you could log me off your computer please? your review came up under my name. thanx. ~abbi (theblueone) |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 23:15 EDT
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lol. i'm glad you enjoyed it, brenda. i think i'm still logged onto your computer. your review came up over my name. could you maybe log-out for me? thanx. lol. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait to read more. Very entertaining. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 14, 2002 04:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Veggie is so lonely and he misses his planet so much. I always love the B/V moments when they talk instead of just jumping in the sack. Pls update soon. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 13:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
just keeps getting better and better.. I hope you update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Winddancer On: July 12, 2002 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this story. It seems like it would be more likley to happen than a few other fan fics would.Just keep on updating, I totally luv it. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2002 09:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Phew! I just finished reading all 17 chapters in one go! This is an awesome story. I must admit that I was a little reluctant at first, seeing as the bond was formed without much want on either part, but it has worked out quite well and is a credit to your writing abilities.
I hope things start to progress a little quicker now, you have set the scene very well so far, and now I look forward to finding out what the mating ritual will entail. Good story! |
Reviewed By: Leilia On: July 10, 2002 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! I've read a lot of B/V fanfics...but this is by far the best!!!Update ASAP!!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 09, 2002 12:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like where you are going with the whole energy thing, I think that's a cool idea. I also like that their relationship is going to be built on respect, and not just raging hormones. That their emotions didn't just suddenly change because of what happened, and that Vegeta is coming to terms with having to deal with her even though he didn't really want this in the first place. He's actually the calm one for a change. I'm glad I came across this fic and look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 02:09 EDT
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hehehe, good chapter if i do say so myself, so whats the next part of the ritual??? cant wait until next chapter woohoo |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 07:05 EST
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Yay! Good to see this back, it's been too long! Oh darn, guess I'll just have to go back and re-read the rest to be sure I'm properly caught up. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx for fixing up #14. This time it was a pleasure to read and I enjoyed it. I hope your next update will be that much anticipated talk between B/V. Good job. |
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