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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 02:42 EST
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I got behind on chapters again, so that is why I did not give you individual reviews for the last chapter and this chapter. Both are great! Kouga finally showed up, but Kagome was gone. That should prove most entertaining. It was pretty cute how the pack all got ready for Kouga's arrival. OK, cute is not the right word. Very efficient and cohesive (and cute). In the future, Hojo shows up. Why oh why can't Kagome just say I am engaged to Sesshoumaru, here he is. Now you are going to die. I am still enjoying the story very much. Jean aka Maddie50
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 01:34 EST
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Why, o why won't anyone write Kagome just telling the boys who are interested in her flat out that she is not interested in them? I mean, it's not like she has to hold back because she needs to keep her options open. She's got a man who is madly in love with her. Give her a backbone and make her introduce Sessh as her fiance. It will help prep her for Kouga back in the Feudal times. Oh, and in case you can't tell, this is a positive review because I don't go all nutty and start talking about storylines and plots unless the story has fully drawn me in. It's like, you don't yell at a tv show unless you really enjoy it. Cheers! And I can't wait for more!
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Title: New to site, love the story!
Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Boy doesn't know when to quit, does he? (Hojo that is, though Kouga could catch a clue or two as well.) Overall, I absolutely love this story!!! ...and, oooohhhh baby, could I picture ole Fluffy in some modern clothes... *swirly eyes* LOL I wish i had time for a longer review... but finals call! *throws you a bushel of cookies and snacks* *said in a heavy accent* Jolly Good, Ol' Girl, Jolly good! Well, must pip off! Carry on! Tut! XD
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 07, 2007 19:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hojo. Poor, poor Hojo. Does he not realize that his life may soon be ending? How can one go through life being that dense? It should be really interesting reading though. Sesshoumaru in the modern era should be good. Even though to be honest, I'm already snickering about when they get back to the feudal era and run into Kouga. As usual, this was a great chapter. Your writing technique is superb. Update as soon as you can.
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. hojo is an idiot. koga finally made it camp? interesting i wonder how long inuyasha can take his presence. well have 2 many ppl at my house cant really ask any questions cant wait til next chapter one love syoze
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 17:41 EST
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Since ASS is down, and therefore your reviews, I will post my five cents worth. Firstly, thankyou for a lovely story, it is highly original, well written, with only the American spelling stuffing me up. And if I ever print it out, it is safe at the moment for my daughter to read. Yes I have found you in the four main fic areas I read, so I was content that I could always get an update. Every so often I will re-read the story, and sometimes come up with things I have missed. Please keep going, as it saddens me to read so many good fics, only to have them fizzle out without a reason or update. till next update Rosemarie
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Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I can't wait to read more about Sessy's visit to Kagome's time. Poor Hojo. Poor Koga, when they return. I can't wait to read more! This is the first time I've reviewed a fic, I'm hooked. Moon Goddess.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 16:06 EST
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Yeah! This chapter was so good! I really can't wair until the next chapter comes out! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 16:05 EST
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OMG only 5 reviews? If I didn't review, it was because I didn't feel like signing in... BUT I still loved every moment of it. I'm glad that you put up your facebook and everything so we can all keep in touch. I can't wait to see what Sesshy does to Hojo! I always figured Hojo to be the annoyingly thoughtful fool...
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your name on myspace showed up on my friends list. my myspace name is milleniumstaff, my photo is the girl in the red car. anyway i'll comtact u myspace. greta chapter hes in the future cool. got some questions; does he meets kagomes friends? does he meet hojo? does kagome gets to take him to the supermarket or any 'human' places like she does with inuyasha? does he notice inuyasha's scent in her room/house? are there any lemons while they r in the 07? im just wondering well any herat chapt cant wait for the next one love syoze
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a challenge? I like that. I would be delighted if I fail to meet it though because I like twists in a story as long as they do not depart from logic... within the universe of the story of course... It was a good chapter. I look forward to seeing how Keade works with the kids, what Inuyasha is getting ready to attack and how Sesshoumaru fares in the future. I hope you put up the next chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 20:39 EST
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Yay for subjugation spells!!!! Never thought I would say that! I've been watching the old episodes on veoh.com, and it's so funny in the beginning! Good luck getting the decorations all put up! Have a great holiday! I can't send you and Destiny a card this year, seeming as I am in mexico right now, and you had to send the mail extra early this year due to the huge rains and hurricanes they had earlier this year. boo. any way, fabulous story! thanks for updating so regularly!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 04, 2007 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story gets better with every chapter a read. Are you a professional writer? It seems like it. I was beginning to wonder when we'd get to find out the word Kagome picked for Sesshoumaru. Down boy is great. Thinking about how Sesshoumaru can be, I believe having him drop to his knees is perfect. But two commands? Did not see that coming. I also loved it a few chapters back when Inuyasha got his gift of control. Now, when does Sess get his gift of his arm back? Keep up the good work, update as soon as you can. I can't wait to read about Sesshoumaru in the modern era.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 17:27 EST
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AH!!! How could you! A cliffie!!! NO!!!! I want to know what happends next! I MUST know!!!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I have been wondering what side effects Sesshoumaru's hair would have on the spell. Interesting that more than one word or phrase will subjugate him. I guess that makes since because it's like the necklace is two in one... It woulds really suck if the same command for Inuyasha ends up working for both of them antecedently now that there seems to be extra subjugation words tied to that spell... Perhaps the change in the spell that allowed for the phrase to be used has just as much to do with the extra word thing as the hair in the necklace... Now, if she could subjugate both brothers simultaneously on purpose... that could be useful... as long as releasing them was simple. Kagome should consider altering Inuyasha's spell so that she can release him if he needs it... but they should probably not play around with that too much when a battle might be brewing... I'll have to check out that story you mentioned. I am glad you found it. Oh. and I didn't expect Miroku's confession to Sango to go that way... Go Miroku!!!
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