| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. im missing all of the the group left back in the past. can the kids pull some practical jokes on the wovles koga inparticular? anyway cant wait for the next chapter one love syoze
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: December 10, 2007 10:28 EST
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I'd come see your myspace page, but I'm a little strange in that area. You see, I love computers and high tech electronics, but..... There are some things I hold out on until I have no choice. For instance - I waited until 2 years ago to get a cellphone. Until I actually needed one badly. I don't have a myspace page. I'm holding out until it'a an absolute requirement. :P I hope you get to put up more story soon. :) I like the torture of Kouga. It's just too much fun.
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 06:51 EST
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now thats one smug demon lord
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 03:11 EST
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*grins* The 'voices in my head'-part made me think of this: http://tallydragon.deviantart.com/art/Her-Inner-Beast-SK-comic-64773506 XD Ooh, next we get to see Sesshoumaru exploring modern Tokyo, right? :D I really hope you'll get back to updating every or every other day. I know it'll be hard during the holidays, but I have faith in that you'll make it. ;) It's a shame I didn't see you asking for christmas cards earlier, since I don't think it will get there on time if I sent one today... :( Oh well, maybe next year. :)
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to tell u that this story couldn't be better even if it was written paid novelist like wow it is incredible i have found my self looking forward to your updates (i've been checking my email like 30 times a day for the past few days) so kudos to you and keep it up i would really hate it if this story died like the one i was trying to write and ended up deleting because i hit a major block (p.s. you've already hit my all time favorite fic spot so don't let me down).... just thought you needed an ego boost
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Title: Chapter 57! YES!
Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 01:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.57 was great! Now Kagome's developing her own 'beast' i see. I'm guessing that has to do with her 'transformation'? Also, i applaud your limes so far, you make them meaningful & beautiful, yet very erotic, but not at all dirty. It says alot about your writing. I hate reading a good 'fic that makes the intimate scenes seem more like a cheap porn. ew. And I also love how your building everyone up to that moment between Sess/Kag! I have a feeling a LOT of people will be having a cigarrette afterwards! LOL! Anyway, keep up the amazing work!! Hope to see more chapters soon! ^_^ P.S. i sent you a friends request on myspace. SEE YA!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Kagome having a voice in her head like Sesshoumaru (or other demons I suppose) was the twist I was supposed to catch... then I didn't see it coming. Maybe I would have if I had thought about Kagome's demon characteristics a little more, but I didn't and there were no clues in the previous chapter. I think it's cool and it does make me wonder about her father and just what he is... but I'm not going to rack my brain on that because I can't see any real leads... I'll just sit back and be informed when the time comes. Great chapter by the way. I don't know why, but Souta's impression of Sesshoumaru's interest in the ceiling was particularly entertaining. I read part of the chapter and was interrupted, so the early part of the chapter isn't fresh in my mind to comment on, although it was good and quite interesting... I get the feeling that Hojo only escaped only so he wouldn't be shut down and not be able to try again... If you kill off Kouga, then there is no way you could convince me that Hojo isn't his reincarnation... Actually I think Hojo is a step down form Kouga... Ok ok, I'll let you develop the character as you see fit and I'll hold my judgment until then. I wonder if the girls will notice that Sesshoumaru is missing an arm... It didn't seem like they have yet... they would have most definitely mentioned it. ...speaking of witch, From your note it looks like the arm return is coming up soon... and if they did notice, how are they going to explain it's return... I don't think calling it a prosthetic would be a plausible explanation. I look forward to the next chapters it looks like things will be interesting.
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Title: Emerald
Reviewed By: Inu-babs_sexy_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 23:58 EST
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I was just curious about sesshoumaru's arm? Sometimes it seems like he has both, others it seems like he has one, like when kagome refers to "his arm" but whe he was trying on clothes it makes it seem like he has both, an im pritty sure he couldnt play video games with one arm....did he get it back in a past chapter and i miss it or what ????? iM soo confuesed
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Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 22:47 EST
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Super-sonic hearing would probably be really cool to have, if it weren't for the shrieking gang of high-pitched-over-excited, hormone-ridden girls!!! Of course, getting caught on the couch in the lap of a hunk of sexy man, well... I can understand their awe and excitement! Will Kagome ever tell them what's going on, I wonder? Personally, I don't think they could handle it, though a few stories I've read pulled it off decently enough. :D Anyway, top-of-the-line chappie, ol' chap! Absolutely smashing! Must kipper off to me studying now, with finals and all on the morrow! Tally-Ho!! *sparkles away leaving behind yet more cookies and chips and snacks for your dining pleasure*
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Title: woohoo!
Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST LOOOVE THIS STORY! IT JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! I APOLOGIZE THAT I HAVEN'T LEFT A REVIEW UNTIL NOW, BUT I STUMBLED ACROSS IT ONLY A DAY AGO & COULDN'T STOP READING LONG ENOUGH TO LEAVE ONE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...KEEP UP THE AWESOMR WORK!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reviews here, instead of on single spark* Wow! I was away for a week, and come back to a bunch of new chapters! *does the happy dance* I liked the last few chapters very much. I really like how Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru have become so close. And finally Sango and Miroku are getting somewhere too! It's interesting to read about Sesshoumaru in modern day Tokyo. Can't wait to 'see' him out on the streets! ;) Oh, and I have a suggestion for a t-shirt for him. How about one that says "I'm not deaf, I'm just ignoring you"? My husband owns a similar one (but it's written in Swedish of course), and I think it would fit Sesshoumaru well. XD Oh, and thanks for choosing my command for Sesshoumaru! Made me very happy. :D By the way, I'm working on some fanart for the early chapters. I'll let you know when it's done. ;)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahaha!!!!!! update soon. hahaha! hope sesshy tears hojo in shreads. how does hojo not see sessh and souta? anyways u rock. TBA
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Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
doggy jim jams! thats so cute update soon
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Title: Awsome as Usual
Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 10:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME! AWSOME! AWSOME!! I really love this fic and wait patiently for the next chapters. Poor Hojo and Kouga when are they gonna get a clue.LOL I loved the boys reaction to Kouga when he showed up and Kagome was gone. Keep up the good work and please update soon. Yeah who wouldn't like a certain demon lord in modern clothes. Can you say Yummy... Grrs um yeah.
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Reviewed By: Sesshys Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 02:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story...and you just keep weaving such an intricate tale here! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
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