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Title: 58
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 11, 2007 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey hey hon see how much I love you I hate this site but I review for you anyways since your going a a slower rate on AFF. I loved this chappie the pizza lime starter is ingenious and I can't wait to see what happens will Kags venture alittle lower on sesshy this time hmmm ahh the suspense and teaseing. well I must say I haven't a clue what you'll do next and thats exciting see you soon on your next update and don't worry I'll badgeryo to update sooner hehe Loves Arry
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 20:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great chpater, pizza i knew sessy would love it. any other foods? tricks on koga suggestions 1. inuyasha should sneak to kagome house & get crazy glue & well u can use your imagination with that one. 2. the whip cream classic. 3. have shippo transform into kagome & play games with koga. 4. im sure u can up with something. 5. hair dye, which color, u choose & something semi-perminate, but koga doesnt need to know. 6. xlax prank. 7. have thekids put gum all on kogas fur. oh inuyasha should ha souta help him with this cause kagome would never approve of anything like that. inuyasha shoud also have a camera. cant wiat til next chapter one love, syoze p.s. if your wondering about the pranks, me & my friends had fun on senoir class trip. & i would live to help u out but I'm going to visit my friend in japan for christmas & new years. i'm leaving on friday & i dont know if my wireless will work over there so im hoping i can use the net. if not ill use my friend computer even though the letters are in japanese ill make it work. but i know when i go to hokkaido, i dont think ill have any net or cell phone access cause we are going into the country with 'some' neccessities (bummer). its gonna kill me for a few weeks, but i know it will be fun, well it better be fun for $2700 tickets & me cursing out the passport ppl cause the kept spelling my name wrong. anyway i gotta go.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 11, 2007 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru with pizza on his chest? Hell, I'd love to lick that off too. Kouga as a target for the kids to practice on? love that idea. Already chortling. Does Hojo get a clue soon? Would love to see Sesshoumaru give him a big clue. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 17:51 EST
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You really are a tease. ;_; Is that your deviantart? This chapter is really good. I was freaking out for a moment, "What the hell has gotten into Kags?!?" But then I think I figured it out... I won't say though. It may spoil it for other ppls who don't know.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really scary that Kagome kind of lost herself there. But if I found Sesshoumaru spread out on my bed like that I think I might loose it a little myself. Sesshy is going to get himself in trouble if he doesn't spill the whole truth about her "transformation" real fast! I know that I could hang around Seshoumaru for days, weeks even and not notice his missing arm, but only if he was wearing his regular cloths. It would be a lot more obvious when wearing modern clothing. I do think that it would be difficult for him to use a video game controller with one hand though... I'm shocked that Kagome's friends didn't melt into a worthless pile of ogling girly hormones at being in such close proximity to Sesshoumaru's perfection. I would have trouble not being reduced to drooling if I ever got that close. **forcible redirects mental pathways** I'm sure that Sesshoumaru will be pleased that he doesn't need to try to tech those kids to meditate. If they keep it up, they will be better trained than Kagome when she gets back. I just got a really interesting visual of Inuyasha doing miko things... **sigh** the demons are turning into Mikos and the Miko is turning into a demoness. Now that stupid "Pure/Impure" song from the Mt. Hakurei episodes is plaguing me... I never liked that diddy... and it has to be so catchy, like chickenpox... My brain is obviously scattered, but I must say that I did enjoy the chapter and you can post that new one as soon as you like and I will be happy to read it! ... hmmm maybe the kids can practice purification on a nearby wolf prince... yes, that sounds good, he needs to be reincarnated into hojo anyway...
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Title: !
Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok! first off, it surprises me than not many people picked up on that voice being her 'beast'. Like, DUH?! Secondly, I found it very humorous picturing Sesshy trying to master the video game with Souta, but i laughed my ass off when he dribbled pizza on himself!! PRICELESS!! Im so going to have to draw some pics of those scenes for you, but it will take me a while....keep up the great work! my walls appreciate it! =)
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I never had a problem with FF.Net either but *sighs* whatever. On a happier note I really enjoyed this chapter but I'm wondering why Sesshoumaru won't tell Kagome about her beasty side coming out and him having to put her in check. I mean I'm sure she would understand and want to seek out some answers to why her inner inu would all of a sudden decide to pop up (at least I hope I'm on the right track about Kags having an inner inu). Sorry but I chanced a guess. Am I right? *crosses fingers*. But in all fairness I can understand why he is afraid of Kags reaction to the whole making her submit. So, what video game was Souta teaching Sesshoumaru? LOL. Has anyone asked you that question yet? Sorry I'm rambling. Thanks for the update. ceira
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 09:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, somehow I was so sure you'd restore his arm in this chapter. Before any of Kagome's friends discover that he has only one arm. If his arm is gonna be restored, it'd better be before the girls get back, or they might later question where on earth that arm came from. XD It almost sounded like the beginning of a lemon at the end of the chapter? Is it time yet? Or are they gonna continue teasing each other until they burst from all the sexual tension. Man, I bet it's gonna be mind-blowing! :D Thanks for updating so often, it makes me so happy! :D
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 06:33 EST
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I will be blunt here,and in all probability wrong, does Kagomes demon heritage come from Inu Yasha and Rin? and since being descended from a hanyou(who are graced with some cuter body parts, eg ears and tails)will Kagome scare up a tail???? and thankyou for giving Sesshy back his arm, can't wait to see him in action with two!
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Reviewed By: TreetopScout [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 05:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't reviewed your story before (and for that I apologize), but I finally had to post my thoughts. There have been very few stories that I've found online that have made me check my email constantly waiting for my update notification. This is definitely one of those! You've done a great job creating your new characters and expanding upon those that already existed. It can be especially hard writing for characters like Sesshomaru when all we've seen/read of him has mostly been him doing one thing: killing. Okay, okay, and glaring. So, just wanted to say that I love it. Keep going. If you have to write a whole chapter focusing on teaching Sesshomaru how to parallel park, go for it! I want to especially thank you for posting this chapter when you did. I'm facing a serious ice storm in my neck of the woods (Iowa) right now and it probably is only a matter of time before my power quits and my laptop battery runs out. I think this will help hold me over until I can read the next one. Maybe. Probably not. Thanks again though!
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Title: yeay
Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 02:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im totally diggin kagome's transformation into something else....im guessin a demon....since she has a voice that talks to her much like sesshoumaru....but thats just my guess....well any ways i am waaayyyy excited at how well thins is commin along keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 02:16 EST
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no problem everyone needs an ego boost at some time or another helps keep the writers block away... i think
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 00:15 EST
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YEA! that was awsome! i loved how she got rid of hojo. keep it up. i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I first found this fic on a single spark then found it here. Have to say that I love the way you write.
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed the last 3 chapters. For some reason ASS & FF.Net just won't load for me so here I am on MM.org. GRRR, so frustrating! Anyways I really enjoyed the last 3 chapters. I wonder what Inuyasha will do to help keep the kids entertained? I doubt tag, simons says or red rover is out of the question for "Uncle Inuyasha"? LOL. That would be pretty funny. Oh and the whole Kagome's beast popping up out of now where was so awesome. I was wondering when her beast would pop up *grins*. Anyways thanks for the update! Laters ceira
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