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| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] | | Pages (33): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: December 13, 2007 11:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just now am getting to write because I had exams and those were just bluh. I'm finished now and am on break so now I can write all I want to. I just have to say that I read some of the chapters I've missed and those were good. Wow. You did a really good job on those chapters I'm trying to remember the last chapter I had read but I just got through with the last chapter so I guess I'll just do that one. Not to say that all the others were not good I just can't remember all of those since I haven't read in a while. I know that Sesshoumaru and Kagome went to her time which was a shocker. Ohh and that spell that Kagome has for Sesshoumar is just great. Now I'm starting to remeber some things. Anyways, that was so cool and the children and also Inuyasha missing Kagome is so sweet. I can't believe that Kouga still believes that Kagome will be his. I guess Sesshoumaru is going to have to beat it into him. Just like Hojo is still in his own little world. I can't believe that he thinks that Kagome is helping a thug. That one I had to laugh on. I just think that there is no hope for him unless he sees something that may show that Kagome is off limits. I don't think even then he may believe it and make up an excuse like that last time. Ohh and I wonder does Kagome have a demon side to and not know it. She may need to tell Sesshoumaru sometime soon before something happens. Ohh and I hope that Sesshoumaru gets over the whole arm thing and try to make the best of being with Kagome since she does not find anything wrong with it. And again I am sorry that I have not been updating like I want to. Exams are through so now I have all the time in the or until January again. This story is great and I hope that you continue cause its just getting to good.
| Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 11:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lime in this chapter! I'm a little disappointed that there are so many flashbacks from the anime in this chapter, though. I think they are a little too long. You could shorten them down quite a bit, since I bet 99% of your readers have already seen the anime and know what happened. Heh, it was kind of unexpected of Sesshoumaru to turn all emo on us, not very like him. And Hojo! He sounds like some kind of psychopath! XD It's gonna be really interesting to see what happens next chapter. If the arm will return, and how. And after that, I can just picture one of Kagome's friends say or think "Uh, I was sure he only had one arm...?" :)
| Reviewed By: tixylix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 09:41 EST
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awww poor Sesshoumaru. is he going to get his arm back?
| Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 05:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. hojo is just a dumb if not more so than koga. he had the audasity to call sesshomaru a hoodlum, goon, thug & the the damming of them all meathead? i offically hate hojo now. i also know that hojo doesent have the balls to say any of those things to sessy's face so im not too concered about it. i am worried tha kagome might kick his ass for insulting her mate-to-be. oh the arm thing, when are those 2 gonna realize thats what Misaki has been trying to tell them. anyway cant wait for the next chapter hope i get net service in tokyo even though i wont get none hokkaido one love syoze p.s. im still pissed about hojo.
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 02:11 EST
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HOLY CRAP!!!! I knew Hojo was one of those creeps T__T I knew it! D: teh arm!!!teh arm!!!!! it shalt return!!!
| Reviewed By: sugar0o [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 02:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant ever say enough abotu this story, its size is amazing, and i certainly know you've still got a ways to go, i look forward to it so much, i love seeing that you've updated b/c this story is so utterly fantastic. - 'r0o'
| Title: yummy review
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 13, 2007 01:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew!!! and WOW!!! that was hott and the angsty-ness to the wishing his arm back is interesting, how would it work when she doesn't have a jewel or anything like that? and yes of course I want you to coninue with new stuff hehehe I'd help you with the old stuff but I suck at catching typos as it is lol well update again soon you do know I love it when you do spoil me! *smiles* Loves Arry
| Reviewed By: BluEyedTigress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 01:15 EST
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Aaawwwwwww!!!! Poor Fluffy!!!! He shouldn't be so sad and depressed... it makes *me* sad, and I'm not even in the story!!! (not really, anyway, lol) Hmm... I wonder... with all of her unconscious-miko-blips.... could she? I mean, she wishes it to make *him* feel better... and she unconsciously erected the sound-proof barrier (HAHAHAHAHA!!!! btw)... so, it is highly plausible. XD ...Hojo... the creepy stalker-guy. Pictures of her on his ceiling?!?! YIKES! o.0 The dude is seriously disturbed. ... As usual, loverly, loverly, loverly, me-dear! I never tire of reading a new chapter! YAY!!!! *thick, heavy accent...possibly of Irish or some such origin...:D* Yeis... tis a greate` juiy tah be reedin' dah stirries ya be'n wri' -tin! ("Yes, it is a great joy to be reading the stories you've been writing!" lol) An' I won't be forgettin ya anytime soon neider! Warms da cockles of me dear 'eart!
| Reviewed By: missy71 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your story so far, I think that you are quite a gifted writer. Thank you for the wonderful story. Keep up the great work and hope to see updates soon, I wish you and your family a very Happy Holiday.
| Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG OMG Dear God how did you do that? The whole "Sessy feels like less of a man because of the arm" thing totally hit a chord with me as I used to date a blind man who obsessed in such a way. All I gotta say is he better damn well better get over it soon because Kagome just might flip her lid and bitch slap him... every pun intended. (smile) I don't know how you're going to give him an arm, though (refer to Treetop's comment about finding it in a cereal box... LOL!). The suspense is killing me, but no complaints there. Isn't that why we keep reading? Come on, other reviewers, back me up on this one... give this girl a prize for having the most natural suspense writing skills ever! (grin) Sorry I'm so blunt. Can I make a comment on Hojo, though? Are there really people out there who are that stupid? He really takes the lovesick cake. LOL. Loving ever minute of that piece of the plot, too. Is the whole "Kagome looks for her dad" thing coming up soon? I'm still intrigued by the arrow she hasn't used yet. Also, I got a sneaky suspicion that the Rin Scroll will be in Kagome's present day. . . but don't tell me if I'm right. Yep, that's it. I'm addicted to this story. (Grin) I can't think of a better way to pass a cold damp night with nothing on TV than to read and ahem... re-read some of your passages. (Grin) Sesshy's such a BA in the Anime, which is why I love him, but it's really cool to see a different view of him. Refreshing. Thank you for bringing this vision to others, and I await the next chapter (and shower scene... ahhh... ahem...) patiently. (Grin)
| Reviewed By: TreetopScout [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 22:37 EST
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Whoa! Shower scene? Six pages?! Make it so! Uh...right. I was wondering when Kagome and Sesshomaru would address the arm situation. I thought you handled it well. BUT, are you going to give him his arm back? Is it going to appear overnight like a miracle? Is it going to slowly grow back? Is he going to find it in a box of cereal? These questions need answers! And NO, thankfully my power did not go off. Which certainly kept my lizards and cat happy. And me. (I'm pretty sure I'm cold-blooded) Gah! Back to the chapter... Curious as to where this Hojo thing is going. If he decides to bum rush Kagome again he's going to lose valuable body parts. Especially if it is during the six-page shower scene...
| Reviewed By: janomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 22:32 EST
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glad i could help
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 14:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's interesting to watch this story line develop as well as your writing style develop along with it. I've only been here for a couple of days, spending a generous amount of time reading this. You did a fine job preparing folks for Kagome's beast. Anyone who didn't get that needs to pay more attention. (Smile) I like the development. I was a bit disturbed at her "freezing" him, I guess uneasy about her changes as apparently he is. Calling herself "bitch" was a little shattering, too, and if you meant to jar your readers to say, "WTF" well, you succeeded and bravo for it. You're building the sexual tension, too. Whenever our favorite Demon Lord finally gets laid, I think I'm going to cheer for him out loud. I mean, the poor guy just gets teased and teased without getting his prize. It's almost no fair she's getting most of the fun. LOL Anyway, that's my attempt at a review. I love your work and will continue reading. It just didn't seem right to pop up on here, jumping into this little community of friends you have here, and saying, "Hey, love your stuff" and not saying why. Have a great week. Imanewme
| Reviewed By: Seggoge On: December 12, 2007 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I love this fan fic and have been following it on singl sparks, I just wanted to tell you that I saw a new fan fic on the site today. Decmber 12, that means that they must of fixed the wieard thing thats been going on on the singl sparks website. YEAAAA!!!!!!!! Hope to see your fic on there agine soon.
| Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 02:24 EST
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Kagome seems to already have a little demon in her instead of her intended mate Sesshoumaru. Ha! I loved the frisky bits. I was wondering if Kagome's friends would notice that Sesshoumaru was missing an arm since he is in modern form fitting clothes. I'm sure they were distracted by his hair, body, face, eyes, movements, etc.
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