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Reviewed By: FirstMateWench On: April 08, 2008 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a story that i have been following like a religon....which aint a bad thing i just dont normally look at a story till its done, but i happened to be skimming the story to store for later and got hooked. being able to read about things that happened b4 is one of the best things to this story. it helps you understand things more about whats going on. i would be sad if you were to stop writting this story, but that would be your choice if people can understand that some people do have a life outside of writting even if they dont. but im looking foward to the next chapter when you get it out. Ja Ni!
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Reviewed By: Heathwe On: April 07, 2008 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that people are complaining about how you write. This has got to be my favorite story that I am reading right now. I literally squeal with joy when I get the notification that you've updated. I find that the past chapters increase the suspense of what is going to happen. Would the story be good without them...yeah....do they make the story even better....Hell yeah! So, keep writing but definately take care of your family...and don't forget to sleep sometimes!! :)
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 07, 2008 22:29 EDT
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oh... and one more thing.... can sesshoumaru and that evil little Vampire costume resurface sometime down the road... say in a little cosplay? since kags likes herself some fang... did I mention Sess in a LITTLE vampire costume....hehe...lol it would please all of us.. your fans who just happen to love sess and vamps...lol Tata InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 07, 2008 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Long time no read....~.~ loved this chappie! keep'em coming... the building suspense in this story is great... sessie has blue balls, Kags is a frustrated female... well all seems normal or as close to normal relationships as it gets.. good goin'. I am loving this one and your one-shot series "What your eyes....".. You are turning into the little creative girl aren't you...lol. your like a hentai energizer bunny that keeps going and going on sexual tension and frustration alone... I LOVE IT!! It makes me laugh in hysterics while trying not to choke on my Chocolate-peanut butter pecan carmel cookies... I loves it a lot... Hope you are having happy writings... lol Chao chickie! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 07, 2008 19:02 EDT
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Another fabulous update!!! I am so hooked on this story and I LOVE the way it is written. You have added so much detail and have developed the characters so well that I simply can not believe that people would criticize you for it. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: eloquent dreams On: April 07, 2008 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMAHGOODNESS. you're amazing. that was probably my favorite chapter. I LOVE LOVE LOVE VAMPIRES! they're so sexyily mysterious.. lol. i was squealing so loudly the entire time haha. i can't wait to see an update from you! keep up the awesomeness!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It would seriously make my day if Sesshoumaru was real and he really did dress up as a vampire! Two of my fav things vamps and Sesshou! God, is it possible to be a little jealous of an anime character in a fanfiction? lol. In your story I will admit Kagome is one lucky gal! Okay stop ceira...breathe...in...and out lol =D. I absolutely adore this chapter (can't you tell). Oh and take your time. I love the feeling of anticipation for the next update so don't listen to those other reviewers. Later for now ^_^
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so much. And you know what, I love the past chapters. Especially the one about the Halloween dance. I'm glad your not getting discouraged. Don't listen tot hose party poopers.lol.
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Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 09:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chapter, thanks for the update. I'm sorry about the rude reviews, but as always there are the few who are unhappy and tend to bring others down with them. I liked the halloween scene too bad Sesshomaru didn't tell her who he was, but he was insecure so it's understandable. SO I really liked the chapter and can't wait for the next one. But you don't have to rush it, this story is worth the wait. Til your next update, ja!
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Reviewed By: just me On: April 07, 2008 02:52 EDT
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i don't care what anyone else says, your story is spellbinding. i enjoy the glimpses into the past, and i think it helps to build the foundation of who the characters are, as well as understanding their points of view. keep up the good work. i love your story. don't ever let anyone tell you that you're not doing a good job. you're not writing for those people. there are plenty of fics out there that jump right into the hentai, and quite frankly, that makes the story a little less enjoyable. the buildup and anticipation is the best part of any romance...
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Reviewed By: SexyLips [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:56 EDT
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YA LISTIN TO THE LADY, if we knew what we were doing, then why are we reading??? Personally i didnt like the past present at first, but know its like OOOOOO ok so thats were that came from, its like the beggining of a story and the end intertwined and its cool and i love her and everyone else needs to shut up and if you dont like me saying it yall can kiss my furry cheeks, i love you ssm, you are da bomb i love all your storys, yes i am accious like all the others and miss the very quick updating, but hey we all have shit we gotta do, so keep up the good work and have fun, cant wait for the next update on all your storys.
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Reviewed By: Suriko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely entranced by this fanfic. I will admit I am one of the people who looks in the hentai and X rating section for the smut scenes, but there always a few that manage to get completely interested even without those scenes. I find both this Fic and What Your Eyes Do to Me exremely enjoyable to read. I also am personally not a fan of most inuyasha fics because I believe that they are too overdone. I can't wait until the next update, no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: sjdae On: April 07, 2008 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello. omg i love the way u are writing the story i love how u mix the past with the prsent. i love the story. i completly understand why u r not updating very fast but to all the other people that complain they can just f**k off. u have a life and u need to live it to the fullest. well talk to u later ash
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Reviewed By: bwlj On: April 07, 2008 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I for one love the story, past chapters and everything in between. At first it was confusing, but now I love it, And please continue when you can! Life doesn't take a time off for things, as it should. So when you can update its cool with me, I enjoy reading and rereading the past chapters to pass my spare time. I love the story again!!
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Reviewed By: sovereigntystraticigalyplacedsonoonecanseemeintheclassroom On: April 06, 2008 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderfull... (trying not to squeal!)
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