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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:27 PDT
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i hate cliff hangers. i liked the chapter though and it makes me wonder if maddy has what it takes to make gunnar her mate???? interesting. what will happen when Evan finds out they did the nasty? will he be upset? i doubt it. Maybe, maybe not i cant call that one. cant wait till the next chapter. u know those little spam filters at the bottom of these review pages that we fill out so we can review? lol i get the weirdest ones like GURV or ZIGR lol.
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:13 PDT
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That was awesome! I must say i nearly panicked when there was no chapter yesterday, but everyone's been super busy around our house so I figured, why not in yours too? Anyway, I was just wondering: do you have a favorite Purity story, or do you just enjoy writing them all? Just wondering since I'm writing yet another sequel to one of my stories and I certainly have favorites. Anyway, keep up the awesome work!!!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo!!! I guess all my worries about Evan and Val never recovering from that horrible night went right out the window!! I've been thinking, I'm having a hard time imagining Evan with short hair and looking "respectable"... know anyone that can pull it off?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Oh my gosh! I can't believe I got two chapters in one day. I was so excited when I opened my e-mail. So, that was the night Maddy got her some Gunnar. What I wouldn't give to be her that night...:sigh: Anywho, great chapter. I hope she says to meet Gin and Cain. I wonder what Evan has in mind for her. I'm sure it's something crazy. I have a good idea what it might be, but I'll keep that to myself. Again, thanks for the extra chapter. It was awsome!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:44 PDT
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'atta girl, Maddy. 'atta girl! XD I can't wait til Thursday's update; V is gonna meet the 'rents and Cain is gonna be like ZOMFGSQUIRTLE! ha ha... probably not but you know lol I also noticed that someone else thinks that this Kid is V's 8DD I am not alone!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:41 PDT
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Aw, bad cliffy! It's like WHAT????? So evil, Sue, but in SUCH a good way! Lol. I'm going to drive myself crazy trying to figure out what the 'anything' is now! Lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:28 PDT
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Great chapter! Keep it up and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a complete and utter douche bag, love this description of Marvin... Someone has a STALKER!!!!!!! lol
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 15:03 PDT
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I knew Cain was the one to bring V out to the cab! I don't think I'll ever get over reading him tell Gin, "One..." Lol! That was just so funny! I really liked how Evan used his youki to get to Valerie, even if she didn't seem to recognize who it was, at least it was familiar to her!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 14:30 PDT
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In the end, it wasn't worth it to let Marvin talk her into going to that party. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: Whose kid?
Reviewed By: Pianogoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know, I've been a fan of yours since the first book. What a messy situation for Val and Evan. This child that is mentioned, could it be Val's... I think it is and it get the feeling that Evan's the daddy (am I really far off?)
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 12:59 PDT
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Great chapter! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This situation is so messy it's sticky! Poor Val and Evan... ugh they aren't gunna make this easy for each other...
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY!! New chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! I want to know how Evan is going to find out about Val's family issues. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 10:51 PDT
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I had the feeling ages ago... but more and more I believe that this kid that V hasn't seen in forever is HER kid.... one that she had at a young age?
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