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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 11:09 CDT
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Well, I was reading what Nowshin said about Ichigo's character and I think that since it is an AU fic, you've probably taken some of the cocky and arrogant parts of Ichigo's character and exaggerated it. But nonetheless, I think that your characterisation of Ichigo still seems like a decent person and based on your other fic, I believe that Ichigo and Rukia are going to undergo some major growing up. So I believe (and hope!) that the really decent and mature side of Ichigo is going to be revealed by Rukia soon! Next, I have to say that I love the snappy dialogue between Ichigo and Rukia, not to mention those jibes about her height, they've already got a fiery chemistry going so keep that up! And I also like the way you've brought out Rukia as the little tough girl with a lonely inside, so hope to see more of her inner world too. Most of all, you've kept the momentum of the fic going so really looking forward to the new chapters!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, I am back again because I am stalker. I love Ichigo's reaction to the merger. His whatever was so funny. I also forgot to mention that while reading chapter three I forgot to say that at first I thought the woman Ichigo slept with was Matsumoto.
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Title: Mixed feelings
Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
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This is a bit hard for me to say, but this third chapter of "Odalisque" has disappointed me beyond my imagination. I don't mean to be rude, but I think you outright killed Ichigo's character here. Since this is an AU fanfic you have more liberties to develop his character, but turning good boy into a sleazy womanizing asshole? I seriously resent that. Ichigo is one rare character who is a real nice guy with a lot of respect for women. If he had one bit of womanizing tendency in him he would have tapped Orihime's ass long ago. "I don't chase women, women throw themselves at me" is the dialogue used by the scum with lowest morals, and Ichigo is nothing close to that. The other things about him are completely to the mark (arrogance, smart-mouthing, working vigor etc) and you did a great job on his semi-humorous lines, but that blond and crap totally ruined it. Your Rukia is perfect though. I have no problems with her, or the main storyline which seems pretty interesting. It's just Ichigo..aah. Sorry if I sounded too rude, but having monthly cramps and reading womanizing Ichigo is too much for me. >_
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Reviewed By: HavenC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 22:18 CDT
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This fic so cool. I really admire your work. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: HavenC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 22:17 CDT
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This fic so cool. I really admire your work. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 20:47 CDT
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lol i love how they hate each other
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 20:35 CDT
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Another awesome chapter. Gah, can't wait for an update. My heart is set on more banter between the two lol. I think you have an excellent way of making them so into character even though they are well...completely different characters then what they originally are supposed to be hehe. But I am really loving how this is going. Please update sooonn!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 16:52 CDT
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Haha. Wow. I loved this chapter. [Ah, but now we add in the obstinate female coworker who should have been born with testicles, Ichigo thought dryly as he continued messing with the wires.] I love the little humor bits you put in your stories that makes it funny but, sometimes, not so noticable. It makes the story ten times more hilarious. I don't think they're OOC at all. I love love LOVE AU fics even better than the orignal stuff, soooo, yeah. This is awesome so far! I squealed when I got the update alert!!=] Update soon!!^__^
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ichigo can do everybody else but not Orihime. Why am I not surprised? HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Poor Orihime, not even in fanfics does she get a break. I like your description of Gins handshake. He is a like a snake. I can't say I find Ichigo's womanizing ways any more pleasing I am hoping that Rukia gives him hell.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 14:46 CDT
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The last two chapters were really great. Ichigo in this story is very much the cad, isn't he? I am looking forward to seeing how he will grow / change in this story (because based on your other work, I expect there will be lots of personal growth for both Rukia and Ichigo)... And that second meeting of the two! Brilliant. I loved the sparks that erupted between them. Ichigo and Rukia (as well as your readers) are in for one witty, hilarious and exciting experience, I think... Inoue was a brilliant surprise. I wonder what role she will play in this story, but I an confident you will do a great job with that... And I'm glad you're updating quickly (I reckon the writer's block is gone -- yayness!) because I am loving this story and I can't wait for more of it... Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 09:03 CDT
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It's really interesting to see the thoughts of Rukia and Ichigo, not to mention to see Ichigo being so cocky ! But keep the chapters coming, can't wait to see the fireworks play out between them !
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a good chapter, Ichigo is such a bad boy! Cant wait to see their interactions, I love the way you write their relationships and this is already really great and they have only spilled coffee on each other. Wonderful writing as usual!!!
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 22:07 CDT
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great chapter! wow, Ichi hehe. I can't wait to see how they interact with one another when Ichigo finds out what she is doing there. Please update ssooonn!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 12:56 CDT
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I just realized Ichigo's problem. He has never been with a real woman before. Because all the smart girls see his womanizing ways a mile away and won't touch him with a ten foot pole no matter how hot he is. They prefer the uglier guy. Poor Ichi, he has never gotten laid by a real woman.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 11:17 CDT
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response for the first part: dear god someone needs to show him that not every woman is willing to give out their number so that he WON'T write down, or not every woman needs the 'I-call-you-later'. I guess right now Im so pissed that I want a Rukia who would do the exact same things to him and leave him suffer on the floor!!! I think Rukia had the potential to be a player herself after discovering the great world of pleasure. She shouldn't settle down with first idiot she sees, a.k.a Ichigo *grins evilly*...Now let me proceeed my reading response as I move further: Thast Rukia for you Kurosaki! In your face boy! and now I offically hate this Ichigo and want rukia to show him his place. he thought she was prude!!! She doesn't have to be!!! Yes, she might love control but so he does, its written all over his actions and thoughts. He needs to lose his cool =) last response: yeah thats "shit" for you! now Ichigo get down on your knees and repeat after me "Now I lay me down to sleep, Pray the lord my soul to keep, If I die before I wake,Pray the lord my soul to take." This is going to be soooo good...but I expect an unexpected approach from her. You know sometimes there are guys who open the eyes of women to other things. Rukia needs that eye opening, but she definitely does not need "this" Ichigo, he can surely have another Ivenka right?
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