| "Odalisque" Reviews/Comments [ 494 ] |
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 22:33 CDT
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Oh I can't wait to see the fireworks!!:) This'll be good!!:) Good chapter and definitely looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 22:20 CDT
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Oh I can't wait for them to start working together!!:) Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 21:52 CDT
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I think you're doing a good job with the Momo/Shiro side pairing. I can't wait till Ichigo and Rukia see each other again!!:) Great chapter!!:)
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Reviewed By: YuyuKawai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!! just perfect..hell yeah!!! I did love this chapter! Ichigo was a jerk ...sure, but I loved him XD, hilarious! pretty long chapeter as usual, GREAT, congratulations I loved completely *.*, like all your stories, can´t wait for the next one , seriously ..keep goin' ;D, hugs, Yuyu°
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 11:26 CDT
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exposing her golf-ball sized nipples Now that my friends is imagery. O_O;;;; Anyway, I kinda like the concept and the lighter tone this time around. It seems like there are several things going on that I hope come together (like Rukia's online dating service adventures and Ichigo's mankai abilities to seduce women). Let's see where this one goes.
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 02:06 CDT
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That Victoria Secret made me laughed my head off. Im dyin to read the nxt chapter :) This story is definitely my favorite fan fic so far out of all the other fan fics I've read.
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rukia's hotness definitely caught Ichigo already. Hmm...I wonder what's that manwhore's rating for Rukia...
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 01:26 CDT
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shit the only reason i set up an account is so that i can review your work. i love this! out on a whim i came here and was like "i wonder if odalisque got updated" and to my luck it was! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: cola1012003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't rate stories this high very often but this one is refreshing and totally enjoyable to read. i have no complaints and offer only congrats for a job well done i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 23:22 CDT
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Victoria Secret, he thought, nice… "You're going to eat your words one day, Kurosaki." I loved both of these lines! Just because, one, Ichigo's a total hottie in this story. ;]. And two, when Ichigo was saying that he would never get married blah blah blah ... it made me think of Murder My Heart.=] Awesome chapter! Update soon!!^__^
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:48 CDT
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"I think that once he gets over being a blushing teenager he'll wake up and realize he's a sexy piece of hotness. Fans self. :P" Haha. That made me laugh really loud. I loved it! This chapter was great! I loved how Ukitake gave Rukia all these compliments and she's like, "Don't let it go to your head ... okay, maybe a little." XD. That made me laugh as well. Okay, on to the next chapter!!=]
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Reviewed By: Mayatsu-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:15 CDT
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Oh hoh HOH. *glint* I think the smirk on my face may rival Gin's. *anticipates the next chappie*
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 21:46 CDT
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Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up! I've been gone for nearly a week and a half and I haven't had time to read!! I'm totally loving this story so far. Very original, like Murder My Heart! Ichigo's one sly dog. He makes me laugh. =] Great chapter! On to number two!!
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Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rukia better ask for a new bed. I would expect nothing less of her.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ewww, Ichigo is a manwhore. Rukia better ask for a doctor's note on his health. Lots of STD's floating around these days, I heard is 1 in 5 people. XD Ah, but I know Rukia is going to reduce him in to a lovesick teenager who can sleep with anybody else or think about anybody else BUT her. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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