| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like Kagome was caught with her pants down but hey it could have been worse. Both her and Inuyasha could have been caught literally with their pants down. Thanks for updating with another great chapter and I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Divide.. And Conquer? (is that the next chapter name?).. Well, now for the review. This chapter was short compared to the nice long ones we're used to, but I forgive you. Your work is far to good to stay mad at you for very long. I really can't wait for the sting/bite? to come back into play! All in all, I'm still sitting here on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 09:29 PDT
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Pardon the late review - health and work and a whole lot of other crap have intruded upon my time (stupid, stupid real life)... but I've been waiting for a free moment to gush about this chapter! *snickers* Mrs. Higurashi's teasing was really well-done... she's a great momma and it's nice to see her as more than the ridiculously crazy woman so many people portray her as. Your portrayal has her walking the line between "caring mother" and "acknowledging her child's strange future" without going overboard. LOL And their banter is great, too. You deserve all the kudos in the world for continuing to keep these two in-character after coming together... so many authors have them turn into pale imitations of themselves, saying nothing but cutesy, fucked-up loving things and never ever ever arguing again. *facepalms* Oooohhh that bite or sting, I'm betting is coming back? I also like your acknowledgment that Kagome does, in fact, require regular human contact. So many writers ignore it... Aw hell, you know what? Your fic is just a fabulous demonstration on how to avoid most of fanon's worst moments. You deserve a box full of delicious cookies ^_^ Hope you enjoy(ed) your vacation!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So that sting was something putting poisen or goodness knows what in her blood? Wonderfull story by the way! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 21:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic Chapter!!!!! good luck! have a nice holiday!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 21:13 PDT
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so excited to see a ch posted. Can't wait to read what trouble that "sinister" taste is. My mind has a few possibilities floating in it. Good Luck at the tables. Please don't make your readers wait too long.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 12:47 PDT
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Another great chapter! Even if it takes you until September, you won't disappoint us!
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Reviewed By: JennyLynn On: July 26, 2009 22:02 PDT
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I've enjoyed your plot development and personal spin on the Kagome-as-a-hanyou angle. I've also enjoyed finding the recommendations you've listed that I'd not yet read. If I may recommend one for that is complete except for a missing epilogue, "Sloppy Seconds" by Cutie Pie Hentai.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 20:02 PDT
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Now to get Inuyasha into football (which rules over baseball hehe) and he'll be set in the future. I really liked this chapter, even with the lack of lemony goodness.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! Lol, Inuyasha and Kagome babies. I can just imagine.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: July 14, 2009 20:45 PDT
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I really wanna see an Inu/Hojo showdown. I know Hojo doesn't stand a chance but I still love it when Inu gets to knock some sense into the idiot. Anyway this was a really cute chapter and I enjoyed reading it. Update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Jinxie On: July 14, 2009 13:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say that while I very rarely review (don't have much to say other than "MORE!!!" or in some authors cases "you're not texting you're WRITING learn the difference!") I thought I should let you know that I enjoy your writing and am a fan of several of your fics. Thanks for sharing your stories and please keep it up. J.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 09:54 PDT
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I usually don't review every chapter, but when I read a particularly good chapter, well - I loved it. Inuyasha watching baseball is such a great image to me lol! (And yes, go Sox - my mom and sister like the Yankees and my Dad and I love the Sox...our household is hellish during baseball season....) The red popsicle bit was cute, and I especially liked the conversation between Inuyasha and Kagome's mom. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:04 PDT
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Hope there will be more to the fic. Though I understand work takes away free time, dam the need to pay for things. Finally caught up, after a few long night of reading...worth it though. I think in a Ch. a ways back you mentioned how you wrote about Kagome need to be covered by blankets to sleep. I was suprised you haven't slept with no blankets until I read where you live. Live in the south and it's not that uncommon. I am in Fl and let me tell you, once summer comes there are many times I can't kick the sheets off fast enough and if I could get rid of others items I would. It is actually a very freeing feeling not being under sheets. Keep up the writing when you have time along with the ever funny male traits.
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2009 23:09 PDT
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Been reading this fic for two nights now and you have had me pulling almost all-nighters. I need to sleep damit. I have to take a what I want to be when I grow up test in the am," although I have two degrees...ugh hate my life. so...I thought I would stop here and say..loving this story. Also I was and still am a TMNT fan and laughed at the name referance. I can't believe I missed a Robot Chicken eppy. and one that featured Inuyasha!!! Now I will be on the hunt for it. I have read a few of your other fics on this and other fanfic sites and you always hook me in, no different this time. I always enjoy your acceptance of how HUGE of a baka you men are. Now to get some sleep so tomorrow night I can hopefully finish reading.
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