| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Title: women
Reviewed By: gaunt On: June 30, 2009 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said you wanted to know a guy who understands women. well i understand them perfectly. Also love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea but Viagra is well accepted apparently. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 01:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love when people incorporate demon claiming rules into a story. Everyone has such different ideals about what they would be and how claims are settled. And the fight with Koga had needed to happen for so long. I loved the chapter!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2009 00:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo well that sucked.... i was so happily reading few chapters each night until i hit the wall..... *sighs* i like growled when i saw i was up to date now... lol but i love this story ^_____^ cant wait to read more =)
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 23:31 PDT
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Lovely, lovely. I loved the many sips of lemonade in this chapter. As I read your wickedly, fun prose--I couldn't help but think of a little lemon-twist to the scenes I just read. There are many stories that have a Youkai Inuyasha having sex with Kagome. How about an out of control, youkai Kagome having her wild way with hanyou Inuyasha? Now that would be different and lots of fun to write! GRIN. Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
but it was also a trust thing too. And some times a persons trust needs to be tested, that way you know that they can be trusted... (which isn't a really nice thing but it happens, bu then again this wasn't a set up... set up trust tests especially when they find out really hurt people...)
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 23:03 PDT
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It was fantastic, realy. I loved it... I don't even know what to say, but I have this big grin on my face, so I think that should go pretty far in exspressing what I'm feeling right now... I'm not particularly happy that it took you so long to update, but I'll give you a break because that was perfect. Just please don't make me wait so long next time...
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Reviewed By: SexyCtarlCtarl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome. Please keep writing! I can not wait until your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. We always make it out the men are the only perverts. When in all honesty, women are just as bad. I like that you incorporate in the story that Sango is curious about Kagome's sexual experience. It gives your characters a more 'real' feeling. (and just in general, wonderful chapter!)
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Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for promising a fairly quick update. This story is too good to be left alone for long.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 21:57 PDT
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tee-hee, it was very fluffy but i enjoied it just the same. cant wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: May 13, 2009 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you are just a really good writer then. I'm also glad that you haven't had to experience that yet. A word of advice though. Really come to a realization of who you are now and when such a time comes... hold onto the you you were before it happened. It's easy to lose a big piece of yourself when you lose someone you love. Anywho, another great chapter as always. Lots of fluffyness and good stuff. I really like that inu let him in the bag. lol. Man your good at keepin these guys in character for the situation. I could swear i'm watchin the anime. keep up the great work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 01:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww...InuYasha can be so cute sometimes!!!
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Title: Previously know as Little_Red
Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 00:53 PDT
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I loved it! Gave me the warm fuzzys and everything, nice job... Now hurry and update... Don't take so long next time...
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