| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 22:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. It's good to see Inuyasha being a little softer. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: May 09, 2009 15:05 PDT
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P.S. Good luck on exams
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: May 09, 2009 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story... bout damnn time they got goin with the lemony goodness. lol. j/k you timed it just righ as far as i'm concerned. keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what else you come up with... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (NSI) On: May 06, 2009 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just got to ch18... poor kags... great job with... all of it. Can't say i'd want to change a thing... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: May 06, 2009 15:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY love this story. I'm only about half way through but i thought i'd review. I have always loved kag turned half demon. My own story does just that but even though i should have gone into more detail about it i decided moving the plot along was more imoprtant. But go you, you are doing exactly what this situation needs. I love the inner thoughts and how you keep the characters in character... or atleast how their char would act in the situation. Also, it might be a tough subject, but have you lost a parent? I only ask because i have lost my father and even though it's been a few years now, i still feel like you described. Your words touched on the subject in very true way and i felt that only one who had felt these things for the same or near the same reasons could understand them. Any who... keep up the good work. I'll read more soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 05:18 PDT
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verry nice. great chapter as always. i just can't wait to see sango's reaction that she had lost the bet with miroku! XD
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Title: Wonder 'Yasha
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your characterization of InuYasha, He's brash, he's impatient, he's tempermental, and he's a got a golden heart the size of Musashi country. Thanks for this work: it has given me much reading pleasure.
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 17:45 PDT
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i just remembered something, can u get Kagome another wepon? i mean something that she'll actually be able to use, like a whip or shurikens or...or...a NINJA SWORD! no, TWO NINJA SWORDS!!!!YEAH!!!
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Reviewed By: werewolfgirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 17:41 PDT
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AHHH!!! DAMN EXAMS! first i have to worry about whether or not i have to take them, and now their even messing with my regular readings. grawr! anyway,this was an awsome chapter! meloveymeloveymelovey!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. A perfect virgin's exploring each other lemon. Very well written. As always, I love your work.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! Sango lost! Great lemon by the way. Just dont make every chapter a lemon. The story always comes first.this chapter was the best place to put the first lemon. Great job!
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Title: Ah! So fluffy
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet satisfaction...they made lemonade on the forest floor, and Miroku won ha ha. I was siding with Sango, but I'm happy to be wrong. They were so sweet. (who feed shippo)
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Reviewed By: inukaite123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 17:57 PDT
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GREAT UPDATE! I love your story please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 17:32 PDT
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Fantastic! i take perfectly written chapter as an early birthday present. thank you, i will cherish it always an probably read it again... it was that good...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 16:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah...exams suck great chapter!
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