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Title: amazin story amazung writer
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2011 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it was amazing:-) You could almost feel the angt that Inuyasha and Kagome were going through in the story. I especially loved Sesshomaru's sons in this story loved their characters:-) I really liked the idea of reincarnation in tis story, and i can't wait to read your other stories:-D xx |
Title: amazin story amazung writer
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2011 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it was amazing:-) You could almost feel the angt that Inuyasha and Kagome were going through in the story. I especially loved Sesshomaru's sons in this story loved their characters:-) I really liked the idea of reincarnation in tis story, and i can't wait to read your other stories:-D xx |
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 02:52 EDT
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I don't know what the deal was in my last review. Maybe I read the chapter in snatches and missed some. Regardless, loved the story.
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Reviewed By: Star Weaver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2010 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you did an absolutely wonderful job on this fic! I've heard the modern day premise before, but this fic was far more creative and beautifully written than others of it's type. Though I missed Sango and Miroku, the addition of Sess's sons made up for them and their personalities were comical without seeming absurd which can sometimes happen with original characters. It was really nice to read through the fic without having to guess what you meant because your grammar and spelling were superb! The only thing I wish is that you had covered what happened to the rest of the family in you epilogue: do Sess and Karin have children? what about Sota, Yayoi, and Grandpa? A sequel perhaps? :) Overall I loved this fic and i stayed up later than I should have because I was so anxious to know what happened next! I hope you keep writing and good luck on future work!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME SOTRY!!! I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS FANFIC....I THINK U R AN AWSOME AUTHOR HPE U CONTINUE WRITING MORE FANFICS....
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 06:30 EDT
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i'm not sure if all of the symbols here are compatible but the basic HTML ones are: http://dmmarks.com/SpecialChars.html ♣ ټ ♥
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Title: Ending Already? Why?
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I loved reading both it and the "Time Lapse" off of MediaMiner. The storyline-superb. Characters? Awesome, especially the twins and Buyo. :) It was another great story. So why did I give it an overall rating of 8? I think that there's so much more to build upon before wrapping it up-the story should still be in progress. To me, at least, the chapters built up to preface...some cataclysmic event, I suppose, but the ending turned out to be somewhat anticlimactic. I just feel like there should be more, much more to this story. I still enjoyed reading it! I would strongly, strongly encourage you to continue this piece! If not, thank you for another sweet epic! ~Kiroku Ookami~
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 04:04 EDT
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;clubs: --should have been ♣ --been spending too much time at dA and their emoticons and plz icons --forgot my HTML ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 04:01 EDT
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*\o/* another wonderful story finished *\o/* ahh, the joys of the belated wedding night --and 'firsts'. LOLz ;clubs: loved sesshoumaru's mother-- quite a character! XD nice to see she was civil and even covertly affectionate... slightly. ♥
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 18:55 EDT
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Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this wonderful story! I love what you did with Sess's mom she so funny! I would love a story just about her driving her family nuts (perhaps in regard to a new grandchild - pup). In fact I would love some stories concerning Kagome, Sha, and all the rest that take place after the jewel is gone. You have created such fully rounded personalities that more stories would be very much appreciated! There are even story possibilities following Sha's search for Kagome's reincarnation in the future (Inu's in outer space?). Anyway once again Thank You for a great story!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 17:06 EDT
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Oh, I love Karin at the start of the chapter. I fail to see how Sesshiro could have found someone who is more his polar opposite. Maybe she'll be able to at least partially remove the stick up his butt over the next several decades? She and Sha are going to team up to drive him absolutely crazy. :) And she's asserting her dominance over the kiddies… Hehehe, guess the "indirect kiss" isn't going to happen. That was a nice moment. I also liked how the jewel disappeared. For weeks they tried to figure out a way, but in the end the answer was under their noses the whole time. It was so simple, and that's what made the answer so difficult to discover. The citrus was, in a painfully inadequate word, HOT. I've always had a thing for shower sex, so that scene really got me going. And I'm glad you decided to do the lemon, even though you said you originally hadn't planned on it. After so much sexual tension and longing, I think I would have felt a little cheated if we didn't see Sha and Kagome get rewarded for their patience and perseverance. And I was right about the bittersweet moment at the end, with Kagome passing away after a human's lifespan. Many stories grant Kagome a longer life, but I'm glad you didn't do that here. Endings are better when they aren't 100% happy. At least Sha has an amazing family to keep him company as he waits for her reincarnation to appear. Overall, out of the AUs I've read, this is one of the two or three best. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you for taking the time to bring the story to life and letting us tag along for the ride.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2010 12:34 EDT
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The red string of fate to lead things on, hehehe. Definitely an awesome ending to an incredible story so far. Continue to update will ya? Not just this story, but updates for future tales, and other current ones too. Not just a literal soon (within a few weeks) but soon as in soon as you're satisfied with what you've written. Thus, update again soon will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! What an amazing ending to a wonderful stroy. I have loved every chapter the emotions and thought provoking ideas you have put into this. You are amazing I can't wait to read your next story :)
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a very enjoyable fanfic - it's an excellent exploration of a 'what if' scenario, and the highest praise I can offer is that these still feel like the characters we know and love. The original characters are interesting and engaging without ever unwittingly becoming the focus of the story. As with all your other stories the writing quality is excellent. This has been a fun fic from start to finish, and I only hope there is more 'in the tank' so to speak for you as far as Inuyasha goes, because these sorts of stories are a wonderful compliment to the canon universe.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2010 01:39 EDT
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I hadn't expected the story to end so soon. Great chapter. Kagome was able to help a little girl and find a career in it. The death scene and afterlife were cool. Poor Sha. I felt really bad for him. Oooh, shame on him for the whole motorcycle thing, but that was a hot lime! ^_^ It's about time he got some! ^_^ I guess he'll be reunited with Kagome in her next life. The Lady of the West was a blast! LOL I see her the same way. Oh! I was just reading Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse the other day...again. ^_^
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