| "The Price" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: erinnight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Feni, its official: you are evil and I hate you. XD JK!! This is an absolutely FANTASTIC tale you're weaving for us! So magically canon in such an original AU setting! Please update soon. That last cliffhanger was a heartbreaker.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that Naraku is already dead, and I'm so glad that you immediately came up with another wonderful chunk of drama to keep our couple waiting for their happily every after a little while longer. (I wasn't ready for this story to end!) That's gotta be so hard for Kagome, battling with emotions she can feel, yet knowing they are not her own. Except, in a way, they are still a part of her, those negative emotions, even more so than being within the jewel, because they are Kikyou's emotions, and while Kagome is wholly her own person, Kikyou is still a part of her deep down inside. Too bad she can't just go back into the jewel to face Kikyou in "person" and tell her to knock that crap off! I'm really at a loss here, but something tells me that the jewel won't eventually start calming down on its own, like slowly training a wild horse. Kagome will have to remember Midoriko's words, and figure out what the "right wish" is. (Even though I'm pretty sure we all know what the right wish is, if you're going to take the manga's lead on that one.) Whatever you decide to do, and however you decide to do it, I know it'll be fabulous, and I'll be with you every step of the way!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 19:47 EDT
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yes, you fried him! kikyou did tell her that he couldn't be trusted... one wonders how she is going to quell the fear of white haired hanyou/youkai that kikyou has instilled into the jewel and what 'the right wish' will be (since that may be the only way she can live with her husband). &clubs. a rather exciting battle-- i thought the question about whether the rug matched the curtains was cute. *chuckles* ♥
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the battle with narakage was quite difficult for kagome and the others... looks like they were able to defeat him though... narakage is dead right?... but now they're having problems with the shikon jewel... why - what's wrong?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think it is Naraku's doing that is screwing up Inuyasha's and Kagome's relationship. It is Kikyo, or the memories/soul of Kikyo that is inside the jewel. Obviously, she hasn't gotten over what happened, blames Inuyasha and his kin. So I guess Kagome needs to go inside the Jewel, and smack some sense into it and its inhabitants. Well thanks for updating and I hope you are having a nice fall. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: e e eeevil women da na na na ah na
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooh!!! That damned Kikyo!! I could just slap her. Or cry cause I love the silver hair and puppy ears. AAH!! She's going to figure out the right wish right? RIGHT!!? (imagine me shaking your shoulders in desperation ok) I'm have a fit over here. But at least pervy wervy Narakage got his punishing. That was fantastic by the way.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 21:52 EDT
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Oh wow! Naraku is such a bastard! Poor Tsugane. I feel so bad for the poor guy. And now, Inuyasha and Kagome are going to have problems until Kikyou is dealt with. Gah! Awesome battle scenes. I loved how Inuyasha did in Jakotsu. Ah Uhn was full of awesome! The part with Kagome in the ashes was nice. I think you probably could have bled it for the angst a little more before you revealed her though. Heheh. Aw, it was so sweet of Sess to take Buyo up to the roof. Maybe he needed some time out. Poor guy. I can't wait to see him and Karin get together. ^_^ I imagine it will be a rough road for him. Can't wait to see how Inuyasha and Kagome work through their newest problem. ^_^ Thanks for the quick updates and for writing!
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Title: Ooh ooh ooh...
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 17:50 EDT
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...tentacle sex! You shouldn't have! Of course, it *is* my birthday tomorrow.... Another terrific chapter. Great suspense, great pacing. Moar, please!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chappie. I hope they crush Narakage!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 23:06 EDT
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I am not a big AU fan, BUT yours is great! I love how formal everyone is (most writers have everyone acting like Americans)they seem much more realistically Japanese. Please do not keep us cliff hanging too long!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww..... i wanted to know how Kagome is going to kill Naraku!! lol i was happily here reading until i went to click the next chapter, and found out there wasnt any >.> anyways even though Jakotsu is evil, i still freaking love him XD and im just so... i dont know what to say really, i was too into reading that i cant summarise it all up into this... coz im afaird its going to take whats left 3062 but i cant wait for the next chapter.... and i dont know if the next one is the last but you gain a reader ^___^
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 20:48 EDT
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Ok, I'll admit it; I laughed at some of Jakotsu's antics. Teasing Souta about comforting Mifune, his reaction when Sha and the others land... Of course, I felt bad about it afterwards. I hope he gets a horrible death, and soon! Have I told you that you're really good at writing evil, deranged individuals? Case in point: I've never seen Naraku portrayed as insanely wicked before. But it's believable at the same time, not cliche. Know what I mean? My mind is kind of muddled; I'm still reeling from that killer cliffhanger! I'm not even going to try to guess what's going to happen next. I'll just sit here twiddling my thumbs until the next update. Oh, before I forget, I also wanted to compliment you on a fine battle scene. It was fairly short, but effective and exciting nonetheless.
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Title: Quite a Feat!
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an accomplishment--a non-gratutious tentacle sex scene that actually contributes to the plot. I stand in awe. And I liked the Inu clan in battle bits, too. Most enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 05:32 EDT
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i do believe you have sufficiently portrayed naraku's twisted and sadistic evil-- good (?) job! ♣ poor kid-- she's going to have to have a good bit of post trauma therapy. ♠ exciting chapter-- evil cliff... ♥;
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2009 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that their plan to get souta and karin worked but now it's kagome they have to get back... hope they finally find a way to defeat the enemies... why did kagome scream?... what will kagome do?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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