| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tori On: April 10, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved this chapter! I wish you would've had Goku like "accidentally" hit that fat blob guy *(can't remember the name) a little too hard or something. Oh well, just so you know that I enjoyed this chapter! Let the good chaps roll in!
-Tori |
Reviewed By: Tori On: April 10, 2003 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this fic strange compared to others I've read. But even though it isn't as engrossing, I'd still like to see what happens next...
-Tori |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:09 CST
Comment/Review:
nonono! you weren't abandoned at all!! We all ran off to our sketchbooks to draw pics and try and get a hold of that video!! I know I wanna see it!! and also, could you send me a link to the second hidden chapter? my email is
chibi_hoshi@hotmail.com
Thankies so much! And now I'm off to read the next chapter and find my sketchbook. Sorry it's been a while since I reviewed, working 10 hours a day will really cut into your internet time. anyway, keep up the GREAT work, and I hope I can eventually get my wings on that video.. you'll have to send out waterproof versions, you know... otherwise we'll all ruin the videos we get cause we'll be drooling all over them.... talk to you soon!!
*Giggles and flutters wings, raising chalice of honeysuckle nectar and pulling out sketchbook from underneath mushroom-cap*
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: Mara On: April 03, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must have the second hidden chapter ..... yaoi is sooooo yummy ^_^ especially with a SM twist... keep it up you two .. the story is one of the best i've ever read !!!!!
NightTerrors81@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: April 01, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm # 100!!!! ^____^ yay! I can't wait till you update. I have become obsessed with your fanfic. updateupdateupdate soon okay?!
*gives you candy and DBZ plushies* type faster!
--byes! |
Reviewed By: Lully On: March 31, 2003 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I always have to come here to finish reading. I don't receive email form list...go there to read and it truncates the message. Ah....wish I was thinking more clearly. Sorry if this review is lame but I wanted to make sure that I let you know...still reading...still enjoying...still anxious for the next part. Have to say the whole Vegeta taking care of Goku part was heartwarming. And...adored Raditz' perspective on the prince and Goku. Poor Goku...he is rather clueless, but not all his fault. |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table next to Dark Serapha's nest of fluffy pillows, sipping vodka spiked lemon ice (the only way to drink lemonade) from that little darlin' Chibi Gemi, are our dedicated reviewers A'nore and L'orn and their favorite boys Jeice and Zarbon.*
L'orn: First I just want to tell Dark Serapha, Thank you, your little recreation drug worked wonders on Zarbon. *leers suggestively at the still drug dazed Repta-jin*
A'nore: I'm so glad Jeice is so compliante now, I like my toys to know what's happening to them. I like them responsive. *runs long manicured nails down Jeices spine watching him tremble in fear*
L'orn: Whatever. *waves her hand and ignores twinny's comment* I actually prefer my pets eager and willing, if you know what I mean. *purrs as Zarbon nibbles her ear*
A'nore: HENTAI!
L'orn: Of course! *licks lips then smirks*
A'nore: Let's just review, okay? *eyes narrow dangerously* I'm sure no one wants to know about your night life.
L'orn: Jealous, lovely? *leers at twinny* It's not just limited to the nights...*evil smirk*
A'nore: Forget it. Now down to the real business of reviewing...Um...Goku's naiveness is adorable and I love how Vegeta gets so angry at the act, and doesn't realize Goku really doesn't know what's going on.
L'orn: It doesn't matter where in time those two are. Goku is always clueless and Vegeta's too stubborn to help him out...*rolls eyes*
A'nore: The fight scene was awesome...and I love how Vegy came to protect his Kaky... *grins happily*
L'orn: Almost as good as some hot monkey sex would be right about now...* winks and smiles encouragingly at DS and Rogue* Any time you ladies are ready, of course... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Hot monkey sex...hehehehe....
Y. Gemi: Shut up, you're the one who said that. Pervert.
Oh? I'm not the one trying to catch Jita and Kaky in a romp.
Y. Gemi: (blush, hides video camera behind back) I am NOT!
Kurai: (snorts) You're BOTH pervs. Now shut it and gush compliments to the Authoresses.
Angsty goodness!!
Y. Gemi: Fighting!
Jita protecting his Kaky!
Y. Gemi: Fighting!
Kurai: You're redundat.
Lemon Ice!!
Y. G. & Kurai: Huh??
I brought lemon ice. (points to a mobile cart) Among other things.
Both: why?
To share with anyone who wants it. I feel bad for missing the block party, so I figured, if it's ok with D.S. and Rogue, that I'd bring some lemony treats to tide everyone over with. (Grins and produces vodka) This makes it all even better, especially the lemonade.
Y.G.: So this is what we're going to do from now on? Pass out spiked lemonade?
Yuppers!! ^_^
Y.G.: WHOOHO!! LET ME AT IT!! (attacks cart with a vengance)
Kurai: (tackles Y.G.) Not now!
Hehehe... (hops around happily) This is going so well! And we get see what Older, crochety Vejita is up to. Is he being affected by the timeline? You would think so...(notices the big pile of pillows D.S. is on) OMG!! Pillows!! Evilsoftbadnessnonono!!!!!! (dives into the lemon cart)
Y.G. & Kurai: Udate soon please! (glance at the mildly shaking cart) ...she's going to need a good reason to come back out...
Later Dayz & TAnx!! ^_^
Kurai, Yami Gemi & Chibi Gemi (currently indesposed) |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm reading! I'm reading! *ducks head in shame* The chapters are really good, I swear. Because of you two I've become a Zarbon/Jeice fanatic!!! LOL!!! The hidden chapters were just delicious! (And no, I never emailed for a link. I just clicked the dropdown box and found them listed there. *smirk* That's probably why you've got 100 or so hits.)
*grins and pokes dyn* Poor girl is terrified! What did you say you were gonna do, dyn? Teach her a lesson of some sort!? *snicker* Wish I could be there to see THAT lesson!!!
See you two demons around DBX!
~Jady |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
exuse me!
what is this?!
you wont give me what i want unless i walk amongst your.. pathetic drooling corner street slaves!
*turns her back on them* i really dont think so!
*waves her hand at her expensive golden boots* how will i ever get these clean if i trundle my way amongst the grime and milduew of the peasents that line your little sham.
pah.. never.. i refuse!
*suddenly smirks, a glint of fangs protruding over her lower lip*
though.. perhaps..*giggles evilly*
i AM rather thirsty.. perhaps i could.. how should i put this.. clean up the scum?
i mean who knows what rotten fiends are prowling about.. threatning your customers.. i mean i know you have those two yummy saiyans.. but since they are too busy *playing around* half the time..
perhaps i could.. dance about and bite a few necks?
you dont want you're sadly depraved little friends to get hurt now.. right?
hehehee..
it would be so much fun..*smirks with the delightful evilness of her plan*
*taps her lips with a finger, struggling not to burst into satanic laughter*
*a little giggle escapes*
BUT on one condition..
heh.. you do a favour for me some time in the future..
i wont say what, just when i ask.. perhaps?
*grins*
well.. tell me what you think..
*wanders over to her large window that looks out over the streets high above everything..*
*smiles grimly*
~The Great And Powerful..
Dynishra The Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know every time i try to review the computer flunks on me..
i think its the demons..
the little black metre demons..
any way.. this story is definatly a masterpiece.. i think ill print it out and glue it to my walls..
that way i can read it every day.. >>
any way..
great story guys.. girls ..kittys.. demons.. what ever you are.
i love it, im not ashamed to say.
it would be nice if you could send that linky to me at, dynishra@hotmail.com.
*hums to her self and glances out the window of her 40 storied penthouse.* ho hum
well girls if you want to read my sad depraved story, Distant Light Years at fanfiction.net, then the very evil sequal i am in the process of creating called fall of the lost.. all about evil trunksie..
well chow then..
~The Great and Fantastic Dynishra The Vampire~ |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around guiltily*
Oh the shame, oh the humanity...
Yes, please send the link for the hidden chapter. I must know what Zarbon has in store for Jeice.
MelizaMac@comcast.net
*Sigh* |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 11:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Written like the godesses you all are, as always ^^ |
Reviewed By: Saijin princess On: March 15, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very original and well written. The characters have been portrayed exactly. |
Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(pops head out of a giant pile of papers) GAH!! Bout time I got out of that evil bog of homework... SOOOOOOOO Sorry for not reviewing for such a long time. (latches onto street signs) I MISSED YOU ALL!! (CRIES)
Kurai: -_-;; baby....
Shut up!! (sniff) In any case, D.S., Rogue you two are still beyond compare! This epic rocks and we wait with bated breath for every new chapter!
Kuari: Kaky really is a bit dense about the whole 'Game' thing...I feel kind of bad for him.
Yami Gemi: YOU TRICKED ME!! KAKY AND JITA WERE NOT BACK IN THE ALLEY!! (shakes video camera) A TAPE OF A WALL!!
Hehe....silly cherub. Well, we look forward to the next chapter!!
Later Dayz & TAnx!! ^_^
-Chibi Gemi, Kurai & Y. Gemi |
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