| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi it's me again ! Just had to tell you that the sceene where Goku cares for Vegeta and keeps him warm went straigt to my heart. Soooo lovely !!!
Und ähähm.... kannst'e mir das 2. verstecke Kapitel schicken ? villa-chinchilla@gmx.de
Habe die Ehre
*Bows low*
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good, gooooood, getting better by the moment !!! This is just beyond words and I'm so fazinated by the development of the characters that I can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter !
*cheers* Keep the teriffic work up ! Reading your stories really makes my live worthwile *happygrin*
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: March 03, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic rocks!! I love it!!!! ^.^ Woooow! I'm so glad my sis told me to read this! I can't wait to read the next ch.! Keep up the good work!
btw-my e-mail is teddy1999@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
*glomps you both*
that was spectacular (sp?) as usual!! you two never cease to amaze me ^_^
The hidden chapter was... um... well, lets just say that my views on Jeice and Zarbon have been altered considerably... I still think Zarbon is cool, more so now that I see the darker side ^_^
and Jeice... well.. I usually don't feel pity for one such as he, but DAMN... POOR GUY!! I'm really happy that he didn't die from it though... I've grown fond of him in a way
and awww... Goku and Vegeta all curled up... how sweet ^_^
yes yes SaintMe... have patience... how long is THAT gonna take?? *smirk*
Im sure, no matter how long it be for the hot monkey sex to surface, it will be worth the wait ^_^ you two rule
and, I WANT THE SECOND HIDDEN CHAPTER!!!
sweetie_can_kick_your_ass@yahoo.com
send send send!!
I love you two!!
update sooooon!!! |
Reviewed By: Kikoro On: March 02, 2003 15:28 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG that was :drools: excellent! More more yaoi goodness! I want that second hidden chapter! please please! anywhere i dont care, here fanfiction.net it doesnt matter to me, as long as i get my yaoi fix. Oh and i loved the ending, awww so kawaii! Goku and my Veji-chan all curled up and sleeping. cute!
e-mail me the link! Kikoro_san@hotmail.com Onegai! |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:45 CST
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Hey I really love your fic. I am not, however, thrilled at the characters changing every five sentences, but that is something I will have to live with. I would really like the link to your hidden chapter. My e-mail address is on my profile. So you can go there. Keep up the good work and if you can add more angst. I love it. |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:45 CST
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Hey I really love your fic. I am not, however, thrilled at the characters changing every five sentences, but that is something I will have to live with. I would really like the link to your hidden chapter. My e-mail address is on my profile. So you can go there. Keep up the good work and if you can add mor angst. I love it. |
Reviewed By: Mariel On: March 02, 2003 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote out a long-ish, properly thought out review for this, but then my computer declared that the window had performed an illegal operation and shut it down. For no apparent reason. So your stuck with this:
This fic is incredible. Just...wow. You're left with a feeling of mild awe at the end of each chapter, and the knowledge that you cannot write a review that would do it justice. So I kinda gave up on trying to ^_^; Sorry.
Anyhow...put me down for the hidden chapter? |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 04:39 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is sooo good! I luv it! Please update very very soon!! |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa... This fic has like gone to epic lengths already and Goky and Geta aren't even in the sack yet. O_O;;; Still, I'm enjoying the read quite a bit and I want to know more about this second hidden chappie... *grin* The only thing that bothered me was the thought of a pink planet. I had horrible visions of Chibiusa shaped clouds. *gags* I don't even want to think about a pink planet every again. I also want to know more about the fishie people. It has been such a while since I watched DBZ, that I'm feeling a bit rusty on the types of aliens. *curls up into a shameful little ball of fur* Ah well, I have the DVDs, I can catch up again some time. I can't wait until the next chappie, keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: March 01, 2003 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo... damn, didn't see THAT one coming... but still... still good. U can really keep ur readers in suspense. ^_^ Don't think anyone else has tried that pairing before, and u get quite the... "cultural experience" from that Repta-jin and, um, whatever race Jeice is...
*ponders upon what Jeice's race is called for a moment then ADD sets in again and she continues her reveiw*
And that post almost-rape scene, where Goku and Vegeta r all cuddled up.... ^-^ Soooo kawaii... Awwwwwwww...
*curls up deeper in her hammock and yawns*
Mm... I'd leave a longer review, but I'm not coherent enough at 1 in the morning... Oh, and I'm definetly interested in any hidden chapters u might make in the future
psycho1828887@yahoo.com
Just drop me a line! I'll see u at the next chapter update! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: March 01, 2003 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
hmmm...a little more blood than used to, but hey! always keep an open mind! yes, i am back at your corner! i seemed to have picked up a boost of self-assurance or somethin'... anywho, would love to read your other hidden chapter, am so totally relieved that fotm is still being worked on, blah blah blah... i am the queen of mindless drival^-^'
my e-mail is mistressbythearts@gundam-wing.net
yes, it is rather long. *coughs* urm.. great story! gotta run! au revoir! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: March 01, 2003 05:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say. There is not much left only that both chapters are awesome and very amzaing. Sure it was not the lemon we all waited for, but you get not everyday a fanfiction with zarbon and jeice in it. i would not mind to be able to read the other hidden chapter too.
i have eventuel read to much moneky moon from firecracker, but somehow i can not get the idea out my mind goku being with his brother or his cousin (or whatever he is)tales in a roll and a furios zarbon.
for the saiyajin word in the titel. i don't have a clue. that could be means anything from mating terms to destruction and power and pride.
but i can tell you both you are doing a really great job. i am enjoying each chapter so much that i read it more as once. your both should
made more out of yor writing talent. maybe
trying to write a book with a orignal story.
you too a good enough for a try. |
Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light,we find our dedicated reviewers, panting desperately from the onslaught of emotions this chapter has invoked. Neither is to proud to beg Dark Serapha and Rogue for the Second Hidden Chapter! After reading the First Hidden Chapter they decide to aquire a couple of new pets, since Dark Serapha and Rogue are so overly protective of their own Saiyan toys. *POUTING*
A'nore: "Oh my my my!" *breathes heavily while she fans herself rapidly with the pages from this awesome chapter and gulps downs yet another pina colada* "L'orn you have to read the the hidden part with Jeice and Zarbon again."
L'orn: *rubbing ice cubes down the curve of her throat letting it cool down her rapidly beating pulse* "Oh I did! You know how much I love my pretty Zarbon and I've always hated that red skinned lunatic. But then I'm a bit of a sadist at heart myself. Besides Jeice deserved it, he almost got Vegeta! Bad Bad Jeice!"
A'nore: "Now that's no way to talk about my
little Jeicy. After all red is my very favorite color." *pulls chain and drags forward the still mangled and beaten red skinned beauty and eagerly pets his white mane while crooning quietly to him* "Poor poor baby, Zarbon was such a horrid meanie! We'll just have to make it up to you now. Won't we? L'orn make your pet be nice to mine!"
L'orn: "I thought he was very nice. I know I enjoyed it! * Zarbon is elegantly sprawled on the ground next to L'orn's feet, leaning against her while she runs her hands through his lovely long green hair the strands flowing through her fingertips, while he smiles wickedly at the terrified Jeice cowering behind A'nore*
Zarbon: "Yes it was good wasn't it? Would you like a repeat performance? I am more than Up to it." *Licks his lips at the hentai thoughts while Jeice screams and tries to chew through his chains to get away*
L'orn: *purrs softly while stroking her favorite evil pet, then smirks evilly* "Sounds Yummy, but let's save some for later, Lovely. Besides I need to ask Dark Serapha where she got that nice little drug Jeice used on our favorite saiyan boys, I was wondering just how effective it would be on a certain Repta-jin."
Zarbon: "Aaaarrrgh." *tries frantically to tear himself away from L'orn's clinging hands* |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still waiting for the hot monkey sex....but poor Jeice. Wait, I'm not supposed to feel sorry for the bastard.....
Great story, although I find it hard to believe that even Goku is that naive about Zarbon.
Nope, I'm not even going to try to guess what the title means....I'm lousy at that.
Ummmm....this is just a little thing, and just one of my pet peeves, so ignore as needed, but lose and loose are two different words....sorry... *ducking for cover* |
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