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| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jam (to family) Dilan (to friends) On: February 27, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG , I demand to know what hapend next ,I cant wait till the next chapter comes,
::I'm Going Scream If I Wait Any Longer:: | Reviewed By: Jam (to family) Dilan (to friends) On: February 27, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG , I demand to know what hapend next ,I cant wait till the next chapter comes,
::I'm Going Scream If I Wait Any Longer:: | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 26, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Relaxes in a cozy little hammock she set up between two lamp posts eating the free chicken and letting her tail hang lazily over the side as chaos ensues*
Ahh... just when u think it doesn't get any better. Thank u, A'nore, but I do believe I'll pass on the pina colada. ^_^ I perfer to be the designated driver... well, once I get my license that is. Watching other people get drunk while ur perfectly sober sounds fun.
*Hands her drink to L'orn instead so she can drown her sorrows of Vegeta's difference in personality*
This is so cool, I've even finally got the hang of the font sizes! ...Well, I think anyway. I gotta remember Goku hates pastels... ^_^ Funny stuff.
But NOW I'm going to be thinking about the name of this fic until my brain starts to make connections... Hmmm... it could be about time travel... nah... or if it's a saiyan word, it COULD be a word for something that is genuinely saiyan... Like it could mean going into heat!! I even found a nice little quote in the A/N of Ch 2 that supports my new theory! ^_^
Rogue: *smirk* I was quite impressed by one particular assertion…. If I may quote...: "In'lar-anth" the new hormonal wonder drug..." I think I would like to borrow this from Ginia for future advertising if she has no objections.
Hey... what's with that look? Yeah, I knew what you two were doing to those poor defenseless saiyans last chapter, even if Zarbon didn't... And of course I must praise u upon it. ^-^
Especially since I heard about the supposed "sky-rocketing rating" next chapter. I look forward to it very much. ;) Hmmm... I guess it's my turn to bring the snacks next time?
*Momentarily considers leaving her cozy spot in the hammock before remembering her multi-useage purse*
*Reaches down into the denim depths to pull out her handy-dandy cell phone and calls for pizza*
Moshi moshi!... Yes, are you delivering right now?... Great! I'd like 75 pizzas with extra cheese, 82 with pepporoni, 54 with... What? No this is not a prank phone call! I'll have you know I'm a very important client AND friend of the Briefs family!
*listens smugly as the pizza guy stutters apologies over her little white lie*
Oh sure, I understand... They can be delivered to the corner of Lemon Ave. and Angst Drv.... Uh huh...Yeah...And 54 with mushrooms and black olives... 39 with everything on 'em... Ooo, throw in several gallons of Pepsi with that too... Just estimate... Mm kay! Just ask for Punker... Mm hmm, u too! Byes!
*Hangs up and puts her phone back into the bottomless pit of her purse*
*Pulls out Volume 1 of the DBZ manga and leans back to relax and await the next chapter grinning triumphantly*
Lemme know when the pizza gets here. I'll just charge it to my parents' credit card like that little bitch Bra does... Uh, ... I mean, ...like that little blue haired princess... Heh heh... 0^-^ You didn't hear it from me... | Reviewed By: Lully On: February 26, 2003 12:01 CST
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AW...finally we see a little spark of something besides animosity beginning in our heroes. Hmm...very curious about why Frieza wants Vegeta away from other Saiyans....other questions ...from earlier...just what was Raditz' purpose in being assigned to Vegeta? Anyway, really enjoying this fic. I adore AUs....and this one has so much going on in it. Hehehe....so Goku felt a little warm. I'm sure I would have burst into flames if I were in his position. | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phenomenal ! Please keeep up the good work I'm absolutely addicted *whooopeee*
Tank Girl | Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 04:39 CST
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WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW WOW!!!!! I think that sums it all up. I can't believe how incredible this fic is. The two of you have done a Marvelous job. and my guesses for the other characters? Jeice-Rouge, Radditz-Dark Serapha, Zarbon-Rouge. did I get it right?? lemme know! Other than that, you can expect me to become one of your regulars. AND I WANNA SEE THAT VIDEO TAPE!! You know, the one you recorded end of last chapter! (chapter 4) *giggles* And I think you're right. I'll never be satisfied with regular Lemons again... *sigh* That just means I have to come and pester you two! How fun!! *Flutters fairy wings* Anyway, I hope you have lots more waiting to be posted. Until then, I"ll be here! *perches on a mushroom cap* Now where did I put that honeysuckle nectar...??? *has idea and wings flutter furiously* Hey Vegeta... Goku... c'mere a minute.... *winks* ^_~ he he! | Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 22:41 CST
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.... punker182biatch wrote in very large, purple font. Um. Original.
I'm going to state the obvious, I don't like Zarbon. I never have, now I dislike him more! Kill him! Oh wait.. that would interupt the time line right? *snickers* not like it hasn't changed already. You don't seriously think that 'Geta could forget an Sayajin like Son now?
You know what I've come to notice? There are lots of showers in z fiction, or is that me? Every story I've read in the past 2 months has showers in them. Not that they shouldn't shower, coz then they'd be all smelly... but.. I dunno. I just noticed. *shrugs* not that I don't like the idea of those sexy Sayajins in the shower ;)
http://www.geocities.com/gogetaoo/shower_vegetathumb.jpg | Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 25, 2003 19:37 CST
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*snicker* ya know... I enjoy your notes almost as much as your chapters... silly people
great chapter as usual ^_^ ugh... HATE Jeice... stupid red skinned bastard... Although, I kinda like Zarbon in this story... *shrug* I'm a freak... sue me
and, of course, the building relationship between Goku and Vegeta is just getting better and better ^_^
though... as I've already stated... WHERE THE HELL IS THE HOT MONKEY SEX ALREADY?!?! ¬_¬
heh... I'll be waiting | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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A’nore: Damn it! Vegeta fed him! Waaah! I like my Saiyan hungry! Damn! *starts tossing pieces of batter-fried chicken to Kikoro, Chibi Gemi, Tank-girl, punker182biatch, Goku’s Goddess, Kureeji, Talon Sage, Xero Sky, Naturi, SaintMe, Jady and Dynishra the Vampire in her penthouse and any other unnamed individuals, then pours each a nice and large pina colada*
L’orn: *reading authors’ notes* Hum.... angelic smiles? Never had anyone say that before! *glances in mirror and practices her smile then looks up trying to find that damn halo, spots the one over her twin’s head and makes a grab for it only to get slapped back*
A’nore: Now don’t touch! I earned that feeding the masses. Remember the story of the fishes and loaves of bread? * waves her hand at the large group of people who are setting up chairs to watch the rest of this astounding fic, while eating fried chicken and drinking very strong pina coladas.*
L’orn: *now looking up for a fatal lightening strike at her sister words.* You’re tempting fate again! It is sacrilegious to talk about God and this story in the same review. Dark Serapha and Rogue write a much better story. Besides you know I hate fish, give me a very rare steak instead!
A’nore: I really liked this chapter! I found a couple of things that I really never thought I would hear thought or said about Goku and I just had to laugh. “Son showed his intelligence.” When? “I guess you *are* useful” How?
Oh and by the way, running around naked is *always* an option!
L’orn: What about what they wrote about Vegeta? Diplomatic and respectful? Relaxed and Calm? Acted so Considerate? Acted too Innocently? That is enough to make a Vegeta worshipper, such as myself, cry!
Wait!... Innocent Vegeta, isn’t that an oxymoron? *shakes her head in shames as she secretly reread this wonderful fic again*
A’nore: Poor sis, I don’t know how she’ll ever get over this. But I’m sure she’ll manage.
Oh by the way IT IS THE TAILS!--EVERYONE LOVES THE TAILS!
*looks around to make sure no one is listening before whispering to Dark Serapha.........“Pssts...Where can I get one of Vegeta's "souveniers" ?”* | Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: February 25, 2003 12:35 CST
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hi... um, i am new *blushes, looking at feet* just wanted to say that your story is awesome.*fidgets, smiles nervously* can't wait fir the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Kikoro On: February 22, 2003 10:40 CST
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Again awesome chapter. I have nothing to say other than, my poor Veji-chan! damn Jeice, Getas mine! How dare he lay a finger on him, only im allowed to touch him like that!.....*ahem* sorry for the rant but still i cant wait for more. *paces back and forth on the street corner* update soon. Onegai! *puppy dog eyes* | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(fidgets)
Kurai: (glances up from Dark Serapha's leg)...she's up to something.
(chains fall away) MWHAHAHAHA!!! (glomps Rogue) Awwwww!! (nuzzles) lovelovelovelovelovelove (bats at Rogue's tail, entranced)
Kurai: ZARBON'S SCAREY!! (squeezes D.S.'s leg tighter) JEICE IS SUNBURNED!!!
smutsmutsmutsmut...(still batting at tail) Smart Kaky is good...(pouts) want Kaky and Jita make hot monkey sex! (nuzzles) You such a good authoress.
Kurai: Yeah, so is Dark Serapha. (purrs) ^_^ They even better together.
Trio: More soon? (Son puppy dog eyes(TM))
Later Dayz & tANx!!
-Gemi, Y.Gemi & Kurai | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really addictive stuff, once started I just can't stop reading, uuuh this suspense ist teriffic ! | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cooool Goko's first encounter with this younger Vegeta's it's soooo fascinating and thrilling, can't wait to read more ! | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 20, 2003 18:02 CST
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*snickers* how's THAT for attention-getting? | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
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