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| "In'lar-Anth - Through Darkest Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: February 20, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^0 Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier... damn teachers and their "homework"...*grumbles* They're draining my mind power and I cannot think of any creative way to summarize how good ur workings r. *takes a look at the long line of insane fan reviewers* I'm sure it would be a bit difficult to stand out in this crowd anyways...
But as I said... journalism and creative writing have taken a toll upon my brain... I just have one thing to ask of u two... considering ur grammar.
" I humped and turned away, folding my arms indignantly. "
I ran into phrases like this a few times where our saiyans "humped" where they should have "humphed". And suprisingly enough, it was ONLY Goku and Vegeta... Coincidence or conspiracy...?
Oh well... they'd better be humping SOMETHING soon in this fic or I may have to get as aggressive as a few of ur other reviewers... ;)
PS- Thanks for the compliment... ^_^ it's not everyday I get called "too smart for my own good" *snickers and frolicks off to wait by the corner* | Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 16:19 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
u 2 have put alot of work into this... well at least it seems that way.
KEEP IT UP!!!
i am want more... no i NEED more :D | Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 16:16 CST
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Hey there. Just wanted yout o know how much I enjoyed this fic so far. You are doing such a wonderful job, I doubt anyone could do it better. Thanks for writing this and good luck with future chapters ^^ | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light, we find our dedicated reviewer A’nore quietly twirling the purple umbrella in her pina colada as she reads Chapter 4 of this rather awesome fan fic. She is blown away by the interaction between the naive Goku and the immensely seductiveness Zarbon. By the way she believes Zarbie’s character is written by Dark Serapha. When is Goku gonna get a clue? Unfortunately she is interrupted by the gagging, breathless remains of her older twin, L’orn, collapsing in the chair next to her.
A’nore: What happened to you? *raises one eyebrow in question, then goes back to reading*
L’orn: She choked me. *waves over at a smirking Rogue as she coughs and hacks painfully for a few minutes* I just wanted to touch Veggie, only managed to grab his hair when I really wanted to grab his--
A’nore: L’ORN!!
L’orn: -arm...What?
A’nore: Um...Nothing! I’ve got another great idea, though. *L’orn groans as she wraps arms around head and waits for either nuclear explosion or lightening to strike her dead*
A’nore: No, no really this is a good one! Much better than the last one! *A’nore pulls out several capsule and throws them on the table*
L’orn: Okay, I’ll bite. *winks at Vegeta, then indicates capsules* What are these?
A’nore: Well since you didn’t have much luck with Vegeta, I thought we might try a little tamer prey...my favorite Saiyan...Goku.
L’orn: Oh Yes! Sweet, powerful, cute, buff, cuddly, naive...I meant innocent Goku. *rubs her hands together in anticipation* Just what did you have in mind for your special Super Saiyan?
A’nore: Bribery! *pops open several capsules that contain buckets and buckets of deep fried chicken* Plus I’ve got a half a dozen gallons of my own special pina colada mix to wash it down with! Oh here’s a good one! How many pina coladas does it take to make a Saiyan drun..I mean... inebriated?
L’orn: Inebriated? Oh... I understand...big words to keep Goku...perplexed. *winks* I don’t know sis, how many?
A’nore : I don‘t know either, but it’s going to be so much fun finding out! Oh Goku! *waves large yummy chicken breast and a gallon of pina colada at poor starving Goku * Sweetie! Would you like a bite? I know I would! | Reviewed By: alfarrar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seated at an intimate little bistro table beneath the glaring of Dark Serapha street light, we find our dedicated reviewer A’nore quietly twirling the purple umbrella in her pina colada as she reads Chapter 4 of this rather awesome fan fic. She is blown away by the interaction between the naive Goku and the immensely seductiveness Zarbon. By the way she believes Zarbie’s character is written by Dark Serapha. When is Goku gonna get a clue? Unfortunately she is interrupted by the gagging, breathless remains of her older twin, L’orn, collapsing in the chair next to her.
A’nore: What happened to you? *raises one eyebrow in question, then goes back to reading*
L’orn: She choked me. *waves over at a smirking Rogue as she coughs and hacks painfully for a few minutes* I just wanted to touch Veggie, only managed to grab his hair when I really wanted to grab his--
A’nore: L’ORN!!
L’orn: -arm...What?
A’nore: Um...Nothing! I’ve got another great idea, though. *L’orn groans as she wraps arms around head and waits for either nuclear explosion or lightening to strike her dead*
A’nore: No, no really this is a good one! Much better than the last one! *A’nore pulls out several capsule and throws them on the table*
L’orn: Okay, I’ll bite. *winks at Vegeta, then indicates capsules* What are these?
A’nore: Well since you didn’t have much luck with Vegeta, I thought we might try a little tamer prey...my favorite Saiyan...Goku.
L’orn: Oh Yes! Sweet, powerful, cute, buff, cuddly, naive...I meant innocent Goku. *rubs her hands together in anticipation* Just what did you have in mind for your special Super Saiyan?
A’nore: Bribery! *pops open several capsules that contain buckets and buckets of deep fried chicken* Plus I’ve got a half a dozen gallons of my own special pina colada mix to wash it down with! Oh here’s a good one! How many pina coladas does it take to make a Saiyan drun..I mean... inebriated?
L’orn: Inebriated? Oh... I understand...big words to keep Goku...perplexed. *winks* I don’t know sis, how many?
A’nore : I don‘t know either, but it’s going to be so much fun finding out! Oh Goku! *waves large yummy chicken breast and a gallon of pina colada at poor starving Goku * Sweetie! Would you like a bite? I know I would! | Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 06:46 CST
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Heh. Silly Goku, messing with Bulma's inventions. You are a very very talented author. Your writing style is great. You write out every thought and intricate feeling of the characters, and its easy to beleive what they are feeling. The way you switch back from each POV is very cool, it is easier for the reader to understand why a certain character is feeling the way he is. | Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah...so wonderful...I look forward to loosing myself in the rest of this truly original and wonderful fic. YOu KNOW how I adore angst, ne?
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I've only had a chance to read the prologue and the first chapter...I intend to read the rest tonight and leave you both a review.
Serapha, you've teased and tantilized me with tidbits and pictures from this for a couple of months now...Kami-sama...even with those to go on, I still was not prepared for the sheer SCOPE of this fic.
As I said...I look forward to losing myself in this...just as soon as the chibi goes to bed. *grins*
*hugs Dark Serepha and Rouge tightly*
Later!!!! | Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh!!!!! EEWWWWW i hate Jeice! i hate Zarbon!
they disgust me with their gay pretty boyness!!
and and... eww i just hate them...
Oh well..
hmmm...*looks about her nice top story penthouse* its amasing how far i am from that dirty little street corner that i refuse to visit!
I WONT!
my lovely velvet will get ruined you know. theres only so many places you can visit with out it geting dusty. >>
besides i wouldnt be caught dead there.. oh wait i am dead.. damn it!
still i will not go! im quite happy gaining the um.. chapters through my handy laptop..
well any way.. if either of you are interested, check out my story Distant Light Years, it would be nice to hear either of your oppinions on it...
well chow for the mo..
~the great Dynishra the Vampire~ | Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIENT!!!
omg this is one of the best i have ever read!!!
*grabs a leather belt and straps it about her forearm*
im totally addicted! im a ..a... desperately insane fan! yeah thats it... hmm.. well... uh...
FANTASTIC!
*taps the vain in her arm so it pops up and holds her arm out*
i need another shot!
god damn it! i refuse to go to that street corner! thats just ...well dispite being insanitary.. its just plain degrading for a vampire of my standing to go to a...*spits on the ground* a street corner!
no way
i get my stuff imported! therefore i humbely beg you to up date before all my hair falls...well is pulled off my head ^^
i only bookmark the best!!!
hents the foretold story is snuggly bookmarked.
Able to make sense of my insane ramblings?
Fantastic!
Ok then... waiting .. impatiently for chapter two....
CHOW!
From the Magnificenlty Brillient and Majestic..
Dynishra the Vampire... | Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: February 09, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I am enthralled by your magnificent writing style and how you can switch like that! Please continue! Have pity on this poor soul! I am axiously awaiting the sado-masochism! Hope it is out soon!! Please? *grovel* | Reviewed By: nene2 On: February 10, 2003 05:05 CST
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update! me very happy! *grin* this story gets better and better. poor goku has to go on a purging mission. that's terrible! i hope he can stop it... somehow. maybe evacuate all inhabitants with MT?
And Jeice shall keep his fingers away fron Vegeta. I never liked Dodoria - maybe you can kick him again a little harder?
... mmmm... maybe even Dodotia is only a poor misunderstood creatute who cries in his sleep everynight... maybe not.
anyway, keep on writing. | Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...uh hello... >
i had just written that last review when to my shock and delight i saw chapter two had poped up.
I read that merrily, jumped off the net, and went my merry way for a few hours...
Next time i checked my emails..
*her eye twitches*...
uh... *looks about for dodgy individuals*...uh..
*whipes the sweat beading on her forehead*
hmph.. well chapter two was great! AGAIN!
Fantastic!
hehe... yes.. very... *bites her lip..*
you said something about blood in that email?
*licks her lips*
*grins baring her fangs*
i do so love blood...
That rich sent..mmm..
*growls low*
*blinks slighly* uh.. humm..
*shakes her head* anyway..
that shot made me all high and fuzzy..
but still
I WILL NOT GO TO THAT.....CORNER..
*clenches her fists*
nope.. no way!
*blinks rapidly..*
damn.. i need another shot.. please?
ack! i am begging?!?!
*gapes in horror..*
no no.. no im not.. impossible..
*turns her back on them* i dont need you and...
and.. that... story...
*twitches*
hmph..
i refuse!
From the...
Magnificently Paranoid
Dynishra the Vampire
P.S .. man that email gave me the hebbe jebbes O.O | Reviewed By: Chibi Gemi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurai: Look Gemi!! I found a chain!
(swinging on the 'Lemon Ave' sign) Oh good! Quick, get over here! (drops to ground)
Kurai: (wraps the chain around Gemi and the street sign)
HAHAHAHA!!! I'm not going anywhere now! I'll review every chapter and you'll never get rid of me!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! (smug look)
Kurai: That's all well and good, but whose going to write your stories?
You and all my other muses and personalities.
Kurai: What are you going to do for food?
I shall live on lemons, limes and angst pie! I shall never go hungry again!! ^_^
Kurai: Okies. (turns to Holy Authors and bows) Gomen nasai, but she's determined to stick it out here. If Gemi gets too annoying....do what you have to. Extreme force it advised. I'll check up on her every chapter.
Leave!! Go and write!
Kurai: (sighs) Right. Thanks for the great chapter you two. we look forward to the next installment soon.
-Later Dayz & TAnx!! ^_^ | Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 18:44 CST
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I was trying to catch up on this story last night, but the page had some kinda internal problems.. i was SO pissed when it died...
so ya, here's my review :) this last chapter was awesome (im not surprised)... and i find myself getting impatient! I WANT DIRTY SEX DAMNIT!!
*takes a deep breath*...
ok, you guys really are doing a great job in developing the relationship between Goku and past-Vegeta :) its all going so smoothly, but i still want hot monkey sex!! heh...
so ya, keep up the good work :)
I'll be waiting! | Reviewed By: Kikoro On: February 10, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh you have satisfied me for the time being, but i await more of the story. *sits patiently at Angst Drive and Sap Boulevard.* cant wait for all the angst ridden and mushy stuff, and i think i know where your going with the Jiece thing... the thoughts alone are enough to drive me mad! Poor poor Veji-chan! and poor Goku, must you torture him too? well keep the goodness coming i await the inevidable SM fest. | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
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