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Reviewed By: Kagome59 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:00 PDT
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GREAT STORY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND CONGRATULATIONS ON THE JOB. Hopefully your updates wont be so reduced and im so happy im the first 1 to read this chapter. Because im always up so late, hell i was up when you updated at in the morning.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:56 PDT
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Oh, wow. Ignore my last review. I didn't realize that more than likely there is a new chapter coming out in the near future. Hope you update soon. ^^
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:54 PDT
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Nooo! It's over ;_; Atleast, I think it is. Anyway, very good job on your whole story. It's been a blast reading it from the start; quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I hope you start up a new story soon, as I am interested in reading it. Thank you for 'enlightening' me with your wonderful writing. :)
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 20:28 PDT
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Your story rox. Will Kagome ever find out her Grandfather's secret?
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Reviewed By: Elisa On: July 06, 2004 15:42 PDT
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Woah, that chapter was hot!! I loved how you portrayed the wedding night, the emotions were really intense. I'm feeling really bad for Sess right now. Kagura is absolutely refusing to try to work things out. Why won't she just forgive Sess? Seems to me that she betrayed him for worse then he ever betrayed her- which wasn't even his fault. She should give him a break. And I loved the Sango/Miroku scenes at the wedding. They just went public with their relationship to their families & their mothers are alreeady planning the wedding! Now I'm going to really expect their mom's to kidnap them or do something crazy because of the stunt they tried to pull.
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Title: update
Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really really good! You have to update soon! I want to see what happens between Kagome and Inuyasha when Kagome finds out that Inuyasha knew about Keiji's secret!
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 23:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps hands* omfg that was such a good job!!!!!! ^_^ do u plan on comtinueing it and having them have babys???? i hope u do this is such a good fic !!!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work! oh and update!!! if u continue i hope u do!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 04, 2004 22:12 PDT
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good story.
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 21:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's insanely difficult to write a good lemon, but you have exceeded the standards in this single chapter! Thanks for keeping this long-anticipated scene romantic yet real, steamy yet not raunchy. In short: you rock. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 20:35 PDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!!! i give that chappy a 10!!!!! seeshy and kagura need to stop acting stupid and get together!!!!!!!!!!!! but i loved the chappy!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiarashi-chan On: July 04, 2004 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story on ff.net, because I really don't like mm.org all that much, but I had to read the lemon... It was awesome!! Very well done, especially your first one... Update soon!
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Title: You're the Best!!
Reviewed By: Kaoru-chaness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! Finally!!! I can't believe they finally did it!!!! I was like waiting for that since this story began!!! Thanks for being patient with Kagome... you made this chapter worth the wait :)You made everything worth the wait. You're a great writer, you inspire me. I don't know why but i felt that i owed that to you. You make my reading experience the best. Thanks, to my favourite artist, thats what you are, the best... and I hope what i say makes you feel worth something more than the other writers. Because you are... atleast to me...You're the best and i look up to you. It may sound sappy but it's the truth.. thanks :)... Cant wait till you update!! Yours truly: signed- Kaoru-chaness (or when im not signed in...Your loyal and faithful Zoingy)
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Reviewed By: Moo-Moo-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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Reviewed By: Moo-moo-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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Reviewed By: Moo-moo-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD You deserve 20s in Style of Writing, Originality, and Enjoyment Factor. ^_^ It's just so unbelievable that you write so well... This is one of my top favorites. Trust me when I say you are not, in any way, bad at writing, lemons, limes, or any sexual activity ^_- Beautiful
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