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Reviewed By: Squishy (Irene) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad I remembered your username on here sicne 'The Ad' doesn't come up on searches.. I'm mad about that whole FF.net thing, ppl should make a protest about that i mean it's rated R the kids should know what to expect in that expecially when a warning is put up in the chapters too. Anyway, I'm 15 now ^_^ turned it on July.24.2004 =) I really did like this chapter and I hope to see a next one soon --Irene PS If Sesshomaru, like Inuyasha, could smell wether Kagome's grandfather was dieing then will KAGome be mad at him too?
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:15 PDT
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i LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!! i'm glad u updated!!!!!!!!!! i hope u write an Epilogue, as long as its a happy one : ) plz update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great story! ^-^
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really like your story :-D. Kagome's pregnant isn't she?? ^-^ yeah lol but I also got kicked off ff.net... cuz I had a lemon in one of my stories. If you had a lemon in your story that could be why... Unleash your imagination and free your soul my ass! *clears throat* anyways so I hope you'll update soon! ^-^ ~Silver Moon Dragon
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Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And thus all the lies and deciet have finally been revealed..yippy! Wow, another excellent chapter as always!! I really enjoyed the pacing and development in this chapter. I was especially surprisd and entertained when I found some humour admist all the gloom through the chain reaction that occurred between all the lovers. Just goes to show how females tend to rally together in the face of heartache. My pysche abilities are telling me to expect baby cribes and craddles in the future of your story. The latter thought in mind, I'm already dying for a sequel to this story where IY&K discover the joys of parenthood, but that's just my wishful thinking. Anyways, sory to read about the whole FF.net situation. That's been happening to alot of great authors lately. I really don't understand why certain people complain like that, but i'm still glad I can read you on MM.org and AFF.net. Update when you can, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 26, 2004 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello i just started reading this fic a couple days ago and to my surprise, you updated today! this story is really great and i've never read a sesshomaru - kagura story and the first is great! you started to make me think, well i wont say cuz that might end up happening, and i would hate myself for ruining it for everyone, and you probably would too. well update when you can because we all appreciate it. ficfan
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they better get back together!! update really soon. i love your story and i cant wait to see how it ends
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 17:48 PDT
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did ff.net make you take down the story b.c it isn't there anymore.....
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Title: where are you?
Reviewed By: ktakn_yeni On: July 25, 2004 14:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! ^^ i read the last chappy. i dont know if i reviewed it. and i'm sorry ^^ lol it was very awesome.. this two last chappys. finally i could see that damn sexy inuchan.. lol but my question is.. why havent you updated??? its been so long since you left a new chappy. i'm kind of worry now.. are you ok? or vacation? i dont know. i hope you update and if you're sick i hope you get well ^^ well see ya later bye! ^^
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Title: Important!!!
Reviewed By: s_a_k_u14@hotmail.com On: July 24, 2004 19:09 PDT
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Hi!! Well I'm writing, because i've been following your story since the very beggining, bt it's weird because i commonly read the chapters in ff.net and the other day i was looking for your story and it said that it didn't exist and then i tried with your "name" and it said that you weren't a current user anymore. Would you explain me that, or if you stopped posting at ff.net, but are you gonna continue posting in mm.org???, please tell me 'cause i really love your story
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Title: ff.net strikes again!
Reviewed By: LustrousJade On: July 22, 2004 05:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the main reason they deleted your account on ff.net was because of the adult content. It did suck big time that they removed it,but we should realy consider that they are minors lurking there right? I guess ff.net just wants to protect those little critters from reading fics that they should'nt. Don't get me wrong though, I'm not at all happy with the way things are down there either. BUT putting that aside, your story is really good! It's soo umm... addictive. You know, like opium! Hehe.. Ohisashiburi desu! *I think it means good work..my Japanese is not at all good* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ph34rTheEars On: July 21, 2004 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... so did fanfiction erase your account? That sucks, but please still update on here so that I can read your stories somewhere. If you create a new fanfiction account can you please tell us what your name is on here? Hope you keep writing and don't let this slow you down... (^;^)
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Title: Very Impressive
Reviewed By: Myanime On: July 21, 2004 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really really good. Even though this is a fanfiction and i love inuyasha it would be cool to see a non-fanfiction version. Hey if you even toned it down a little you could publish it.
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Reviewed By: Daedreamer On: July 20, 2004 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Much of what I have to say about your story was said already, on FFN. however, I don't think you have an acount on FFN anymore. please tell me if I am wrong. you know, being new to IY fanfictions, it took me a LONG time to try and find mediaminer and check up on your story. UPDATE!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Tueske Koenami On: July 20, 2004 09:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic I really do! But the reason why I gave you an 8 for the Enjoyment Factor, is because your chapters are TOO short for my liking! Great fic anyways I love where you are going with this! Tueske Koenami
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRR to FFN. Who needs them anyway?! Yes, I'm just another one of those people who have grown tired of FFN and their ludicrous rules and whatnot. I was there when they actually allowed NC-17 on their site and thought it was stupid to take it off. Now I believe they have gone too far. Too many of my favorite authors have been penalized and had their accounts either locked or deleted. Now that I've had my say, I thought I'd let you know that I had indeed looked for you here because I enjoy "The Ad" so much. I have not been blessed with time enough to have read your other stories yet, but be assured that as soon as is allowed I will be catching up on everything you have posted. Keep the updates coming! Thank you so much for finding somewhere else to continue on your incredible works!
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