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Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:07 PDT
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awww!! inu ish too cute, hehehe no little cake man cud show inu's greatness :P hehehe good job :P keep it up
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Title: AWWWWw!!1
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:01 PDT
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yay!! they're married!! tooo cute!! lol hehehe i heart it with a passion i love inu kag stories :D and this one has a great take on the whole thing :P
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Title: jdls
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heheh sorry that i scared you, i used to review chur fanfiction one but they took down your story didnt they :'( that was a sad day...lol yeah i love your story tho SOOO much hehehe your such a great writer keep at it :P sry for the decline in my reviews but i'll make up for it starting...now! :) hehehe -jdls (i think i have a mm account, i just cant remember what it is :S hehehe ^^")
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Title: yay! go me :P
Reviewed By: jdls [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:48 PDT
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heheh sorry that i scared you, i used to review chur fanfiction one but they took down your story didnt they :'( that was a sad day...lol yeah i love your story tho SOOO much hehehe your such a great writer keep at it :P sry for the decline in my reviews but i'll make up for it starting...now! :) hehehe -jdls (i think i have a mm account, i just cant remember what it is :S hehehe ^^")
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Title: The Best Of The Best
Reviewed By: humble-bumble On: September 04, 2004 04:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!i'm totally in love with this fic.After being recommended by so many authors, i HAD to find the famous,well talk about story 'The AD'.It took me like forever to find this story though i was a bit frustrated b/c of the hassel in finding this fic but in the end it was all worth it!I never read anything this magnificient and sensational.You are by far one of the most talented writer i know.Your style is complex yet simple.You dont overdo with details and try to balance things out.You have very few grammer mistakes and keep the pace going smoothly in this fic.i love the fact the the pace was absouletly perfect.The story itself should was so enticing that it left me at time being so caught up with the story.The limes,seductions,lemons makes the quality of the fic very life like.i love it. inuyasha's god like attitude*drools* he can seduce me anytime. I love the whole sex thing.Even though some People think this is all about sex, i knew you had a cunning plan to all of those delicious limes.Its just makes thisstory's originality and creativity an absolute wonder to readers like me. I love this story far too much for words.I really enjoy this story that you have giving us and have to thank you for writing it.Its absolutely wonderful.It left me stunned with awe and even speeshless at time.There is absouletely no words for me to tell you that comes even close to what i really think of this fic.WOW!A brilliant piece of Work.Stuperb.Stupendous. Marvelous.Amazing!I LOVE THIS STORY!!! |
Reviewed By: Roane On: August 31, 2004 10:56 PDT
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Oh, very good! Man, I need to check this site more often! I had tons of reading to do when I came back! But, I kind've liked both endings. I'm not sure. I'd have to say...the second one. I thought the characters were being smarter in that one, so I think I prefer it. I love how good you are at Inuyasha AUs, and I really enjoy that you pair Kagura with Sesshoumaru! Ah, such the perfect couple, yet so much angst involved! I think you should do another, hey? ^^ You're really very good!
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Title: AWSUM FIC
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ I loved your story! I'm kinda sorry to see it ending! lol by the way... great lemons! ^-^ Oh yeah! I said it lol. You made Inuyasha just so sexy ~_^ *sigh* Anyways I really wanna see more of your work! Ok? so! I'll be lookin! ^_~ ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Reviewed By: KrystalJade (from ff.net) On: August 30, 2004 15:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I had been reading this fic for awhile, and then it just suddenly up and disappeared from ff.net! I was sooo mad until someone told me that it was here! Great job on it by the way! I've already recommended it to others!
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Reviewed By: DiveneRiRi On: August 27, 2004 11:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow never read a story as completing as this one!! It was a pleasure to read such a thing and I bow down before you for creating it. I really hope you win and I know you will since the others dont stand a chance against you. Well I must leave you now. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked best the alternate ending, it was richer in details and excitement. I loved the whole story a lot, you are an awesome writer! The way you portraited each character was wondrous. I hope you write more Inu/Kag fics in the near future.
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: August 23, 2004 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say this is a good ending too! it explains more about what will happen and more clearly. but reading your alternate ending after the original one, it seems a little rushed (alt version). or maybe i read it too late at night=P... but i must admit i'm feelin more from the alternate version. I'M SO HAPPY I READ THIS STORY! well i proved that point in my earlier review =D I can't wait for your Lady of the Crimson Land!!
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: August 23, 2004 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! >cries< I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE THIS STORY IS OVER!! hahahah ANYways.... i must say kagome is lucky to have a husband that can still go comando! lol! this story has been AWSOME to read! I've had a ton of fun reading this. i can't wait to see when your next story's out. ooo and i must say Kagome has one big happy family! it's fun to read how kagome is a mother in fanfics cuz i always see her as a child, teenager, or just in love with inuyasha and yadda... well YOU'RE THE BEST! This story is a total classic! which means i 100% voted for you in the contest!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 20:44 PDT
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cools beans. great ending.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. First, I found it in FF.net and I always was very happy when you updated it every time. But I wondered for a while why FF didn't remind me anymore. Oh! I just know that you were kicked out off that web site. (why?) Today I found it here again and read it until the end. Wow! you are a talented author and this fic is really really great!! ^_^ I look forward to reading your next story! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: August 22, 2004 23:58 PDT
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I really liked the epilgoue. Bah, pardon the spelling. I think I liked the first ending better, but I'm not sure. They were both good. Anyway, hope you start a new story soon, I'll be looking forward to it. :D This one was great and you deserve being nominated for it--and winning, because I know this will win.
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