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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 03:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was awesome! you really know how to put it. I jus loved it...good job! I really liked the whole mating ritual thing...n the wedding wuz wonderful.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 10:14 PST
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I love it you rock you are a really good writer thank you
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading it for four straight days, I have to say one thing. I LOVED IT. It was very cute and very good. Keep up with your writing. You do an amazing job.
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Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: Lunar-moonshine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 02:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was really good! i loved it, starting with your plot lone! it was amazing, completely original and something that people would be interested in reading, it flowed nicely and the relationships didnt happen just overnight, yea they went a little fast but that had to happen, the whole story was fast! the next thing i loved was the characters, i fell in love with your characters, each one was related yet totally different, they had their own ideas and outlooks which made them realistic yet much more exuberent, you were able to keep all the relationships going (you had to backtrack a bit but that is to be expected) and were able to balance 3 at once, pretty good job in my opinion! you also did a great job in make the story enjoyable, i mean it sounds easy but i hate to tell you that you can have the best ideas in the world but unless you present them in a way that is appealing then there is no point! by the way i love your writing style, similar to my own but more mature and constructed (you have been doing it longer and you at least re-read it)all in all you just did and outstanding job, you took and idea you like and went with it, i'm very picky with the stories i read but i dont regret picking this one out! you diserve a pat on the back! awsome work! now i know you have a bunch of great ideas in you still! and you should share them! keep on writing! i know i'm not the only one who loves your stories! Lunar ~.^
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in) On: August 27, 2005 01:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's 2am now and I just finished reading and FAIHDGIOUSHODGIOH!!!!! *SQUEE OF EPIC PROPORTIONS*!!!!! Seriously, I LOVE THIS FIC!! And the two endings was a nice touch. Both are great, but I like the first one a bit better. I also like the few little "now if this were a fan fiction..."-ish things you put in there xDDD Very nice. So once more *SQUEE*!!!!!!!!!! And now I really need sleep before the rest of my brain deteriorates.
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Title: AWWWWWW!!
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: July 21, 2005 16:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really great story and I enjoyed reading it. Even though it was long the story was worth it. Thanks for the two endings. P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: AHA!
Reviewed By: Molly (Gothic_Smurfette) On: July 15, 2005 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fic on fanfiction, and it disappeared! so i found it tonight and browsed through to where i left off and i love it still!! great story. keep up the awesome writing!
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Title: Awesomness
Reviewed By: Anngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 17:36 PDT
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I loved your story, it kept me awake till twelve and then I finally finished it after being disrupted about 7 hundred times, I liked the first ending more to tell the truth, i liked how the discussion held more intimacy ^^, truly a fantastic read I am catchng up on all ur other stories, rereading Through the Rose Colored Lense and anticipating more great stuff from you~!! LoVe and PeAcE, Anngel
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 25, 2005 12:29 PDT
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Excellent story. I loved your version of the Shikon no Tama- basically how things SHOULD have happened had the two truly trusted eachother at the time. I liked the second ending better because Kagome figured out for herself that Inu really loved her, and there was also the little speach about trust. One thing I was kind of disappointed by was that Seshy didn't learn his lesson about taking advantage of the situation. A commitment like that isn't something that should be done without being fully sure of your relationship with the person, and so it felt ... wrong. But I guess that is just one of the major differences between SXKagura vs IXKagome. And the bash about how setting people up only works in convoluted fanfictions had me cracking up for a good couple of minutes :) Anyway.. excellent beautiful story. Had lots of fun reading it. Continue the good work. Oh yeah- and Rin was the cutest!
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Reviewed By: Litaa On: June 24, 2005 20:14 PDT
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I enjoyed this story, very long and well done. I loved the descriptions and how well you took time to develop their relationships with both Sesshoumaru/Kagura and Inu/Kagome. A story well done, too bad it had to end. I enjoyed the Epilouge & Alternative Ending also. I have a few suggestions: To go through and put thoughts in '..' those instead of quotation marks. It makes it look like they are thinking aloud, if you could? Maybe put the Alternative Ending in front of the Epilouge? Just a few suggestions. Overall I loved the story to death, I enjoyed coming home and reading it each night after a long day. Now, after I am done reading that I shall have to find another fanfic to dive into. So, I am going to venture off to see if you have anymore!
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Reviewed By: soulwriterchick On: April 14, 2005 03:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooohoooo! I just finished reading the whole thing. That was amazing! Personally, as a die-hard Sesshoumaru fangirl, Kag/Sess was my fave pairing in the whole story. I think you handled it really well. Not to say the Inu/Kag and Mir/Sango wasn't bad. I am just rambling... too sleepy I guess. Well. Thank you for this lovely tale. It brought joy to my heart. Sniff sniff. I will miss it.
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Reviewed By: soulwriterchick On: April 08, 2005 03:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I am loving this fic! But I had to stop to give you a review. I shall continue reading now!
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Reviewed By: Rawben(notsignedin) On: March 26, 2005 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeee!!!! so freakin good! i loved this fic! and you could totally do another fic based solely on rin/souta. oh! and i was all "man wouldnt it be great if hojo turned out to be gay?" and i was right! i love it when i'm right! lol, and when kag saw mirokus ass, that was hilarious!!! yey for you! i'm gonna check out your other fics... oh, and i like the first ending better.
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Title: Hoshiko
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:06 PST
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Oh!I forgot to tell you I liked both of the endings but thought the second was a bit better simply because it caused the two less heartache. I'm such a sucker. Oh and I loved the epilogue too. Keep up the good work.
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: Hoshiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW CHICA! You did it again, this story was just as good as your others! IT was beautifully written and I didn't find not one mistake, your creativity astounds me. Keep up the good work.
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